[Submitted] A handful of items and item changes

[TheShepard256]

So, I'd like to become a writer for TiTS (and a coder, but that's beside the point). Kind of. I have a few ideas, but I'm so inexperienced with writing fiction (let alone smut) that I've decided to start small. Like, really small. So, I've started working on a couple of items I'd like to see added to the game. Here's what I've got so far:

A Handful of Items

A Handful of Items - TheShepard256 Equipment A double-edged, double-bladed hardlight sword A modern gambeson A shield-boosting gambeson Consumables/TFs Expandex Condensol changes Lactaid changes Equipment //Two of these items make use of a new resistance flag, Padded. It’s similar to the alread...

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They're:

• Two armours and a weapon
• The opposite of/counterpart to Condensol
• A dragon-morph TF (which I'm personally not into, but I'd imagine others are and there's none in-game so why not?)
• A version of Laquine Ears without the hypersexual side effects
• The ability to get milk-type sexual fluids, rolled into the already-existing milk TF Lactaid
• A strawberry milk TF that's kind of redundant to a different item someone else is working on, so I'm not sure if I should keep working on it

I'm not sure if I'm actually ever going to finish all of this, though, so don't get too excited.

EDIT: I've removed the stuff I decided not to do and put them in their own document, so they don't clutter the original doc when I submit it:

TheShepard256's Cut Content

TheShepard256's Cut Content A repository of content that I planned, but ultimately didn't do; this document exists so I can remove them from the submission document while still maintaining their existence. Ordered by their original doc. A Handful of Items Strawberry Cream Dragon Fruit Laquine...

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[TheShepard256]

I've finished everything except the dragon-morph TF, the Laquine Ears variant and the strawberry milk TF; if anyone has any feedback, it'd be much appreciated. I'm pretty sure I've used the CoC2-style parsers correctly, but I'm less confident that the actual text is up to FenGame standards.

Also, if there's anything else you want to see in the dragon-morph TF, I'm open to suggestions; in particular, I'm really uncertain what the default vaginal flags should be, since there's currently no Draconic vagina type in the code.

 

[TheShepard256]

I've decided to give up on the strikethroughed TFs, for reasons specific to each one:

• I'm not invested in the dragon-morph TF enough to try overcoming my natural laziness to finish it
• As previously mentioned, someone else has already written their own strawberry milk TF, and I don't want to double-up on them
• Laquine Ears Classic wouldn't add anything that the already in-game Laquine Ears doesn't (even though the whole point was that it'd be cheaper with fewer effects), so I'm not confident it would be accepted

Fortunately, racial transformatives are not indicative of the kind of stuff I want to write for TiTS, so I don't think not doing these will hurt my future works.

So, this technically means everything's ready to be submitted. I would still like feedback on my writing before submitting, though, so if anyone has any (even if it's just that you don't see anything wrong) please post it below.

 

[TheShepard256]

And submitted, despite the complete lack of feedback I received.