various typos (0.9.112-BACKER-ELECTRON#5440)

needles

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Using -delete- for suggested deletions and [add] for suggested additions. Some are strictly typos, some are more subjective grammar edits.

Milking.exe​


And the spaces between the ecstasy disappear, leaving you in the white-hot haze of one endless-,- milkgasm.



Taint alerts​


[D: 51 T: 17:36] You feel like... like fucking[,] really. It doesn’t matter if you’re actually horny right now or not - you’ve got fingers and a mouth, right? You glance down at your Codex to see a warning blaring about 75% genetic taint, but warnings are meant to be ignored.



Zhèng Shi​


You can see a large grated iron door at the end of the hall, some distance north, and another door just east of you labeled “Overseer Maike” in hard block lettering. That door has an electronic security box installed next to the handle; must be somebody important['s] office.



Sauwinn​


When her latest greeting is rebuffed, she spins in the air, frustrated, and turns to face you. “HEY!” she yells over the city’s din, zipping toward you like the shortstack version [of a] guided missile.

“That wasn’t [like] no ["]ticklish["] I ever heard,” the imp remarks, rubbing her chin wickedly.

Twin streams of fat, synth-cum geyser from her gabilani-sculpted, double urethral chrome mast, blasting your partner full-on in the face and sending the zero-G slut flying hooves-over[-]horns all the way to splat against the far wall.

They squish and roll their gargantuan, teatless-,- lust-balloons against one another, wet mountains dimpling and bulging at the sides as they twist and hump.

“I like the improvements,” she notes, peering at the work her suction cups have done to your body. “Like something out of one of thos[e]-d- ‘Night of the Were-Bimbo’ flicks.”

After[ ]all, if you keep Halloween in your heart, it can last year-round.



Sydian queen​


So valuable did you become, that other sydians tried to steal you away! They almost succeeded, too. Hence your collar and chain, kept by your Mistress’s feet mostly -where she- [to] can keep an eye on you... and so she can occasionally use you as a pussy munch, thanking her for this wonderful new life she’s bestowed upon you with one searching lap of your tongue in her over-ripe tangerine sex after another.



Rivet​


She brings the tail’s end near her mouth, looks into your eyes and gives it a slow lick before smiling. But that’s not all – her breasts are swelling visibly, growing by at least one cup size before your eyes! Damn! Your -your- slit gets even wetter at the display.



Kiroquest​


This excessively broad hangar would look at home in any self-respecting station, core-ward or otherwise. Instead, this heavy duty docking area was constructed inside [a] junky-looking wreck of a freighter.

You’re distracted for a moment - just a moment - and suddenly you’re sweating with lust, your sword falling from your hand as you hastily unfasten your bra and let your milk-packed, ridiculously perky breasts free of their artificial constraints, [your] over-sized, drooling teats already hard.



Bimbo hat​


(Not sure if these are typos, parser errors, or just unusual stylistic choices.)

“You wanna milk out a quick load so I’ll creampie your other holes, don’t you?” The former pirate tries to look smug, she’s too close to the precipice to look like anything like a rapacious fuckbeast. “You want [to be] fucked.” Gurgling sounds come out of your mouth as you endeavor to make the tiniest of nods, otherwise immobilized by rigid shaft. “You want [to be] used.” Kiro pushes you back down. The entire foot of exposed, turgid horse-cock plows into your mouth. You can’t breathe, but the scent of ripe, tumescent dick wafts into your nostrils all the same. It’s basically as good as breathing. Kiro murmurs, “You want [to be] fucked.” She yanks you the entire way off, prying your suckling lips away from her tip with a too-loud pop. “You want [to be] absolutely ruined with cum.”



Gab cyborg​


“Shut it! Dildo-’-s don’t talk!” you snap. Immediately she closes her mouth.



Tessa​


“Actually, I hav[e]-ing- something else on hand.” You pull out a bottle of Honey Wine you had for just such an occasion.

Waves of pleasure surge from your loins, sending a shock of tension through your core as you’re invaded.[ ]You strain against your binds, your urge to engage your hands thwarted. Pleasure trembles along your outstretched arms, the bite of the cuffs mingling torturously with it.[ ]Gasping, you tilt your head and look between the ovir’s legs, seeing the pink toy deep inside of Tessa’s twat and not your own.



Nuka rancher​


The two of you shake your heads as you climb back into your own minds[. \n\n] “Sorry ‘bout that,” she mumbles with chagrin, before catching herself and forcing a laugh.



Adjite tea​


Parser error for singular vagina: Your slightly plump twat pulse[s] and ripple[s] in muscular contractions that should be impossible without a vibrator.

Crystalline waves of femme[-]cum gush down your thick thighs and pool under your barcode-tattooed, globular butt with every shuddering breath you take.

Your hands do what they can[,] but to be honest, you’d cream your brains out even if both hands were tied behind your back.



Lund (translated)​


“So you wanna take me doggy, then?” you say, smirking down at Lund. “Try and take this[ ]big, - -dumb alien down a notch?”

During the doggy scene, when given the option to say "Again", Lund sometimes says two versions of his challenge:

“Your tongue is almost as good as a fuck,” he sighs, looking down at you with a pleased expression. “Still, you seem eager... Want to go again?” “You have a nice body,” he admits, rubbing himself up and down. “Go again?”



Schora​


“You! You’re... no way!” she growls, shouldering her gun and fixing you in its sights. “You’re the cunt that caused the lockdown? I knew you were too good to be true. I knew it! Nobody makes a fool out of me, you sick fuck!” Uh-oh. Looks like taking a gentle hand with the commander here is paying off...

This last sentence reads oddly. Should it instead be something like "Looks like taking a gentle hand with the commander back there is coming back to bite you"?
 
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