Searching for beta reader(s) for a full length femChamp/Kiyoko fic

[Lenore Ōtomo]

Link here.
Not going into details, but it's a fairly straight adaptation of CoC2's plot. However, I need a beta reader or two who can consistently read it and also isn't my friend.

 

[valk42]

sure, why not

 

[valk42]

okay, sorry, small family emergency came up! but now i've finished what you have so far and it's quite good. the missing scene of actually starting off on the adventure and getting to kiyoko will be integral, but clearly that's still in progress. i like it! excited to see a less-horny, gayer take on kiyoko