disclaimer: I'm dumb, some of these may not be typos. I've played through this game maybe 8 or 9 times, and part way through a recent play through I thought "huh these typos still haven't gotten fixed? Maybe I should make a list." So here we are. The typos I saw leading up to me wanting to make a list are not on the list because I didn't feel like starting over again. I also didn't read everything, especially content I've played through several times. This is 0.9.2 and 0.9.3 (probably same). I'm not even through all the content, haven't gotten to act 3 yet so there may be more to this thread. This is a lot, hope its legible and helpful.
ryn losing virginity with you (near bottom): "kneading her ass in both both hands..."
marrying drifa: sanders says "we are gathered here today today..."
drifa heat: You can feel the weight of her body on your legs, and the eroticism of the situation isn't lost on me.
-(switching from 3rd person to first in same sentence)
lyric investigating dragon player:
Lyric yanks your hand outward and begins to feel along your arm, inspecting everything from your wrist to your shoulder, squeezing your muscles and tickling at your skin. She squeezes your muscles and tickles your skin, getting as much information as she can on your newly augmented body.
-squeezes muscles and tickles skin twice?
after drifa uses medallion in pool and you accept the fucking
• "Oh, the goddess has blessed me all right. Just not in the way she intended. It is really a gift if you're going to place silly rules on how it can and can't be used?"
-was this meant to be "Is it really a gift" ?
• Same page, the 3rd last and 2nd last paragraph should be a single paragraph?
asking daliza about dragons:
Dal lets herself give a hint of a smileand strokes
-Should be "smile and"
asking Gytha about her childhood. the 2nd paragraph when she's talking isn't in italics
• "mating" option with Gytha. at end mentions white/ ivory (cum). my pc has honey cum
this is fairly common tho. guess I'll make a (late) list? idk if this helps
Kailani: intense
vision quest: old mine: first tile from door: 3rd paragraph:
Arrayed against one of the far walls is a trio of of stocky stone golems
-"of of" repeated.
Hotaru birth: first paragraph
• "the fluid stains on her cushion on is proof enough"
-I think the 2nd "on" shouldn't be there?
• when called for mai, she "sets down her things" twice. not a typo but strange?
kinu tummy ache flashback: towards the end
"She's right, even if her phrasing is a bit too blunt for anyone's liking... "
-why is this sentence in italics if shes not saying it out loud?
Vision quest: talking to thalia about wayfort: last paragraph
A sour note on which to end a topic, to be sure, but a honest one
-should be "an honest"?
maybe...recheck some of these chat options with Thalia. I had to reread things often and scratch my head.
when standing on the living quarters tile in wayfort, Gytha's bed paragraph is shown twice
-the 2nd time is followed by her babies bed? (not born yet)
meeting Hisako (Hotaru's mom)
Common sense would say that prospecting isn't a pregnant vixen should do,
-should be "isn't what a pregnant..."?
freja training? with the guards? (was walking around and it just kinda happened out of nowhere)
relaxing a chair brought out for you by one of the maids
-should be relaxing "in" a chair?
brushing brienne's hair in her home village: pc talks but not in italics
Your hair is so nice, babe. I’m jealous."
-missing a start quotation (") ?
Clementine birth: number of lambs is messed up
By the time she's done and pushed with all she's got, you and Gwyn have swaddled and held zero little lambs.
-little anti climatic giving birth to zero kids, but also, lmao
Livera: special invitation: taking you to juno
"The navy's main dockyard is thisaway. Have you seen it before?"
-i instinctively read this as "this-a-way" and didn't think anything of it until i did a double-take
-idk if that was intentional or not or if I'm just a goober who reads silly words. is this-a-way even a real word?
Celementine: family events
"Aw, it's ok", she says, rubbing your face with her delicate hands
-her talking should be italics
Calise: eating her out before going to meet the king: The Siege of Khor'minos (probably)
You grip the paladin's ass in both hand and pin her down
-should be hands, with an S, since its both of them
Senator Khaius: asking about himself
but what's what investment is about.
-should be "That's what" ?
part 3 of siege of Khor'minos: when dinning with the king, very last sentence
loading a plate with slices of fatty pork and mushrooms glazed her herbs and butter.
-what is her herbs
asking the king about Calise:
and his second was afflicted by magic that left him writing incoherently on the ground.
-should this be Writhing, not Writing?
dancing with Calise: 2nd paragraph
You can feel the warmth radiating off her, forge-like in its intensify
-should be intensity?
I summoned Thalia at the wayfort, post vision quest.
it talks about Nareva said this and that. I haven't even MET Nareva yet? aside from mirror stance "quest"
later edit: it has come to my attention she is not in the game yet. from what i can tell at least? idk, I can't re summon her for the first time to know what I was on about.
