various typos

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Using -delete- for suggested deletions and [add] for suggested additions. Some are strictly typos, some are more subjective grammar edits.

Milking.exe​


And the spaces between the ecstasy disappear, leaving you in the white-hot haze of one endless-,- milkgasm.



Taint alerts​


[D: 51 T: 17:36] You feel like... like fucking[,] really. It doesn’t matter if you’re actually horny right now or not - you’ve got fingers and a mouth, right? You glance down at your Codex to see a warning blaring about 75% genetic taint, but warnings are meant to be ignored.



Zhèng Shi​


You can see a large grated iron door at the end of the hall, some distance north, and another door just east of you labeled “Overseer Maike” in hard block lettering. That door has an electronic security box installed next to the handle; must be somebody important['s] office.



Sauwinn​


When her latest greeting is rebuffed, she spins in the air, frustrated, and turns to face you. “HEY!” she yells over the city’s din, zipping toward you like the shortstack version [of a] guided missile.

“That wasn’t [like] no ["]ticklish["] I ever heard,” the imp remarks, rubbing her chin wickedly.

Twin streams of fat, synth-cum geyser from her gabilani-sculpted, double urethral chrome mast, blasting your partner full-on in the face and sending the zero-G slut flying hooves-over[-]horns all the way to splat against the far wall.

They squish and roll their gargantuan, teatless-,- lust-balloons against one another, wet mountains dimpling and bulging at the sides as they twist and hump.

“I like the improvements,” she notes, peering at the work her suction cups have done to your body. “Like something out of one of thos[e]-d- ‘Night of the Were-Bimbo’ flicks.”

After[ ]all, if you keep Halloween in your heart, it can last year-round.



Sydian queen​


So valuable did you become, that other sydians tried to steal you away! They almost succeeded, too. Hence your collar and chain, kept by your Mistress’s feet mostly -where she- [to] can keep an eye on you... and so she can occasionally use you as a pussy munch, thanking her for this wonderful new life she’s bestowed upon you with one searching lap of your tongue in her over-ripe tangerine sex after another.



Rivet​


She brings the tail’s end near her mouth, looks into your eyes and gives it a slow lick before smiling. But that’s not all – her breasts are swelling visibly, growing by at least one cup size before your eyes! Damn! Your -your- slit gets even wetter at the display.



Kiroquest​


This excessively broad hangar would look at home in any self-respecting station, core-ward or otherwise. Instead, this heavy duty docking area was constructed inside [a] junky-looking wreck of a freighter.

You’re distracted for a moment - just a moment - and suddenly you’re sweating with lust, your sword falling from your hand as you hastily unfasten your bra and let your milk-packed, ridiculously perky breasts free of their artificial constraints, [your] over-sized, drooling teats already hard.



Bimbo hat​


(Not sure if these are typos, parser errors, or just unusual stylistic choices.)

“You wanna milk out a quick load so I’ll creampie your other holes, don’t you?” The former pirate tries to look smug, she’s too close to the precipice to look like anything like a rapacious fuckbeast. “You want [to be] fucked.” Gurgling sounds come out of your mouth as you endeavor to make the tiniest of nods, otherwise immobilized by rigid shaft. “You want [to be] used.” Kiro pushes you back down. The entire foot of exposed, turgid horse-cock plows into your mouth. You can’t breathe, but the scent of ripe, tumescent dick wafts into your nostrils all the same. It’s basically as good as breathing. Kiro murmurs, “You want [to be] fucked.” She yanks you the entire way off, prying your suckling lips away from her tip with a too-loud pop. “You want [to be] absolutely ruined with cum.”



Gab cyborg​


“Shut it! Dildo-’-s don’t talk!” you snap. Immediately she closes her mouth.



Tessa​


“Actually, I hav[e]-ing- something else on hand.” You pull out a bottle of Honey Wine you had for just such an occasion.

Waves of pleasure surge from your loins, sending a shock of tension through your core as you’re invaded.[ ]You strain against your binds, your urge to engage your hands thwarted. Pleasure trembles along your outstretched arms, the bite of the cuffs mingling torturously with it.[ ]Gasping, you tilt your head and look between the ovir’s legs, seeing the pink toy deep inside of Tessa’s twat and not your own.



Nuka rancher​


The two of you shake your heads as you climb back into your own minds[. \n\n] “Sorry ‘bout that,” she mumbles with chagrin, before catching herself and forcing a laugh.



Adjite tea​


Parser error for singular vagina: Your slightly plump twat pulse[s] and ripple[s] in muscular contractions that should be impossible without a vibrator.

Crystalline waves of femme[-]cum gush down your thick thighs and pool under your barcode-tattooed, globular butt with every shuddering breath you take.

Your hands do what they can[,] but to be honest, you’d cream your brains out even if both hands were tied behind your back.



Lund (translated)​


“So you wanna take me doggy, then?” you say, smirking down at Lund. “Try and take this[ ]big, - -dumb alien down a notch?”

During the doggy scene, when given the option to say "Again", Lund sometimes says two versions of his challenge:

“Your tongue is almost as good as a fuck,” he sighs, looking down at you with a pleased expression. “Still, you seem eager... Want to go again?” “You have a nice body,” he admits, rubbing himself up and down. “Go again?”



