I read through it. It's a good framework. Got all the scaffolding and foundation for a character. I fixed all the typos I found and noted any suggestion, comments, etc. Once you've gone through those, I can do another read-thru.
Otherwise, I would say that a male hive-knight is a bit like a unicorn. Readers won't want to see it squandered. I suppose his backstory could work, but I think you'll really need to work on his interactions and character to make him feel right and like he fits and isn't like some horse-cocked wyld elf that just pops up occasionally in the woods.
I would recommend you add parsers that take any companions into account. I don't believe they are mentioned at all. For instance, when Varenyz takes you off a ways for sexy fun-times, do a check for companions and put a little message about them. Then at the end of the scene, put a check for companions and make a note that the Champ goes and rejoins them.
Other than that, when you first encounter him, or during subsequent encounters. Check for companions, specific ones that might have a comment about the hornet; be that Brint/Brienne, Cait, or Arona. Even if it's just to say that they hear a hornet nearby before he shows up (it's not a rare thing to encounter one it seems). But maybe one or two will have a specific comment about a male hive-knight (or wannabe hive-knight), whether it's encouraging, hopeful, denigrating, or otherwise.
But most especially, readers will likely expect Azyrran to have something to say and for Varenyz to have something to say to her if she's in the party. Of course, you'd also have to take into account whether she's currently a hive-knight, dragoon, or love knight/bimbo and write her dialogue accordingly. So there's still a bit of work to go, in my opinion, to polish it up. But I'll help when you get through this round of editing.
