Typos and Etc 2: Electric Boogaloo!

[Jarylan]

During battle with the female korgonne raider. Should be stab or something similar.

Twirling the spear, the savage closes the distance with a swift, striding gait. The blackrock blade glints like a razor’s edge as she launches into a flurry of thrusts!

You manage to avoid the female korgonne barbarian’s smack.

 

[Jacques00]

Fixed up to this point.

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

Goddamn, homeboy staying on point

 

[Jarylan]

Fixed up to this point.

Just wanted to drop you a thank you for working so hard on all of this. It's very appreciated.

 

[PanzerGuitar00]

Just wanted to drop you a thank you for working so hard on all of this. It's very appreciated.

Ditto! You've probably done more work on this game than the writers at this point lol.

 

[Jarylan]

Found a verb issue when grabbing up some shark bites to mess around. Should be falls, not fall.

Rubbing your arms, you watch in amazement as your fur fall off from the rubbed

 

[Skunkupine]

Phaedra, Shalin Hunter - Victory BJ:
"His pert mouth is sized for gloving your trusty little guy right down to the knot, and its warmth and silkiness contrasts superbly with the cool air of the forest -= which appears beautiful and fecund to your eyes the greater your heat rises."
Probably should be an em-dash rather than -=

 

[Skunkupine]

Phaedra, Male Behemoth, anal.
"That said, your flared may be monstrously thick by the usual galactic standards, but you’re fucking a freaking kaiju here! Surely there’s room for more, right?"
Steele's flared WHAT? Missing a word here.

Later in the same event:
"Each thrust, full of power and purpose, ends with your expectant belly pressing against his immensely swollen balls, which in turn makes his twin cocks spurt jizz as if they were already cumming. Despite the sheer difference in size between you and the kaiju, her quartet of huge breasts bounce in time with your plowing; it’s almost hypnotic! "
Mix of text for male and herm.

 

[Skunkupine]

Phaedra, The Bouncer, Hyper seduce:
"Even without being able to bottom out, you still have several feet of sensitive, oversized dickflesh buried deep in her vibrating cock tunnel at any time.You grunt as your unwieldy,[....]"
Missing space.

 

[Jarylan]

Description of the 9L pistol. Functional is repeated twice in the sentence. Would be best to remove the first instance.

Stories about functional handguns being recovered from the sites of orbital bombardments - while still functional - are commonplace.

 

[Jarylan]

Asking Prai about the Gemu. Should either be her fingertips, so the Gemu is stretching over two of them, or alternatively, the second word should be knuckles, as the Gemu is stretching far down one finger. Prefer the former, meself.

The Gemu gives another chitter and places its mouth over Prai’s fingertip, its rubbery head stretching all the way over her first two digits.