Hey, some newbie dingus here. You might remember me from such amazing threads as:
THIS
And that's it, actually. But anywho, this is the slightly more official thread that cements my intent to see this idea through to the end so ooohh boooy, heeeere weeee gooooo.
I can't quite put a finger on how long I've been playing TiTS but one of my PC's formed the basis for this idea and then loads of other inspirations morphed it into something else. She's yuge and likes fitness, eating food like a dog in your biscuit tin and being the baddest ass in the room in a casual, aloof sort of way.
PLANZ: Much like the dream of sweetass swole gains, you gotta work for your goal. This character is meant to open up like a relationship and so you'll start in a kind of business-y way with her. Eventually, a bunch of things happen and clothes are removed, opening up the actual boning.
I've got several unique fetishes and scenes in store: Body worship, power exchange, play-fighting, strugglefucking, some Dom-tinted vanilla stuff, things to do with size differences, a kind of tongue-match-fight thing and a good ol' rousing round of bible study and missionary position (not really, promise).
She's quite open to most PC types but scenes and some of the narrative will change drastically depending on your character size (height, tone, thickness, etc), personality and even a hint of your chosen career. Expect surprises but in general, she will be assuming direct control during sex.
Taur and hyper stuff is now off the table and you'll be locked from talking to her if you're too tall. Those things are just not my bag and I don't even know if I can force myself to write it. (BUT IF YOU WANT TO SUGGEST SOMETHING, YOU DO IT, MAN (∩ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)⊃━☆ﾟ.*)
Tell me if I'm sucking somewhere, please. I've had a lot of (much appreciated) encouragement on my first two days but every ego needs a beating.
Tell me if my logic, parser or grammar is FUBAR or such. I've tried organising it into something comprehensible but my brain words might not translate to my typing words.
Tell me if there's something you'd like to see! I'll keep things open even if I can't promise anything.
Anything else you want to say, really. Open forum and all that.
THIS
And that's it, actually. But anywho, this is the slightly more official thread that cements my intent to see this idea through to the end so ooohh boooy, heeeere weeee gooooo.
(now with suggestions enabled)
The general gist: A half-gryvain, half-human ultra-buff fitness model who pumps all day and humps all night (but not really, because I'm a butt). She is bi-pedal, plsss do not miss this information.I can't quite put a finger on how long I've been playing TiTS but one of my PC's formed the basis for this idea and then loads of other inspirations morphed it into something else. She's yuge and likes fitness, eating food like a dog in your biscuit tin and being the baddest ass in the room in a casual, aloof sort of way.
PLANZ: Much like the dream of sweetass swole gains, you gotta work for your goal. This character is meant to open up like a relationship and so you'll start in a kind of business-y way with her. Eventually, a bunch of things happen and clothes are removed, opening up the actual boning.
I've got several unique fetishes and scenes in store: Body worship, power exchange, play-fighting, strugglefucking, some Dom-tinted vanilla stuff, things to do with size differences, a kind of tongue-match-fight thing and a good ol' rousing round of bible study and missionary position (not really, promise).
She's quite open to most PC types but scenes and some of the narrative will change drastically depending on your character size (height, tone, thickness, etc), personality and even a hint of your chosen career. Expect surprises but in general, she will be assuming direct control during sex.
Taur and hyper stuff is now off the table and you'll be locked from talking to her if you're too tall. Those things are just not my bag and I don't even know if I can force myself to write it. (BUT IF YOU WANT TO SUGGEST SOMETHING, YOU DO IT, MAN (∩ ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)⊃━☆ﾟ.*)
What I'd appreciate from YOU guys:
Tell me if I'm sucking somewhere, please. I've had a lot of (much appreciated) encouragement on my first two days but every ego needs a beating.
Tell me if my logic, parser or grammar is FUBAR or such. I've tried organising it into something comprehensible but my brain words might not translate to my typing words.
Tell me if there's something you'd like to see! I'll keep things open even if I can't promise anything.
Anything else you want to say, really. Open forum and all that.
CHANGE LOG
26/3/2017: IT BEGINS. Character appearance, brainstorming, introduction scenes.
EVERYTHING IN BETWEEN THAT DATE ^ AND THIS DATE \/ IS A BLUR but in general: Introduction scenes, talk scenes, pre-planning train/training/food/sex scenes (in my head)
29/03/2017: Talk scenes standardised (not specifically finished, might be open to changes), document arranged by contents, editing, 2 training scenes.
30/3/2017: 1 and a bit training scenes, more editing.
31/03/2017: Finished training scenes, starting Food! scenes, some edits, working on tailoring the dialogue a bit, ate a lot of chocolate that was covered in gold powder so now my poop is shiny.
01/04/2017: Finished Food! scenes, re-wrote some others, small edits, wondered if the symbolism of a douche getting gutpunched for being a douche is too subtle, theorized on some more... things.
02/04/2017: Some corrections made/edits (mostly things look pretty tight cuz I haven't had much reader commentary), AN APOLOGY SCENE FOR THE TAURS/TALL PEOPLE/HYPERS CUZ I TRIED BUT I COULDN'T DO IT WAAAHH, started on the one-off hanky panky and already it looks like a lot of work let alone the rest of the sex stuff planned.
03/04/2017: 5 intro sex scene variations cut down to 3 for normalcy's sake. Might've been too ambitious with that. Still, 2 of 3 variations finished, some edits, cleaning up the contents page, made some real freakin' good dinner but I used truffle oil for garnish and it came out more like... motor oil.
