Just read through it, nice job on those scenes! I really like the idea of more outright demons and corrupt characters showing up in the starting zones as the story goes on. Makes it feel like the corruption's spread is a tangible danger while keeping the low-level areas fresh. You've set it up well too, her content is straightforward enough that it's not necessary to add to her, but you left room to expand if you get the itch to do so. Either way she's very interesting and I hope she makes it into the game!
