Tanuki Revenge Dream

[Maximilian]

This is my first attempt at writing anything like this, or at all really. So please leave as much feedback or suggestions as possible. I thought I'd try a dream because it seemed the simplest as a one off, also it has rather strict requirements so I can get familiar with the formatting and parsing.


https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XA74QntA8bpv8WPyuustGO0Yj53thKHIiY_LxqBS2N0/edit?usp=sharing

 

[Maximilian]

So I got a whole bunch of proof reading help by one helpful person but no one has commented on the content or formatting, I'm pretty confident in the parsing as it works in the tester.
Really would like to know if the subject matter/writing is interesting/boring, sexy/bland, decent length/too short.

I cannot judge anything I make with an impartial eye, after I've gone over it multiple times I just want to bin it no matter how much I thought it was decent on the first pass or two.

Thanks for any feedback.

 

[BubbleLord]

So I got a whole bunch of proof reading help by one helpful person but no one has commented on the content or formatting, I'm pretty confident in the parsing as it works in the tester.
Really would like to know if the subject matter/writing is interesting/boring, sexy/bland, decent length/too short.

I cannot judge anything I make with an impartial eye, after I've gone over it multiple times I just want to bin it no matter how much I thought it was decent on the first pass or two.

Thanks for any feedback.

If you want to bin it, then do it. But no one commenting on it doesn’t mean it’s bad or good. Have patience bro.