Steele's Shalin pregnancy starts pretty good, the eggs get laid, you wait, attend the hatching, the eggs hatch, and then NOTHING. No birdtaur babies in the nursery anywhere. Like the Kui-Tan, Raskvel, and Suula babies, they disappear into the aether as soon as they are born.
Also, if Steele has both Moose and Leithian babies, the descriptions have repeated redundant descriptions that redundantly repeat themselves, to whit:
A section of the nursery has been adapted for your tauric kids – present and future – all of the infrastructure and furnishings made big enough to accommodate their larger bodies. Cushions and mats comprise most of the seats, with a few chairs here and there for members of the staff. The area also boasts ample outdoor space, allowing the kids to exercise their legs and play freely. In addition, a leithan teacher has been hired to help them develop their tauric motor functions
A section of the nursery has been adapted for your tauric kids – present and future – all of the infrastructure and furnishings made big enough to accommodate their larger bodies. Cushions and mats comprise most of the seats, with a few chairs here and there for members of the staff. The area also boasts ample outdoor space, allowing the kids to exercise their legs and play freely. In addition, a leithan teacher has been hired to help them develop their tauric motor functions. You could visit your foals, if you’d like.
Note that the first section cuts off at the end of "motor functions" with no period. I suspect the intent was to have 2 blocks, one for Leithian kids and one for Mooslings, and the block copy-pasted without being fully edited. If that is the case, I'd suggest, if at all possible, combining the two blocks into one, and having the ending be three options: one for only Mooselings, one for only Leithians, and one for both, perhaps with another line about how they play together.