04/04/2017: 3/3 variations finished, Confidence scene finished (basically, it confirms that you're a good person), outlined ideas behind sex scenes, did 'lead-in' scene, had two new ideas for characters to write: Jesse, a confusingly gendered prudish butt-slut and Chad, a bro.
Chad is my greatest achievement yet. He is 5'10'' but will tell you he's 6', thinks trap music and vaporwave is 'the peak of musical genius', is definitely not educated and wears polo shirts. His scenes are:
BroJob: CHOO CHOO. Chad sucks you off.
No Bromo: Chad sucks off all the bulls in New Texas but doesn't touch their balls.
Bro-keback Mountain: Nail Chads butt because secretly he's a cowboy (excellent logic).
Bro-ly: Chad turns into the Legendary Super Saiyan and shouts at a carrot for an hour.
But seriously, Jesse is gonna turn out great.
05/04/2017: 3 out 5 main sex scenes mostly done. Cut down from 7 for ambitions/brain drains sake. Not sure if all 5 should be done too but will see. Edits and checks are welcome. Realised that I've been doing this thing most days for a week straight and that I should maybe take a day off to do normal things or something. PFFT, MORE LIKE, TALK ABOUT THIS BUTT-PRUDE GIRL IDEA MORE, EY FELLAS.
06/04/2017: Basically not much. Cleaned a bit for ease-to-read, almost finished sex scenes. Still somehow added 1k and a bit words in there, not sure how. Hopefully I can put it one more push to finish the main content then have people look it over. NO JOKE TODAY.
07/04/2017: did nuffin
08/04/2017: did nuffin
09/04/2017: WE'RE ALMOST THERE, FRIENDS. Some more text for the last scene and then boom.... something magical will happen. I think. I dunno, the next bit seems messy.
10/04/2017: EDITS. RanmaChan worked super hard and super fast and did a whole chunk of goodness overnight.
11/04/2017: Resolved all the edits/issues found in the doc that Ranma added, FeelsGoodMan. I'm keeping it open in case anyone else spots anything/has anything to add and then, it's off to the big wigs.
26/3/2017: IT BEGINS. Character appearance, brainstorming, introduction scenes.
EVERYTHING IN BETWEEN THAT DATE ^ AND THIS DATE \/ IS A BLUR but in general: Introduction scenes, talk scenes, pre-planning train/training/food/sex scenes (in my head)
29/03/2017: Talk scenes standardised (not specifically finished, might be open to changes), document arranged by contents, editing, 2 training scenes.
30/3/2017: 1 and a bit training scenes, more editing.
31/03/2017: Finished training scenes, starting Food! scenes, some edits, working on tailoring the dialogue a bit, ate a lot of chocolate that was covered in gold powder so now my poop is shiny.
01/04/2017: Finished Food! scenes, re-wrote some others, small edits, wondered if the symbolism of a douche getting gutpunched for being a douche is too subtle, theorized on some more... things.
02/04/2017: Some corrections made/edits (mostly things look pretty tight cuz I haven't had much reader commentary), AN APOLOGY SCENE FOR THE TAURS/TALL PEOPLE/HYPERS CUZ I TRIED BUT I COULDN'T DO IT WAAAHH, started on the one-off hanky panky and already it looks like a lot of work let alone the rest of the sex stuff planned.
03/04/2017: 5 intro sex scene variations cut down to 3 for normalcy's sake. Might've been too ambitious with that. Still, 2 of 3 variations finished, some edits, cleaning up the contents page, made some real freakin' good dinner but I used truffle oil for garnish and it came out more like... motor oil.
04/04/2017: 3/3 variations finished, Confidence scene finished (basically, it confirms that you're a good person), outlined ideas behind sex scenes, did 'lead-in' scene, had two new ideas for characters to write: Jesse, a confusingly gendered prudish butt-slut and Chad, a bro.
Chad is my greatest achievement yet. He is 5'10'' but will tell you he's 6', thinks trap music and vaporwave is 'the peak of musical genius', is definitely not educated and wears polo shirts. His scenes are:
BroJob: CHOO CHOO. Chad sucks you off.
No Bromo: Chad sucks off all the bulls in New Texas but doesn't touch their balls.
Bro-keback Mountain: Nail Chads butt because secretly he's a cowboy (excellent logic).
Bro-ly: Chad turns into the Legendary Super Saiyan and shouts at a carrot for an hour.
But seriously, Jesse is gonna turn out great.
05/04/2017: 3 out 5 main sex scenes mostly done. Cut down from 7 for ambitions/brain drains sake. Not sure if all 5 should be done too but will see. Edits and checks are welcome. Realised that I've been doing this thing most days for a week straight and that I should maybe take a day off to do normal things or something. PFFT, MORE LIKE, TALK ABOUT THIS BUTT-PRUDE GIRL IDEA MORE, EY FELLAS.
06/04/2017: Basically not much. Cleaned a bit for ease-to-read, almost finished sex scenes. Still somehow added 1k and a bit words in there, not sure how. Hopefully I can put it one more push to finish the main content then have people look it over. NO JOKE TODAY.
07/04/2017: did nuffin
08/04/2017: did nuffin
09/04/2017: WE'RE ALMOST THERE, FRIENDS. Some more text for the last scene and then boom.... something magical will happen. I think. I dunno, the next bit seems messy.
10/04/2017: EDITS. RanmaChan worked super hard and super fast and did a whole chunk of goodness overnight.
11/04/2017: Resolved all the edits/issues found in the doc that Ranma added, FeelsGoodMan. I'm keeping it open in case anyone else spots anything/has anything to add and then, it's off to the big wigs.
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