Scarlet the tainted Gryvain? Complete. Scraped

[runingman69]

I made this for fun halfway through I realized it would not get in I'll leave it up if you want to look at it fare warning it might be underwhelming.


https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xZukkvjOGD01xEshp23p8X_c6ff5Fx4TXiiFGJ8R1Sk/edit?usp=sharing

 

[Preacher]

I'm not entirely sure how being tainted gives you vampiric claws. To be honest she sounds like she'd better fit in a more fantasy setting.

I'll leave out my thoughts on the skeletal nature of the doc considering you're still working on it.

 

[runingman69]

I'm not entirely sure how being tainted gives you vampiric claws. To be honest she sounds like she'd better fit in a more fantasy setting.

I'll leave out my thoughts on the skeletal nature of the doc considering you're still working on it.

Good point.

 

[Aimless Rogue]

It's always nice to see the gryvain get some love, This probably Wouldn't get in the game but you should definitely keep at it.

 

[runingman69]

It's always nice to see the gryvain get some love, This probably Wouldn't get in the game but you should definitely keep at it.

If it does not get in oh well I plan on finishing it to the end even if it does not get in.

 

[NotYouNorI]

Another thing, which people seemed to have glossed over, is that gryvains are a race of all herms with internal balls.

 

[SoAndSo]

Yeah, like...

No.

Sorry.

 

[Thebiologist]

WTF this is 8 pages long and apparently a quest and there is no sex and it's mostly descriptions about what you want to happen instead of real descriptions and conversations.

 

[Savin]

Yeah this is absolutely nowhere near submission quality, I'm sorry to say. This is more like a project outline than a submission.

 

[runingman69]

I had my doubts that this would get in at all. So until I actually get good at smut I doubt I will write anymore characters. (At-least until I can do it properly) Also I never even submitted it.