[WIP] Aina Expansion

[Evil]

Okay, over the past couple of days, I've been planning something of an expansion for one of my favourite characters, and in case you couldn't already guess from the title, its Aina.

There is a two-fold reason for this, the first obviously expanding on an underrated character. The second is that I want to push past my boundaries a little bit as I've been a writer for several years but have never really gotten into love scenes. So why not kill two birds with one stone, right?

Currently the main points I want to add to the expansion are the following:

• Captain Steele being able to give Aina gifts ranging from the Venus Pitcher Bloom to possibly a sex toy (one idea at the moment is for masculine endowed Steele's to get a cast of themselves for her).
• Steele will also take her on a date with two possibilities at the moment: A walk through Tavros Station's park or spending the afternoon with her in her garden for her studies.
• Five more sex scenes: 1. Breast-play (I'm thinking that this might only be available when Aina is not in heat, the reasoning she wants something in her than on her). 2. Receiving Oral from Aina. 3. Aina uses some of her toys on Steele. 4. Steele gives Aina a romantic bath. 5. Steele spends the night with Aina.

I do want to say that this is going to be a slow project, largely due to how I have a job and another unrelated project I've been working on. But I would appreciate thoughts about this.

And no, I don't believe in the Curse of JimT.

 

[Noob Salad]

Gardeford already did one.

 

[Darkpheonix]

Gardeford already did one.

?

 

[FrankenApple]

@Gardeford is already in the middle of doing an Aina pregnancy expansion and as sad as it might be, she is already more expanded upon than most characters and there won't be any point in making anything else for her other than maybe one or two extra sex scenes.

 

[Evil]

Fair enough, better to know now at the start than to dive in and waste a lot of time and effort for nothing.

 

[Captain Kiera]

This could be fun, especially the dates and the gifts idea. Also on the Gardeford issue, maybe try and ask him what he thinks(though his project was is a commission), Idk seems better then to just give up.

And no, I don't believe in the Curse of JimT.

Don`t tempt fate. It`s listening.

 

[Franks]

Fair enough, better to know now at the start than to dive in and waste a lot of time and effort for nothing.

Garde is in the middle of a pregnancy expansion. I don't see preg in anything you mentioned. As long as you talk to Savin/Fen/Jacques and make sure you're following their advice, you'll be fine, because their opinions matter quite a bit more than ours.

 

[Ethereal Dragon]

Doubtful Garde is planning on adding a double stuffing scene for characters who wield more than one cock, I could be wrong but I've learned from reading content here that some writers seem to lack the sense to see that people here would and have a high possiblity of having characters with more than one dick or hell... tailcocks be they parasites or otherwise. Heck we now have tentacock wings. Wish writers took those variables into context.

Anywho I'm all for anyone filling out characters that were abandoned/their writers riding off into the distant sunset to never to return.

 

[XBoxMaster131]

Please, for the love of GOD, @Evil , don't abandon this project just cause a few people said no! There is not nearly enough taur content in this game!

 

[Ethereal Dragon]

Please, for the love of GOD, @Evil , don't abandon this project just cause a few people said no! There is not nearly enough taur content in this game!

True enough, though I will argue that there isn't enough PC taur supported content. There's plenty of NPC that are Taurs that's supported though. People will write NPC taurs but not PC taurs supported shit... ya know what I'mma gonna stop here if I continue I'm just gonna go on a speal and just start NOT making sense at all.

 

[Freed85]

Considering that I really like Aina as well, I'd like to see where this goes if you decide to stick with it.

 

[Evil]

Not giving up, I sent a message to Garde and I'm waiting to hear back from them.

But while I'm waiting, I've been brainstorming some ideas for gifts for Steele to give her and possible date ideas, all trying to keep in line with her character.

Spoiler: Gift and Date ideas below.

Gift ideas, the scene changing based on the times given and so on:

• Samples of flower seeds and soil ("Oh <PCName>, these are wonderful."/"More seeds? Thank you, I've learned so much from these.")
• Tea from other worlds, for example Honey Tea from Myrellon or tea made from hardy plants on Uveto. ("What an unusual scent, thank you!" / "You got me some more tea? Oh thank you, I really enjoyed the last batch!")
• Botanical tools. I imagine that being a Centaur would not be the easiest form to check plants so something like long reach tools to collect clippings and the like might be useful. This is strictly in the maybe pile.
• Steele sex-toy. This would only be available to give when the other gifts and dates have been completed. Masculine endowed Steeles might visit one of the specialist stores and get a casting done of themselves, as a dildo of some kind for when Aina enters estrus and Steele isn't around. Feminine featured Steeles might get a cast of their vagina and have it shaped like a butterfly vibrator/bullet and mount it on a drone.

Dates, (rough ideas at the moment):

• Like I said above, the walk in the park, letting Aina point out the flowers as you walk along.
• Help her in her garden, playfully messing around, possibly tapping dirt onto each other's faces.
• Making a meal together or going out for a meal.
• 'Taur specific scene, still a bit fuzzy, but I keep thinking some form of dancing.
• Taking her to a college dance, even if she studies at home, Steele might arrange something for her even if its just the two of them.
• Jousting (there will be no jousting)

As I've said, these are just rough ideas and I want to think about them some more before committing ink to page.

And well, if things don't work out, well, nothing is lost and I'll have gained some insight and experience. And I can maybe use the material here elsewhere.

 

[XBoxMaster131]

Must.. Not... Spoil!!!

Remember... Undertale... NEVER AGAIN!!!

 

[Evil]

Eh, there's nothing major, only ideas and even then they're subject to change.

I've spoken with Garde and without revealing too much of their own work, I've decided to drop a scene and add something extra to another.

So I guess this means that I can begin this properly.

 

[XBoxMaster131]

Eh, there's nothing major, only ideas and even then they're subject to change.

I've spoken with Garde and without revealing too much of their own work, I've decided to drop a scene and add something extra to another.

So I guess this means that I can begin this properly.

 

[Evil]

First day's work is done. Not much, but its a start.

On a good day, I can get about 1500-2000 words done, but I'll be aiming to add at least 500 words a day. We'll see how it goes.

Now, often times, I tend to work better if I have a couple of projects to bounce around on. Which means a couple of concepts have cropped up today.

1 - A repeatable news feature similar to the real world show Naked News, which reports on events connected to the Planets Steele visits. Newsreaders strip and possibly masturbate as they report the news. Possibly more a comedic tone to it than serious, for example, on Tarkus, a reporter might ask one of the locals about the planetbuster bomb that Steele defused only for the local to panic and run away screaming. I'm also thinking that Steele might be interviewed by the newsreader and ends up having sex in a one-off scene.

2 - A more involved character, where Steele picks up a distress call in space and finds a rather abrasive rock star and her band whose ship has crapped out. Its the last night of her tour and she needs to get to the location. She gives Steele and their crew VIP passes and invites Steele to her room. There she reveals the whole thing was part of the act and wants to talk naturally. Obviously this can build into more of a proper romance as they get to know each other. She definitely won't become a crew member but she will decide to recover from an intense tour on Tavros or Uveto, I haven't decided yet.

Obviously, these are only concepts and I will only develop them as I work on Aina's expansion, that's the priority. Realistically they'd be started next year.