What's up, it's Sat 20th of February - World Pangolin Day. I know, I read about it a week ago myself.
So in honor of that, I'm releasing Part 1 of Saskia. In a nutshell it's a long intro for her at about 30 000 words - though there are some choices, meaning the player won't see all of it without save scumming or whatnot. There are also some personal notes about the character that will be edited out, mainly spoilers. The document is a 'rough draft' I would say, there are probably quite a few mistakes in it. I haven't edited it either - apart from some glaring issues. There might be a few scenes that only have headings without any content, that's not a mistake, I'll just have to do some scene studying - mainly about corrupted version of some player choices.
So next up is editing for Part 1 - oh yeah, I moved to a different system. I would have written all into a single file, but Docs performance started to tank at some point with enough words and it's a pain in the ass to use. So, I'm moving on to Part 2 which will be a different file mainly for UX. So yeah, next up is editing Part 1 (which you can do too!), at the same time I'm moving to a concept phase for Part 2 to figure out the arc and the story I want for it. In a nutshell, in Part 2 Saskia is a roaming random encounter with "primary" scenes - that is, moving her story forward - and repeatable "secondary" scenes - sex scenes, talk scenes, etc., etc.
For now I'll be doing editing to Part 1, concept writing for Part 2 and 3, and slowly gearing up for Part 2. I also have a second character in a concept/writing phase, but that's mainly to kill writer's block if (and when) it happens.
Without further ado, here's the 'readers' version of Part 1, happy reading-editing-whatever.
Saskia: Pieces of the Past - Part 1
Also, to mods: If possible, change the threads title to "Saskia: Pieces of the Past", big mc-thankies.
So in honor of that, I'm releasing Part 1 of Saskia. In a nutshell it's a long intro for her at about 30 000 words - though there are some choices, meaning the player won't see all of it without save scumming or whatnot. There are also some personal notes about the character that will be edited out, mainly spoilers. The document is a 'rough draft' I would say, there are probably quite a few mistakes in it. I haven't edited it either - apart from some glaring issues. There might be a few scenes that only have headings without any content, that's not a mistake, I'll just have to do some scene studying - mainly about corrupted version of some player choices.
So next up is editing for Part 1 - oh yeah, I moved to a different system. I would have written all into a single file, but Docs performance started to tank at some point with enough words and it's a pain in the ass to use. So, I'm moving on to Part 2 which will be a different file mainly for UX. So yeah, next up is editing Part 1 (which you can do too!), at the same time I'm moving to a concept phase for Part 2 to figure out the arc and the story I want for it. In a nutshell, in Part 2 Saskia is a roaming random encounter with "primary" scenes - that is, moving her story forward - and repeatable "secondary" scenes - sex scenes, talk scenes, etc., etc.
Part 1 -> Part 2 -> Sexpacks 1-3 -> Part 3 -> Sexpacks 4&5. Pangolin TF (probably) and mini expansion if I feel like it.
A submission to the team could be considered after Part 2 and Sexpack 1 are done.
A submission to the team could be considered after Part 2 and Sexpack 1 are done.
For now I'll be doing editing to Part 1, concept writing for Part 2 and 3, and slowly gearing up for Part 2. I also have a second character in a concept/writing phase, but that's mainly to kill writer's block if (and when) it happens.
Without further ado, here's the 'readers' version of Part 1, happy reading-editing-whatever.
Saskia: Pieces of the Past - Part 1
Also, to mods: If possible, change the threads title to "Saskia: Pieces of the Past", big mc-thankies.
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