Arona and Brint DP threesome scene, grammar issue with "and one of his huge hand," needs to be either "and his huge hand," or "and one of his huge hands".
In the Viviane "Bend her over" scene, "You smile and shake her head," is supposed to be "You smile and shake your head." Unless the champ is physically making Viv shake her head, which doesn't make sense in context.
In the scene where Komari proposes that Rindo becomes the player's concubine, "That other have lavished comforts," should be "That others have lavished comforts."
After Rindo becomes your concubine, during the "Impregnation" scene, "her slipper, hot pussy," should be "her slippery, hot pussy."
During Kohaku's pregnancy through the "Feed" scene, there is random chance to activate an extra scene where Hotaru comes to feed Kohaku as well. During this scene, when Hotaru says "...that the mother of her kits lots of good food..." should be, "...that the mother of her kits has lots of good food..."
Towards the end of Kohaku's pregnancy, if you have fed her regularly throughout her pregnancy, during the "Tummy Listening" scene, "Kohaku's pregnant has developed," should be either "Kohaku's pregnant belly/tummy has developed," or "Kohaku's pregnancy has developed."
In the Aster/Ahmri first kid "Meet Companions" -> "Brienne" scene, "taste testthis," should be "taste-test this."
In the Piyari/Atani first kid "Breastfeed" scene, "like a puppy my wag," should be "like a puppy might wag."
During the Mai pregnancy "Patslut(Belly)" scene, Mai calls you "Yer Eminence" even if you are not a kitsune/Kero's Champion.
And this is all I've collected this month so far. Most of this is Tobs content, it's some of the stuff I haven't read since last year, and I wanted to try it as a non-kitsune.
