TiTS: Operation Blackout

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction & Creative Writing' started by lordblobfish, Jul 18, 2020.

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Should I try to draw schematics/examples for the guns and gadgets I mention?

  1. yeah

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  2. nah

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  1. lordblobfish

    lordblobfish Member

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    Hello, just a story I've been thinking of. I'm not much of a writer but I'm trying my best. The story focuses on the dangerous side of the universe, things like police work, criminals, combat, etc. I will accept constructive criticism.
     
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  2. lordblobfish

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    you can use ctrl+F to find specific chapters.
     
  3. SeriousBlueJewel

    SeriousBlueJewel Well-Known Member

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    Decent story to be honest
     
  4. lordblobfish

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    is anyone actually still reading? No one's giving feed back...
     
  5. SeriousBlueJewel

    SeriousBlueJewel Well-Known Member

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    Not weekly I admit
     
  6. SeriousBlueJewel

    SeriousBlueJewel Well-Known Member

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    Also why no sex scenes?
     
  7. lordblobfish

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    I added a sex scene
     
  8. lordblobfish

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    Chapter 12 is done! It was late because my W key decided to stop functioning for literally only 1 day. It was weird.
     

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