[Submitted] Gender-Customizable Jotun-Lupine

[birbs]

This is probably going to eventually be a 30+ page project, but here's the first few pages and rough character concept. I'll probably be working on other things while updating him but I just wanted to see if there's any feedback or thoughts about this, considering I'm pretty new at writing for CoCII! Thanks for your time!

 

[DaisukeKaiser]

First things first I really like the concept you're going for with this character and it's really really cool, combat seemed a lil too straightforward imo so I left a few suggestions for you to consider. Parser's looked to be in check but I'm no expert so I can't say for certain, all in all I really look forward to seeing how this character turns out because I'm always a fan of adding characters from myths into games so do try your best!

 

[birbs]

Update: I hit 10k words and am slowly working my way through the base character. Figured out a lot of technical issues but some parsers still might be fucked

 

[birbs]

After like 5 months I finally finished this! I'm hoping to submit soon so I'd love any feedback and edits to help Fenrir make it into the game!

 

[birbs]

Having a bit of trouble with the parser salad, what exactly are the sex and gender options for your character? Looks like male and female herm but then i read some mentions of them needing a dick so... also not a herm? Option for a really big dicked femme herm?

Other than that, looks good, i'm interested.

Yeah so basically he starts off as a cboy and then you can either make him a masc-presenting herm or fully female!! So like, the dick sex scene is for the one version of the character that has a dick but there are other scenes for other configurations. It is... unfortunately complicated and I tried my hardest to make it make sense with the parsers. It's my first big project so I'm not super comfortable with formatting readable parsers just yet ahah.

 

[Emerald]

Wait so it's (at base) a C-Boy yet the title of the thread calls him a tomboy aka a boyish female? Wat? Those aren't the same thing so maybe you should tinker that title.

 

[birbs]

Wait so it's (at base) a C-Boy yet the title of the thread calls him a tomboy aka a boyish female? Wat? Those aren't the same thing so maybe you should tinker that title.

fair enough! His concept changed between conception and writing so I never got around to changing it. Will do!