There we are. I decided to link here the first fourteen pages of the project. It's not much, I know, I haven't reached the sex scenes yet, but I'd really like to start receiving some feedback before things get too complicated. This is the first time I write for this game and quite honestly I have no idea of what I am doing lol (the parser is killing me). Please leave all the comments, feedback and suggestion you want, and don't hold back. I so so want to get better at this.
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The Spectral Smith
The Spectral Smith Belmont01 Overwiew The spectral smith is a character that can be found in the Frozen Tower, in the Glacial Rift. This entire text takes place after the battle with the PC and/or Brint, when she simply disappears. I decided to expand her backstory and make some interaction with...