[WIP] Daisy the bubbly, Bimbo kaithrit herm.

[RoxieAdams]

So here is a character i have decided to try writing called Daisy.

She is was born a pure kaithrit with wings, and then was convinced to use the treatment and used throbb.

Her personality is (meant) to be super caring and gentle despite her often taking control in the bedroom. She is also a bit of a bimbo and has a slight exhibitionist streak. She also works for KihaCorp as a product tester

I managed to write 26 pages with out even realising, so i think i should probably submit some stuff for people to read. I don't wanna be wasting my time. Keep on mind i may rewrite tones of it.

So here is her appearance and the first few encounter scenes (sex scene written but not inclueded) . Hope you guys like it! (I'm kinda nervous (sorry for bad spelling, tried to look over it but its 3 in the morning and wanted feed back when I wake up))

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ALW1v3iDtANxlDrNLP7sJj90Se6N9Rp_5y1XqlL62Kg/edit?usp=sharing


(ps: I have written lots more but its all over the place at the moment and not ready to post it)

 

[Lancer]

I've read the first couple of pages, and it looks pretty good. I would suggest enabling suggestions though, the community here is excellent at pointing out mistakes or inconsistencies. Like how you refer to the Ausar girl as a dog, cat, and bunny girl all within the same page

One other thing I'd like to point out is that pure kaithrit don't have wings, so that should change to her getting them at some point after birth, as Fen is insistent that mods are not genetically inheritable.

 

[RanmaChan]

I've read the first couple of pages, and it looks pretty good. I would suggest enabling suggestions though

Yeah, I would be willing to help out with some suggestions, but it is locked. I forget to unlock mine all the time, ask Lancer, lol.

 

[Preacher]

A summary of my reactions would be








Okay I was lying about the jizzing part, doc's too short for that and there are no sexy times. She sounds like someone my usual steele a.k.a. me would go for if she'd at least get a chance to be in charge in bed. Don't get me wrong, I like dominance in characters but you'll find that not everybody likes to turn out to be the sub all the time.

 

[SoAndSo]

How did 8 foot tall become the default these days?

No, I'm not accusing anybody, don't look at me that way, stop it, I see those accusatory eyes, they burn into my soul, ahh

 

[Night Trap]

I've read the first couple of pages, and it looks pretty good. I would suggest enabling suggestions though, the community here is excellent at pointing out mistakes or inconsistencies. Like how you refer to the Ausar girl as a dog, cat, and bunny girl all within the same page

One other thing I'd like to point out is that pure kaithrit don't have wings, so that should change to her getting them at some point after birth, as Fen is insistent that mods are not genetically inheritable.

Some mods are heritable, it just requires special modding that is more expensive than usual. Something you just buy off the shelf though? No, not heritable.

 

[RanmaChan]

I seem to recall a couple of characters (don't ask who I can't remember) who had talk scenes about inheriting a cock or some other specific thing from a parent that had used mods.

 

[Emerald]

I seem to recall a couple of characters (don't ask who I can't remember) who had talk scenes about inheriting a cock or some other specific thing from a parent that had used mods.

Kelly (The Laquine on Mhen'ga) is one and the only one that says that. She claimed she got the double dicks and balls from her father if I'm not mistaken, but that sort of stuff from modding isn't inheritable.

 

[Lancer]

Some mods are heritable, it just requires special modding that is more expensive than usual. Something you just buy off the shelf though? No, not heritable.

Yea, only stuff like the Treatment is heritable, and even that takes multiple generations to start influencing minor traits.

I seem to recall a couple of characters (don't ask who I can't remember) who had talk scenes about inheriting a cock or some other specific thing from a parent that had used mods.

That would be Kelly, as Emerald said. She has been specifically noted to be in need of a recton for that though, so it's not canon.

 

[RanmaChan]

Ah, I see. Thanks for clearing that up.

 

[Noob Salad]

Yea, only stuff like the Treatment is heritable.

ya here that misters, its canon now

 

[Night Trap]

Yea, only stuff like the Treatment is heritable, and even that takes multiple generations to start influencing minor traits.


That would be Kelly, as Emerald said. She has been specifically noted to be in need of a recton for that though, so it's not canon.

No, you misunderstand. All mods are heritable the way the Treatment is. That's why the average penis length has increased 2 inches in Terrans since gene modding was invented, as well as vaginal depth, wetness, and elasticity. I'm talking about direct inheritance. People other than the PC can indeed have their gametes modded so that their offspring will inherit their mods. This is basically only done for people who have undergone extreme modding, such as from human to centaur, or kaithrit to naga. Both of the two examples I just used I got from Fen after asking him, but you know how Fen Whim works.

