"Taking a hands off her ," doesn't flow right in Drifa's facesitting scene
Missing the " in the end in Zhara's milker scene
Using first instead of second person in the lover's embrace scene
Missing the space between "thus" and "far" in the attempt ritual option
Missing the space between "this" and "master" in Drifa's praise scene
Missing words in Drifa's facesitting scene
Missing words in the ride him scene for the male wyvern
Missing the " in the end in Varena's "she's not that bad scene"
Extra " in the end in Khaius' bath talk
Missing the . between "good" and "Not" in Viviane's Arona talk scene