[Rejected] The Milk Bandit

[Natetheman223]

This is something I threw together this weekend. An ausar cowboy who steals milk (yours mainly) and sells it. A simple repeat encounter on Tarkus for those who want to get milked during combat. And you can humiliate him or get rid of him entirely. Fun stuff.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mH7_O2fCwnTCmVc0OH4De61aMKK-dlEve0MCFkBf-F8/edit?usp=drivesdk

Leave comments, concerns, complaints, etc. Just needed a break from my current, much bigger project.

EDIT: Alright guys, I'm no longer accepting changes beyond grammar issues and whatnot.

Rejected as of 4/24/19.

 

[ChromaTaphore]

This is very nice, although it'd be neat to have an anal variant of the "Ride Him" scene. Overall, 11/12!

 

[Meaty Ochre]

I always make at least one milky character so I like it a lot! Maybe add the option to allow him to milk your Steele after winning, or to skip combat entirely? Either way I hope to see it in game.

 

[Natetheman223]

This is very nice, although it'd be neat to have an anal variant of the "Ride Him" scene. Overall, 11/12!

I always make at least one milky character so I like it a lot! Maybe add the option to allow him to milk your Steele after winning, or to skip combat entirely? Either way I hope to see it in game.

Added anal ride scene and the option to give up and let him milk you after grabbing you.

 

[null_blank]

Would have liked to see some small variance based on what milk type your Steele is producing and those with the Mega Milk perk.

 

[Natetheman223]

Would have liked to see some small variance based on what milk type your Steele is producing and those with the Mega Milk perk.

I'll consider.

 

[Natetheman223]

Would have liked to see some small variance based on what milk type your Steele is producing and those with the Mega Milk perk.

Added both.

 

[ThasV]

All I see is a cowboy that would be very nice to have. Can you add a repeated win variant that let you wear his hat, adding a bit teasing in the smut and you can choose to take it as an accessory afterward.
Also forced knotting option would be great. We won, not him.

 

[Natetheman223]

All I see is a cowboy that would be very nice to have. Can you add a repeated win variant that let you wear his hat, adding a bit teasing in the smut and you can choose to take it as an accessory afterward.
Also forced knotting option would be great. We won, not him.

Added the ability to forcefully take his knot if vaginal sex. Also added the ability to take and give his hat as you please.

 

[null_blank]

I'm just glad he doesn't kidnap and keep Steele if they have the Mega Milk perk

Overall, I like this. It seems almost like a silly-mode only encounter but then again, I prefer things to be weird so I might be biased.

One thing I realized, if there's going to be passing of time due to the milking it's going to leave the player full/overfull again. Not sure the coders can do anything about that.

 

[Natetheman223]

I'm just glad he doesn't kidnap and keep Steele if they have the Mega Milk perk

Overall, I like this. It seems almost like a silly-mode only encounter but then again, I prefer things to be weird so I might be biased.

One thing I realized, if there's going to be passing of time due to the milking it's going to leave the player full/overfull again. Not sure the coders can do anything about that.

I did want a bit of humor in this, silly enabled or not. Hence some of the milk type comments, and the entire navy seal copypasta in silly mode.

Although, I mainly made this because I LOVE characters changing you during combat. Like nym-foe + doll maker, the slavebreakers, vanae content (that I wrote, might get added), and this.

 

[RevekXLR]

I just have to point out that his Melee weapon is fists, who in their right mind would go in a a hostile rush territory without atleast a combat knife or considering the setting and that he is a cowboy a Whip (https://wiki.smutosaur.us/TiTS/Whip)?
Or incase you want him to look like a guy that doesn't enjoy hurting people and leaving whip marks on the bodies of his milking targets, you could make him wear a Bio Whip (https://wiki.smutosaur.us/TiTS/Bio_Whip).

 

[Natetheman223]

I just have to point out that his Melee weapon is fists, who in their right mind would go in a a hostile rush territory without atleast a combat knife or considering the setting and that he is a cowboy a Whip (https://wiki.smutosaur.us/TiTS/Whip)?
Or incase you want him to look like a guy that doesn't enjoy hurting people and leaving whip marks on the bodies of his milking targets, you could make him wear a Bio Whip (https://wiki.smutosaur.us/TiTS/Bio_Whip).

He's more of a ranged guy. Hence the rudimentary revolver. It even says that shooting the player is his most used choice. I didn't want to give him a whip because he already has a lasso to catch people with, and I wanted the stun to make sense. Which would stun you? Being 1 2'd in the ribs and face, or being cut (not to say being cut wouldn't hurt like hell)?

Plus, knife damage does the same damage as fists (4 kinetic).

Lastly, I'd say it's a bit too late for equipment changes, especially when the scenes are already written.

 

[null_blank]

Wait...I'm noticing a logic flaw in here. Mega Milk people NEVER run out of milk they are always at 40% capacity. Consider putting a hard limit on how much milk Shawn takes or combat will go on forever...

Eh nevermind, I forgot you can just lose by lust.

 

[Natetheman223]

Wait...I'm noticing a logic flaw in here. Mega Milk people NEVER run out of milk they are always at 40% capacity. Consider putting a hard limit on how much milk Shawn takes or combat will go on forever...

Eh nevermind, I forgot you can just lose by lust.

Can you imagine that?

"Dude, Shawn, we've been here for 14 hours. Your milk bags are literally pouring on the floor."

"No, I'll get it all eventually..."

 

[null_blank]

Can you imagine that?

"Dude, Shawn, we've been here for 14 hours. Your milk bags are literally pouring on the floor."

"No, I'll get it all eventually..."

Pretty sure Steele would just give up and go to sleep. Then Shawn has to figure out how he's going to move all that milk by himself.

 

[null_blank]

Just a thought, though it might be a little late for this: If you've surrendered your milk to Shawn before perhaps a shortcut submit option would be available the next time you meet?

 

[Natetheman223]

Just a thought, though it might be a little late for this: If you've surrendered your milk to Shawn before perhaps a shortcut submit option would be available the next time you meet?

Added.