In those two examples though, the people specifically had their gametes modded so that their children would be centaurs or nagas as well. Other mods are simply a very, very slight and cumulative effect over many generations, and then only if an entire population (or the bulk of it) is using the same mod or mods, like in the case of the Treatment.

Kelly's thing with the Throbb is just weird and an outlier though.

 

[Noob Salad]

wow rude

 

[Lancer]

No, you misunderstand. All mods are heritable the way the Treatment is. That's why the average penis length has increased 2 inches in Terrans since gene modding was invented, as well as vaginal depth, wetness, and elasticity. I'm talking about direct inheritance. People other than the PC can indeed have their gametes modded so that their offspring will inherit their mods. This is basically only done for people who have undergone extreme modding, such as from human to centaur, or kaithrit to naga. Both of the two examples I just used I got from Fen after asking him, but you know how Fen Whim works.

In those two examples though, the people specifically had their gametes modded so that their children would be centaurs or nagas as well. Other mods are simply a very, very slight and cumulative effect over many generations, and then only if an entire population (or the bulk of it) is using the same mod or mods, like in the case of the Treatment.

Kelly's thing with the Throbb is just weird and an outlier though.

The way it's been explained to me, and how I understood it, was that it wasn't the base genetics of humans being changed to increase the average penis length by two inches, but the average length after modding was increasing. Those types of surveys only ask you what your current length is, and it's unlikely that anyone would actually answer a survey that asked what you were before you took mods truthfully, even if it was anonymous.

As for getting your gametes modded, that requires getting a completely separate TF from the one that changes how you currently look, as it is changing different cell types. Theoretically, as I understand it, you could look like a pure human, but kick out naga offspring.

 

[Night Trap]

The way it's been explained to me, and how I understood it, was that it wasn't the base genetics of humans being changed to increase the average penis length by two inches, but the average length after modding was increasing. Those types of surveys only ask you what your current length is, and it's unlikely that anyone would actually answer a survey that asked what you were before you took mods truthfully, even if it was anonymous.

As for getting your gametes modded, that requires getting a completely separate TF from the one that changes how you currently look, as it is changing different cell types. Theoretically, as I understand it, you could look like a pure human, but kick out naga offspring.

I don't know where you got that idea on the human endowments thing. The codex specifically mentions medical records, not surveys. You don't lie or leave out information on medical records, and for physical measurements, the doctor isn't asking you a question. He's getting a tape measure out and recording the result.

No, it doesn't require a completely separate TF. Mods are done via nanomachines. It's just a matter of telling the machines what to target. You are right in that it is hypothetically possible to have your gametes changed without having your outward appearance change, but it's just a bit of extra money when getting your crazy full-body TF to have the microsurgeons also alter your gametes.

 

[RoxieAdams]

Suggestions should be turned on/

How did 8 foot tall become the default these days?

Yeah i know what you mean, i really wanted her to be abnormally big so that it makes sense that she is kinda always in charge, but its hard to make her large but not giant with so many huge characters.

Some mods are heritable, it just requires special modding that is more expensive than usual. Something you just buy off the shelf though? No, not heritable.

I want the wings to be something she in inherited from one of her perants

 

[RoxieAdams]

I've read the first couple of pages, and it looks pretty good. I would suggest enabling suggestions though, the community here is excellent at pointing out mistakes or inconsistencies. Like how you refer to the Ausar girl as a dog, cat, and bunny girl all within the same page

Yeah sorry about that... i spent ages trying to figure out what the other girl was (settled on asur) so there are a few places i missed that need to be changed

 

[Night Trap]

Yo dude, you gotta make it so that people can comment on this, not edit. You're inevitably gonna get a troll coming in and messing everything up for you if you leave editing open to the public.

 

[Lkynmbr24]

Yo dude, you gotta make it so that people can comment on this, not edit. You're inevitably gonna get a troll coming in and messing everything up for you if you leave editing open to the public.

Lol, I JUST commented on the doc saying as such. I'm still only making edits as suggestions after I just realized this when editing something.

Thankfully, even if a troll were to come, anything they do could still be reversible, to a point anyways.

 

[Lancer]

I don't know where you got that idea on the human endowments thing. The codex specifically mentions medical records, not surveys. You don't lie or leave out information on medical records, and for physical measurements, the doctor isn't asking you a question. He's getting a tape measure out and recording the result.

