What Wuffy Writes

[WuffyWuff]

Hi! I'm WuffyWuff, aspiring writer for CoC2. Feel free to just call me Wuffy, comment on my in-progress works, and ask questions!

Submitted

• Elaril Victory Sub Scene - A new victory scene for the Wyld Elf Band, featuring the mossy haired member of the band Elaril.
• Evergreen Heat/Rut Cycle Service - A new service and item provided by Evergreen that gives the Champion a new toggle-able piercing for a natural heat and/or rut cycle like orcs and lupines.

 

[Knife-wielding Crab]

Love it that Elaril gets some more content. Left some suggestions in the doc, feel free to use them or disregard them.

 

[WuffyWuff]

Added link to my Evergreen service doc, would like some feedback before I submit it proper.

 

[PalletTown]

The Heat/Rut Cycle service is pretty cool. Quick Question, does it have any interaction with the perk Corrupted Alpha?

 

[Ace Hangman]

I read through it. Very good grammar and spelling. I don't think I found a single typo.

I think the [plural] parsers need to be reversed with [singular] parsers and I would suggest changing the [pc.cockVagBoth] parsers to [pc.realCockVagBoth] parsers to prevent a magicock from triggering them. While it wouldn't be a bad thing most of the time to have it appear and get aroused, most of the scene is about virility and heat and rut and the magicock doesn't suit that scene if it procs and gets called out.

 

[WuffyWuff]

The Heat/Rut Cycle service is pretty cool. Quick Question, does it have any interaction with the perk Corrupted Alpha?

I haven't written it to have any interaction with Corrupted Alpha. I don't want to try and account for a lot of particular scenarios just for it to turn out it's a pain to code. If it gets brought up during review I'll have a think about it!

 

[WuffyWuff]

I read through it. Very good grammar and spelling. I don't think I found a single typo.

I think the [plural] parsers need to be reversed with [singular] parsers and I would suggest changing the [pc.cockVagBoth] parsers to [pc.realCockVagBoth] parsers to prevent a magicock from triggering them. While it wouldn't be a bad thing most of the time to have it appear and get aroused, most of the scene is about virility and heat and rut and the magicock doesn't suit that scene if it procs and gets called out.

I had a read through, and I agree with what you mentioned about the plural/singular parsers. I'm still new to using the parsers but what you made sense, and it was an oversight to not include it on a few occasions (such as tip vs tips). I also changed most if not all of the [pc.cockVagBoth] parsers to [pc.realCockVagBoth] parsers since you're right it makes more sense for ghostlight to not get called up, I didn't realise it would get called up in this case. Thank you for the feedback!