[Submitted] Mia, the Vanae-Morph

SheepPun

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Apr 30, 2016
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Finally finished! Mia is just a simple bar encounter for Burt's. Nothing super special.

She has three talk scenes(with four stories to tell about her encounters on Mhen'ga), three sex scenes(two of which support taurs albeit I sorta cheesed them), and she clocks in about 6000 words.

Gdoc

Editors are super appreciated as I'm not super confident in my writing right now. I'll also be skimming through her doc myself when I get the chance this week.
 

eveoflife

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Aug 29, 2015
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Fun addition to be sure, and no worries about her being to positive. If people like Anno, they'll like her. I like her appearance to, makes me want a oversized vanae tail.
 

Stadion

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Some edits out-tried to mostly leave your style intact. I really like the character and your writing, well done!
 
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SheepPun

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Thank you for support/edits!
Sorry I went up to the mountains with family for the weekend so I couldn't edit the gdoc, I'll be skimming through it right now
 

SheepPun

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Apr 30, 2016
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Alrighty! Submitted her!

Again thanks for all the edits and what not.