I don't know what kind of doctor you go to, but I haven't experienced, or heard of for that matter, doctors who get out tape measures to measure hard dicks. Weird as hell, that's what it is. If my doctor asked me to pop a stiffie so that he could put his hands right up to it to measure it, I'd walk out and report the sicko to whatever organization he got his license from.

You are correct about it being medical records and not voluntary surveys (and I could argue semantics and say that going through all of those medical records and averaging them together is in fact taking a "survey") but in this case the result is still the same, the doctors are measuring dicks after the mods have been taken and recording that, not the patient's original length.

No, it doesn't require a completely separate TF. Mods are done via nanomachines. It's just a matter of telling the machines what to target. You are right in that it is hypothetically possible to have your gametes changed without having your outward appearance change, but it's just a bit of extra money when getting your crazy full-body TF to have the microsurgeons also alter your gametes.

You misunderstand me, I meant TF as "transformation", as in modifying the gametes requires a completely different transformation, not as "a completely different mod". We're on the same page on this one.

 

[Night Trap]

You are correct about it being medical records and not voluntary surveys (and I could argue semantics and say that going through all of those medical records and averaging them together is in fact taking a "survey") but in this case the result is still the same, the doctors are measuring dicks after the mods have been taken and recording that, not the patient's original length.

Medical records cover your entire life. It's not like a driver's license. People don't get a dick mod the second they slither out of the birth canal. There would be measurements from every point in the patient's life, including the time before they took the mod.

 

[Lancer]

Medical records cover your entire life. It's not like a driver's license. People don't get a dick mod the second they slither out of the birth canal. There would be measurements from every point in the patient's life, including the time before they took the mod.

Once again, let me repeat my statement. What kind of doctor measures someone's erect dick throughout their entire life, including when they are underage?! Dick size is not something that is recorded on any medical documents, especially official health forms!

Also, another point: Only the size once fully matured means anything, as it's really only then that any growth in the population can be determined. Measuring kids is literally just child molestation.

 

[Night Trap]

Once again, let me repeat my statement. What kind of doctor measures someone's erect dick throughout their entire life, including when they are underage?! Dick size is not something that is recorded on any medical documents, especially official health forms!

Also, another point: Only the size once fully matured means anything, as it's really only then that any growth in the population can be determined. Measuring kids is literally just child molestation.

Okay. Where do you think information about these things comes from in real life? It's not from surveys that people can fill out as they wish, and any halfway decent scientific or medical examination is going to record information about any past procedures or modifications the patient/subject may have had.

 

[Lancer]

Okay. Where do you think information about these things comes from in real life? It's not from surveys that people can fill out as they wish, and any halfway decent scientific or medical examination is going to record information about any past procedures or modifications the patient/subject may have had.

I'm pretty sure that nanomachines don't keep track of exactly what TFs a person has undergone, as that would be the only way such information could be reliably kept with such cheap and easily accessible mods on the current market. Such an ability hasn't been mentioned in the lore yet, and the nanomachines have been fairly well filled out, but that could have just been missed and isn't officially decided.

As far as I know, there is no scientifically proven worldwide average penis size. There are a bunch of small clinical studies scattered around from Western countries that are used, but nothing that actually definitive. And those were all on consenting, adult men. None of this measuring children's cocks from birth thing. Information on puberty is confirmed by a once-over, and by the child's parents, not extensive physical examinations.

EDIT: Once again, I realize the absurd conversations that can be found on this forum.

 

[Lkynmbr24]

EDIT: Once again, I realize the absurd conversations that can be found on this forum.

Absurd, but informative and necessary!

 

[Lancer]

Absurd, but informative and necessary!

Informative, yes. Necessary? That depends on if you think porn is required for human survival, and that that porn should be have extensive and coherent lore.

 

[Lkynmbr24]

Informative, yes. Necessary? That depends on if you think porn is required for human survival, and that that porn should be have extensive and coherent lore.

The latter, in this case, oh yes! The former, not so much. That would be silly.

 

[Lancer]

The former, not so much. That would be silly.

Then, by the power vested in me (by absolutely nobody), this conversation has been declared... NOT NECESSARY

I'll be getting some sleep now

 

[eveoflife]

How did 8 foot tall become the default these days?

No, I'm not accusing anybody, don't look at me that way, stop it, I see those accusatory eyes, they burn into my soul, ahh

I simply thought, female Kaithrit. Their females are known to be really big in height and bust. So I didn't throw 8ft out of "possible" for that race when I was reading it. We got giants of our own after all.