Horn of Tides: talking to cassidy for the first time
"Nope. dragon. Still alive, last I checked."
my player introduced themselves as "dragon". Should be Dragon with a capital D? like the rest of that line.
My party is Brienne and Kiyoko: brienne wants to be milked
The option to ask cait is grey (she's not around). the option to ask Azzy is available (she's also not around tho?)
I'mm a little embarrassed it took me so long to notice that... Or is this intentional?
i guess giving birth to manticores isn't implemented yet?
i was 4 days from giving birth, talked to evergreen to advance pregnancy
then nothing. no birthing scene, no manticore kids in nursery, appearance tab says i have a flat tummy. Evergreen cant advance a pregnancy because I'm not pregnant.
Asking Vasko: Other mages in town: 2nd paragraph
a brilliant mind in a body in a body sculpted from ice and marble.
interacting with waystone in Tychris
a couple of black-scaled warriors being approaching you
-they should "begin" to approach me. not being
Tethys: enemies of tychris prompt
we are not well loved by all out neighbors.
-should be "Our" not out
talking to Ynes in the courtyard: failed stealth check
she charged me, put her boot in my chest and got mad.
but the next page was as though that never happened as she gasps and shuts her book then says hello. Kinda weird
assassin appeared: meeting Eirina
• Ynes has ducked before you can reaction, flattening herself against the ground.
-I react, not reaction
• "I'm Eirina," she says, couching her spear and giving you a two-fingered wave.
-what does couching a spear mean? is this clutching?
Managed to fuck some sense into Kythie: Curse's Early Days
I guess I was luck that she'd been with the palace a good long while,
-Should be "in luck", or lucky
Kythie: Does she have enemies?: first line
"I don't think so! Not that could do something like this, anyway!"
-should be "Not that they..."?
Dreams & Dragons
Kythie licks her lips, and her see the flame on her tail start burning a little more intently.
-Should be "You see the flame..." not her see the flame
Ynes: Study her: arcanist mantle
I think about such things, from time to time — w
ere we entirely to blame,
-The paragraph is split mid word/ sentence
Ynes: Blaze of Triumph
More the fool me, I suppose.
-idk if this sentence is incorrect, but it looks weird to me. some yee ol speak?
A fire that roared hotted the weaker its target was
-should be roared hotter, not hotted?
deflagrating touch (the spell)
Burning "NaN" which last indefinitely.
-wat that mean?
chains of perdition and massive milky mammaries (Big milkers) have same text
-untested if they actually DO the same thing or if text is just messed up.
-maybe this is intentional to allow you to just do it over and over lol?
ryn losing virginity with you (near bottom): "kneading her ass in both both hands..."
marrying drifa: sanders says "we are gathered here today today..."
drifa heat: You can feel the weight of her body on your legs, and the eroticism of the situation isn't lost on me.
-(switching from 3rd person to first in same sentence)
lyric investigating dragon player:
Lyric yanks your hand outward and begins to feel along your arm, inspecting everything from your wrist to your shoulder, squeezing your muscles and tickling at your skin. She squeezes your muscles and tickles your skin, getting as much information as she can on your newly augmented body.
-squeezes muscles and tickles skin twice?
after drifa uses medallion in pool and you accept the fucking
• "Oh, the goddess has blessed me all right. Just not in the way she intended. It is really a gift if you're going to place silly rules on how it can and can't be used?"
-was this meant to be "Is it really a gift" ?
• Same page, the 3rd last and 2nd last paragraph should be a single paragraph?
asking daliza about dragons:
Dal lets herself give a hint of a smileand strokes
-Should be "smile and"
asking Gytha about her childhood. the 2nd paragraph when she's talking isn't in italics
• "mating" option with Gytha. at end mentions white/ ivory (cum). my pc has honey cum
this is fairly common tho. guess I'll make a (late) list? idk if this helps
Kailani: intense
vision quest: old mine: first tile from door: 3rd paragraph:
Arrayed against one of the far walls is a trio of of stocky stone golems
-"of of" repeated.
Hotaru birth: first paragraph
• "the fluid stains on her cushion on is proof enough"
-I think the 2nd "on" shouldn't be there?
• when called for mai, she "sets down her things" twice. not a typo but strange?
kinu tummy ache flashback: towards the end
"She's right, even if her phrasing is a bit too blunt for anyone's liking... "
-why is this sentence in italics if shes not saying it out loud?