Schora​


“You! You’re... no way!” she growls, shouldering her gun and fixing you in its sights. “You’re the cunt that caused the lockdown? I knew you were too good to be true. I knew it! Nobody makes a fool out of me, you sick fuck!” Uh-oh. Looks like taking a gentle hand with the commander here is paying off...

This last sentence reads oddly. Should it instead be something like "Looks like taking a gentle hand with the commander back there is coming back to bite you"?
 
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These found in 0.9.116-BACKER-ELECTRON#5525

Venus Pitcher end​


“We can only make this nectar in times of plenty,” the venus pitcher explains, wiggling delightedly. Her fingers trace down her drained b[r]e[a]sts, across a tummy with the slightest hint of pudginess to a skirt made entirely from pinkish-purple blooms.



Slutshroom​


Fucking yourself is easy. Just like getting fucked. You pump your fingers in and out, switching hands to lick the fragrant juices into your mouth. Pussy tastes so good. It’s no wonder you’re trying to get even wetter. No wonder you find yourself daydreaming of eating out other - -girls and cumming from the taste alone. The thoughts are depraved and whorish, obscene even. You whimper as you start to climax, realizing that it doesn’t matter what anyone else believes, not when it gets you off this hard.



Premium Breeder intro​


“Sisters,” she says, tapping the desk with a pointer with a slightly anguished expression on her pretty, noseless face, “if you are anything like me, at certain times during the week you can get a little... anxious. A need to blow off some steam becomes too difficult to ignore, you know? Particularly if, again like me, you -hold-[know] that stuffing your business away up inside you is uncomfortable, and a shame to do besides.”



Sera party (parser typo)​


With no lubricant it’s lip-bitingly tough – but you have to do it, your mistress demands it, or so it seems in your smoky, sex-clouded mind. Your eyes cross as you keep going, your body straining to accommodate her, [pc.eachVagina oozing excitement as her meat presses through into your tender walls. You moan hoarsely in triumph as you finally sit all the way down, her bloated balls pressing against your nice, cushiony derriere, utterly filled and plugged with your mistress.



Amma (New Texas)​


“Maaaybe,” she teases, inching closer.[ ]Those big swells of cowflesh are practically rubbing up against you, now.



Megrez (Myrellion)​


You come to as you gasp for air, and immediately cough up some of his pre. “Are you alright[?]-,-” Megrez asks, clearly looking concerned at just having choked you out with his dick.



Biothric​


The first egg stretches your pussy lips so wide you think it’s not going to fit; when it finally does pressure its way into your tunnel you cum right there and then,[ ]clutching the floor as your body rocks with waves of ecstasy, gushing girl-spunk around the bulbous penetration.



Forgehound (parser error when having no genitals)​


Luckily for you, he seemingly has more than enough to spare. You can feel your Error: Invalid vagina number (0) passed to vaginaDescript() getting wetter with every downward thrust, dripping and drooling. God, if you’re this turned on just from having him bulging your neck outwards, how good would it be to have him inside your cunt? You find yourself wanting to masturbate, edging yourself until he cums too.



Narc (Dhaal)​


“The vending machines kept getting robbed, so they decided to, quote,” she pulls a wickedly long knife from her bag, “‘get a machine nobody would fuck with[,]-.-’ [e]-E-nd quote.” You stare at the knife in her hands, feeling your jaw slack slightly. “You haven’t... stabbed anybody, have you?” Narc stares at you a moment, then looks at the knife in her hand and blinks. After an awkward moment of silence, she turns back to you. “No[,]-.-” [s]-S-he lies, stuffing the knife back into her bag.



Zaika Hydra​


Stepping up until your jiggly, lactating tits [are]-is- flush with her mega mammaries, you give the fervor-flushed native a boop on the nose. “Two hoses. Two mouths. See where I’m going with this?” you ask, hoisting her twin-tipped tail. She blushes a shade darker and nods so vigorously her long pigtails bounce up and down behind her.



Gabilani Chemist​


Already wildly salivatin[g], your nostrils flare as they take in the scent of the gabilani’s juicing cunt just above. Her delectable feminine syrup smells like it would taste just as good as the sloppiest, saltiest cumshot.



Doll End​


Your chair spins around so you have nothing to look at but the wall. Decades of caked-on grime and dirt show just how dilapidated your surroundings are. It’s boring, but staring doggedly ahead is also obedient, making it a thrill all its own. Fresh dribbles of lubricant pour out of you. The cherry scent will let Mistresses know how badly you need [to be] used.

Sometimes it’s the feeling of his dick sawing in and out of your mouth that sparks a return to semi-sapience. Other times you’re already painted in four or five coats of spunk before you can hear enough to obey commands again. He likes it that way. If he didn’t, he wouldn’t keep you impaled on his dick all night long. He wouldn’t give you earbuds to wear with a recording of his voice telling you that he likes it when you cum - that he wants you to cum. You should cum from serving him as often as possible[.]



Mindstream​


The real world bleeds freely into your digitized den of sin, adding a delicious unpredictability to the proceedings. Every grunt from your physical form filters through the rendered fantasy, warping it in wonderfully obscene ways. A patron approaches you[,]-r- already bared and straining. Twin shafts jut from his groin, glistening with eagerness. He wastes no time in hoisting your hips, lining up his double dongs with your dripping holes.