TiTS: Operation Blackout

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction & Creative Writing' started by lordblobfish, Jul 18, 2020.

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Should I try to draw schematics/examples for the guns and gadgets I mention?

  1. yeah

    75.0%
  2. nah

    25.0%
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    Hello, just a story I've been thinking of. I'm not much of a writer but I'm trying my best. The story focuses on the dangerous side of the universe, things like police work, criminals, combat, etc. I will accept constructive criticism.
     
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    Prologue- didn't really feel like a chapter
     

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    Chapter 1! I put a lot more effort into this one, I hope it shows!
     

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    Chapter 2! Now with sexual innuendo!
     

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    new chapter. Yay.
     

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