Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!

[PanzerGuitar00]

maybe add a parser here to account for multiple tails, such as "one of your x tails balh blah blah"

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

mayve change to "anything"

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

maybe replace the comma with "is". i see what they were trying to do here but im not sure if its working.... idk your call

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

change "you've" to "you'd"

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

double space before mouth

 

[Jacques00]

Mostly all fixed for the next release, up to this point.

my steeles dong isnt hardlight, so idk whats going on here.

This is because your character is wearing a hardlight strap-on enabled lower undergarment, and all your penises are too big to fit the desired hole, so the penis routing automatically selects the strap-on for use. For clarity, if the scene is strap-on-compatible and the character is wearing/carrying a strap-on, and the cocks don't meet the required sizes, the cock selection menu will now display the cock selection menu despite only having one available option to select.

I think it would be good to make a quick and dirty scene that would edge the player towards asking azra to go on a myrellion expedition in order to establish proper continuity. As is there feels like... idk how to describe it it feels like theres a logic leap you need to take. i mean yeah its kinda obvious from a player perspective but putting yourself in the characters shoes it doesnt feel right ya know? sorry if im not making sense or being too nitpicky about this or making a mountain out of molehill or whatever.

No guarantee that there will be any extra writing for this bit, but I'll see.

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

This is because your character is wearing a hardlight strap-on enabled lower undergarment

Oh yeah, I forgot about that...

No guarantee that there will be any extra writing for this bit, but I'll see.

No need to put it high on the list, honestly. I'm just being nitpicky at this point. I can't even remember if the other expeditions are in a similar way, so while this burger may not be nothing, it is bordering on being quantum in origin, ya feel me?