[Ren'Py] Faction Paradox

[AlistairV]

Hey guys, this is my first post in which I'd like to introduce a game I am currently working on.
It is called “Faction Paradox", a first-person, choice-based adventure slave training game.
It is also based on loosely on the fictional tv series Doctor Who.

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Main plot
You play as a new member of the Faction Paradox. A cult dedicated to breaking down the laws set by the Time Lords. After unlocking the full capabilities of your ship, you must travel throughout the galaxy conquering the planets.


Gameplay
The game is made to play in a freeform manner. You have the freedom to travel anywhere you like but must train your stats individually.

Piloting:
There are two ways to pilot your ship.

Normal Piloting - Select your location, Take off, Helmic regulator x3, land

Fast Piloting - Selection your location, Take off, Locking down mechanism, Atomic Accelerator


Characters:
The Player:
You are a new recruit of the faction paradox who has woken from a regeneration. You are as new to the galaxy as it is to you.

Victoria:
Your personal A.I (Artificial Intelligence) , she was created as your personal advisor.

Liu Cheng:
An eighteen year old girl from Asaga high school who dreams of travelling further than the outskirts of China.



Fetishes:

Slave Training


Anal


Groping


Corruption


Voyeur

If your favorite fetish isn't listed above, let me know and I'll see if I can implement them into the game!

Screenshots

Download Links



Faction Paradox
Latest version:
MEGA


This is game is in development


This game is currently in development stage so expect many changes and unfinished patterns.
There is a lot I have planned and it all depends on the art I can afford so if you like this game, please consider supporting me on Patreon!
https://www.patreon.com/AlistairV

Thanks guys!

 

[AlistairV]

Hey guys! I've completely changed the controls to make it easier and smoother to move through the game!

 

[DawnCry]

Ok I tried the game and the lore overall isn't bad, however perhaps I missed it but what are the laws of the time lords?.

But well a few recommendations that I have about the game, hope it helps:

1º I have to ask you if you know that patreon has banned the incest fetish. Having it on your patreon page is asking for them to come.

https://www.patreon.com/guidelines#adult-content

"We also do not allow other fringe sexual fetish content, such as incest, necrophilia, or fetish content that is hard to distinguish from non-consensual sex."

2º The only character stat that I have found is the science stat, I would recommend at least something like charm and dialogue stat, perhaps even something more combat oriented if you add conflicts too.

3º The story flow is weird, just asking but trying to have a serious lesson how does it develop into revealing that you are an alien and taking the girl to new vegas?.

I just want to say that while the overall idea is good, how you are developing it is very weird and grindy. In fact I just don't truly understand the girls stats, I mean the usual would be something like love, lust and corruption, if you are into kinky things then perhaps adding a dom/sub stat or perhaps fetishes to the girl it would be better, even more perhaps you can relate the science stat to something useful by making a girl change her attitude thanks you an invention, making a machine related to mind control or influencing minds so that you can affect the fetishes and personality of the girl.

Those are just general ideas and I hope it helps.

 

[AlistairV]

Ok I tried the game and the lore overall isn't bad, however perhaps I missed it but what are the laws of the time lords?.

But well a few recommendations that I have about the game, hope it helps:

1º I have to ask you if you know that patreon has banned the incest fetish. Having it on your patreon page is asking for them to come.

https://www.patreon.com/guidelines#adult-content

"We also do not allow other fringe sexual fetish content, such as incest, necrophilia, or fetish content that is hard to distinguish from non-consensual sex."

2º The only character stat that I have found is the science stat, I would recommend at least something like charm and dialogue stat, perhaps even something more combat oriented if you add conflicts too.

3º The story flow is weird, just asking but trying to have a serious lesson how does it develop into revealing that you are an alien and taking the girl to new vegas?.

I just want to say that while the overall idea is good, how you are developing it is very weird and grindy. In fact I just don't truly understand the girls stats, I mean the usual would be something like love, lust and corruption, if you are into kinky things then perhaps adding a dom/sub stat or perhaps fetishes to the girl it would be better, even more perhaps you can relate the science stat to something useful by making a girl change her attitude thanks you an invention, making a machine related to mind control or influencing minds so that you can affect the fetishes and personality of the girl.

Those are just general ideas and I hope it helps.

Thanks a ton man, as you know the game is currently being developed at a fast pace. Most of your questions will be answered as the game goes along.

I hope this helps and thanks so much for giving it a try!