I wrote an anal sex scene for R.K Lah, and I'd like to submit it, but the problem is the instructions here said I need someone to check it first before submitting anything. I don't even know if it's good enough to be worth continuing, so I'd really appreciate it if anyone can read it and tell me if it's good enough to be accepted at all, and if there are any mistakes to be fixed or changes needed if it DOES get accepted. It's only my first ever submission and it's still a very rough draft with crappy parsing. I wrote it all like I usually write (aka: shit) which I'll keep as a first draft, and I made a copy to do all the proper changes on (italicizing, separate dialogue paragraphs, putting four dots instead of three...etc). I'm planning to make the final copy with the proper parsing. I'm still new to parsing, but I'll try to make it easier for the coders as best as I can. Edit: Here's what I've written so far: https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=11ITRWUu5QTU7WdwFmkgRy9stQjn_tMC3 (I separated the initial scene and the other scene into 2 docs) Question: do I need to get permission from Lah's creator (Nonesuch) before submitting anything? I'd like to write more scenes for other characters in the future, if fenoxo would have me. Thank you for reading, and I hope someone answers soon.