The old race and the first meeting

[khanivore]

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[mistrzuno]

That's some nice idea for an encouter, so it would be like a android am i right?

 

[Savin]

Alright I'm just gonna stop you right there. Your mastery of English prose is so far below the minimum standards for submission that there's no hope of salvaging it even on a technical level, to say nothing of the prose's quality.

I can only recommend you pick up some modern fiction books and really start analyzing how the language works in practice.

 

[khanivore]

Alright I'm just gonna stop you right there. Your mastery of English prose is so far below the minimum standards for submission that there's no hope of salvaging it even on a technical level, to say nothing of the prose's quality.

I can only recommend you pick up some modern fiction books and really start analyzing how the language works in practice.

I'm really happy to see that you were following me savin but to be honest i'm not looking for anything special and i also understand how terrible my language is so i'm sorry for my work up until now.

 

[khanivore]

I wanted to apologize to whoever that was reading my work, i'm sorry that i wasted your time with my weak work , i won't try to write anymore , again i'm very sorry

 

[Kesil]

Less self-deprecation and more learning from the situation. Read. Write. Repeat.