[Submitted] Night Bites- a Bat TF

[lopbat]

Hello FenCo forums, I'm longtime-lurker lopbat and I haven't used gdocs for writing in roughly 10 years.

I've wanted a bat tf since the original CoC and I finally decided to get off my butt and get to writing it (no shade to the CoC2 bat tf, I just don't play it enough to enjoy the fact that there's one in there). It's relatively straightforward, with three options (vampire bat, fruit bat, and a 'generic' blend of the two) and a race perk for vampire bats.
I was able to figure out some of the parser stuff myself using the doc, but a lot of the more complex stuff is kind of beyond me so if I'm meant to do that on my own I'd appreciate any help/critique knowledgeable folk can give! All the actual writing I had in mind is done, so if it needs something else I didn't think of I can always add that in.
The template is kind of thin on details re: TF items so things might not be where they're supposed to be in the doc itself; I need some help with that as well, if possible.

Here it is.

 

[voltfintrout]

Hi I know it's been like two months and I don't know that much about the parser but I'm going through and commenting your google doc. (That's a lot of pages this is gonna take a while.)

Edit: Got halfway through but ran out of time. A big thing to look our for with parser stuff is double spacing/lack of spacing. Here's an example from the parser documentation.

She admires {the straining bulge in your [pc.crotchCover]/your straining bulge}.

This will render as either:
She admires the straining bulge in your pants.
She admires your straining bulge.

However, if there's also spaces after the opening curly bracket or after the forward slash like so:

She admires { the straining bulge in your [pc.crotchCover] / your straining bulge}.

Then it will render as:
She admires the straining bulge in your [pc.crotchCover] .
She admires your straining bulge.

 

[lopbat]

I'm nearly done with the TF text as it stands, thanks to editing help from some anons + @voltfintrout! I just finished up the cumpire perk gain text, which has been the major delay (aside from some RL stuff getting me very much out of the writing mood). All that's left is the flexibility perk text, the face tf and some description stuff!

 

[lopbat]

I am officially DONE with all the writing! All I need is someone else to look things over for any obvious mistakes, and then I think it's ready to submit!

 

[lopbat]

been on hiatus (and still am) but apparently this got accepted while i was gone!

 

[razor777]

Missed opportunity by not including white bat TFs as an option ngl.

 

[lopbat]

Missed opportunity by not including white bat TFs as an option ngl.

You mean like a honduran white bat?
They're leaf-nosed bats same as vampires, and your skin and fur can be any colors you want. At some point your imagination's gotta fill in the blanks on its own, you know?

 

[Nino]

I have no idea if they're still around, but you could totally hit up Magic Ted, the creator of Aurora (the bat girl on Tarkus) to integrate her into your tf lore