Vision quest: talking to thalia about wayfort: last paragraph
A sour note on which to end a topic, to be sure, but a honest one
-should be "an honest"?
maybe...recheck some of these chat options with Thalia. I had to reread things often and scratch my head.
when standing on the living quarters tile in wayfort, Gytha's bed paragraph is shown twice
-the 2nd time is followed by her babies bed? (not born yet)
meeting Hisako (Hotaru's mom)
Common sense would say that prospecting isn't a pregnant vixen should do,
-should be "isn't what a pregnant..."?
freja training? with the guards? (was walking around and it just kinda happened out of nowhere)
relaxing a chair brought out for you by one of the maids
-should be relaxing "in" a chair?
brushing brienne's hair in her home village: pc talks but not in italics
Your hair is so nice, babe. I’m jealous."
-missing a start quotation (") ?
Clementine birth: number of lambs is messed up
By the time she's done and pushed with all she's got, you and Gwyn have swaddled and held zero little lambs.
-little anti climatic giving birth to zero kids, but also, lmao
Livera: special invitation: taking you to juno
"The navy's main dockyard is thisaway. Have you seen it before?"
-i instinctively read this as "this-a-way" and didn't think anything of it until i did a double-take
-idk if that was intentional or not or if I'm just a goober who reads silly words. is this-a-way even a real word?
Celementine: family events
"Aw, it's ok", she says, rubbing your face with her delicate hands
-her talking should be italics
Calise: eating her out before going to meet the king: The Siege of Khor'minos (probably)
You grip the paladin's ass in both hand and pin her down
-should be hands, with an S, since its both of them
Senator Khaius: asking about himself
but what's what investment is about.
-should be "That's what" ?
part 3 of siege of Khor'minos: when dinning with the king, very last sentence
loading a plate with slices of fatty pork and mushrooms glazed her herbs and butter.
-what is her herbs
asking the king about Calise:
and his second was afflicted by magic that left him writing incoherently on the ground.
-should this be Writhing, not Writing?
dancing with Calise: 2nd paragraph
You can feel the warmth radiating off her, forge-like in its intensify
-should be intensity?
I summoned Thalia at the wayfort, post vision quest.
it talks about Nareva said this and that. I haven't even MET Nareva yet? aside from mirror stance "quest"
later edit: it has come to my attention she is not in the game yet. from what i can tell at least? idk, I can't re summon her for the first time to know what I was on about.
Horn of Tides: talking to cassidy for the first time
"Nope. dragon. Still alive, last I checked."
my player introduced themselves as "dragon". Should be Dragon with a capital D? like the rest of that line.
My party is Brienne and Kiyoko: brienne wants to be milked
The option to ask cait is grey (she's not around). the option to ask Azzy is available (she's also not around tho?)
I'mm a little embarrassed it took me so long to notice that... Or is this intentional?
i guess giving birth to manticores isn't implemented yet?
i was 4 days from giving birth, talked to evergreen to advance pregnancy
then nothing. no birthing scene, no manticore kids in nursery, appearance tab says i have a flat tummy. Evergreen cant advance a pregnancy because I'm not pregnant.
Asking Vasko: Other mages in town: 2nd paragraph
a brilliant mind in a body in a body sculpted from ice and marble.
interacting with waystone in Tychris
a couple of black-scaled warriors being approaching you
-they should "begin" to approach me. not being
Tethys: enemies of tychris prompt
we are not well loved by all out neighbors.
-should be "Our" not out
talking to Ynes in the courtyard: failed stealth check
she charged me, put her boot in my chest and got mad.
but the next page was as though that never happened as she gasps and shuts her book then says hello. Kinda weird
assassin appeared: meeting Eirina
• Ynes has ducked before you can reaction, flattening herself against the ground.
-I react, not reaction
• "I'm Eirina," she says, couching her spear and giving you a two-fingered wave.
-what does couching a spear mean? is this clutching?
Managed to fuck some sense into Kythie: Curse's Early Days
I guess I was luck that she'd been with the palace a good long while,
-Should be "in luck", or lucky
Kythie: Does she have enemies?: first line
"I don't think so! Not that could do something like this, anyway!"
-should be "Not that they..."?
Dreams & Dragons
Kythie licks her lips, and her see the flame on her tail start burning a little more intently.
-Should be "You see the flame..." not her see the flame
Ynes: Study her: arcanist mantle
I think about such things, from time to time — w
ere we entirely to blame,
-The paragraph is split mid word/ sentence
Ynes: Blaze of Triumph
More the fool me, I suppose.
-idk if this sentence is incorrect, but it looks weird to me. some yee ol speak?
A fire that roared hotted the weaker its target was
-should be roared hotter, not hotted?
deflagrating touch (the spell)
Burning "NaN" which last indefinitely.
-wat that mean?
chains of perdition and massive milky mammaries (Big milkers) have same text
-untested if they actually DO the same thing or if text is just messed up.
-maybe this is intentional to allow you to just do it over and over lol?