The I Series

[Mactire]

a set of three items for increasing certain body parts amounts, based off of tail me more and started here https://forum.fenoxo.com/threads/wing-me-more.45729/#post-466766

ISeries

ISoar Item Name: ISoar Short Name: ISoar Item Type: Drug, Pill Rating level:1 Rarity level: Jank Base Price: 4,000 Total Price: 20000 Max Stack size: 5 Tooltip: A Pill of ISoar Description: From the makers of Tail Me More comes the brand new ISoar, a greasy pill that splits one of your wings into...

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well did not go through first time so looking for advice for round 2

 

[rkinght5]

Looking at Adjatha's comment, it seems like the idea is good, but the writing isn't quite there yet. Maybe you could spend some more time describing what the pc is going through? A lot of tfs take their time with the disorientating feels of changing your biology. It might be good to flesh that out a bit more.