[Rejected] Harpy doggystyle scene

[Abbazabba]

My first attempt at trying to write something for this game. Just a simple victory sex scene with the option to cum inside or pull out. I appreciate any advice and recommendations I can get.

Harpy scene

Coder Notes •This is a victory sex scene for the basic harpy encounter. •This encounter is for PCs with a penis. •After the first "Doggystyle" scene the player has two options for how it ends, "Cum Inside" or "Pull Out" Victory Button information: Button Text: Doggystyle Descriptive text: Bend ...

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[Abbazabba]

Didn't make it in the first try but it wasn't a complete rejection so there's still hope. I got a lot of really constructive comments from Alypia, which I really appreciate. I'll be rewriting a decent chunk of things. If you were considering making some comments I'd hold off for now.