[Submitted] Nursery Milking Scene

[Chaosstripe]

Ever notice that the Nursery on Tavros has a room dedicated for milking the pc, but no scenes once in the room? This hopes to change that, with a fun side of consentacles. Also included is another way to sell your Milk Bags, since Bridget does mention paying for people's milk.

Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1t5-h9WRNvRVRmeHm-M3ho8l6oftwPJMgzp3-72Gpbgw/edit?usp=sharing

 

[C.C_Latte]

My prayers have been answered! Might I also recommend that you mention lactation amount? For the pc's that have very little, little, regular, a lot, massive amounts, and cow factory loads? That way, when you sell them, it has a little more weight? Also, how about mentioning if you have children or not post milking for worldbuilding purposes? I love this so far!

 

[Animalistic]

Now I am not most versed In English grammar, but I noticed a lot of comma-splices inside of the text. I would recommend you to go over stuff like subordinate Clauses, relative pronouns, semicolons and complex/compound sentences. Just to refresh yourself on them.

 

[C.C_Latte]

BUMPing this, cause frankly, self-miking scenes need more love