[Patreon] Horizon of passion [v 0.4]

[Berskas]

Tags: 3d, incest, MILF, visual novell, renpy, oral sex.

OVERVIEW
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You are an ordinary guy in a norml American city. Soon, you will have the opportunity to leave your family in the area. Your mom and sister decided to change the situation and move to the new place. As it turnes out, you are going to move to a new place where you and your family are hoping for a new, radiant life.

Horizon of passion is a high-quality game that contains a visual novel for adults, which has an interactive and evolving storyline that awaits your ratings.

The game is translated into English and Russian languages.

he game supports Windows | Linux | Mac OS | Android.



Here you can support the game, make a huge contribution to its future and, in addition, you will receive additional rewards depending on the level of patronage that you prefer! With each new version of the game, with your support, I will do everything that you would not regret the time spent on this game!

Download game / Become a patron

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[Jash]

So, things we know about this game so far:
1) It is a porn game
> 1:a) It is a visual novel
2) It has women in it
> 2:a) Two of the women are called Julia and Betty
> 2:b) Betty is someone else's wife, and is blind
3) The main character is called Mark

Well that sounds... like a thing that exists.

Welcome and thank you in advance for visiting my Patreon page!

Temping fate a bit there, I think.

 

[Berskas]

So, things we know about this game so far:
1) It is a porn game
> 1:a) It is a visual novel
2) It has women in it
> 2:a) Two of the women are called Julia and Betty
> 2:b) Betty is someone else's wife, and is blind
3) The main character is called Mark

Well that sounds... like a thing that exists.


Temping fate a bit there, I think.

The main character is called Alex... The translation is not very good, but with the advent of the budget I will definitely hire a translator. I apologize for the inconvenience.

 

[Jash]

The main character is called Alex... The translation is not very good, but with the advent of the budget I will definitely hire a translator. I apologize for the inconvenience.

You're missing my point. Perhaps I wasn't being sarcastic enough.

What you have here is the most generic, pointless, empty sales pitch possible. You've literally just rocked up with 3 absolutely generic Daz screenshots and said "Imma make a porn game, gi'us cash!" You haven't told us what it's about. You haven't told us what kind of sexual content it will contain. You haven't mentioned any features that would set it apart from every other game out there. And frankly, you don't seem to have grasped how many games like this there are out there. There are so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so,so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so (have I made my point yet?) SO many games that look exactly like this, or have generic names just like this, or are about the same thing as this out there already. Literally HUNDREDS of games no different from this. This isn't even worth the effort of clicking on the link to your Patreon page. In the massively overcrowded field of amateur porn VNs, this reaches the lofty heights of Another One.

Also, while this barely matters at this point, if Mark isn't the protagonist, why do we get to hear him narrate his thoughts from the first person?

 

[Berskas]

You're missing my point. Perhaps I wasn't being sarcastic enough.

What you have here is the most generic, pointless, empty sales pitch possible. You've literally just rocked up with 3 absolutely generic Daz screenshots and said "Imma make a porn game, gi'us cash!" You haven't told us what it's about. You haven't told us what kind of sexual content it will contain. You haven't mentioned any features that would set it apart from every other game out there. And frankly, you don't seem to have grasped how many games like this there are out there. There are so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so,so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so (have I made my point yet?) SO many games that look exactly like this, or have generic names just like this, or are about the same thing as this out there already. Literally HUNDREDS of games no different from this. This isn't even worth the effort of clicking on the link to your Patreon page. In the massively overcrowded field of amateur porn VNs, this reaches the lofty heights of Another One.

Also, while this barely matters at this point, if Mark isn't the protagonist, why do we get to hear him narrate his thoughts from the first person?

I do what I do, and my job is to make the game in accordance with my plan, and only then start with USEFUL advice from the players, this is the first version, in the next versions I will do everything possible so as not to get bored of the monotony.

 

[Berskas]

UP

 

[Berskas]

Android version is now available. Have a good game!

 

[DawnCry]

@Jash leave caffeine really, that or dont use a new creator as a punching bag because you had a bad day.

Now, going to the point an important thing that should be said are the fetishes that are going to be implemented in the game, mainly because people usually play things based on that list of fetishes.

 

[Berskas]

@Jash leave caffeine really, that or dont use a new creator as a punching bag because you had a bad day.

Now, going to the point an important thing that should be said are the fetishes that are going to be implemented in the game, mainly because people usually play things based on that list of fetishes.

Yes, over time, on the advice of the players I will make the game as comfortable and diverse as possible. It’s good to understand that there are people who are in your position!

 

[Berskas]

Hello dear player, if it’s not difficult and there is a desire, write about what you think about the first version of my game, it will be useful for me to take into account the shortcomings and improve the game in the future!

 

[Berskas]

Updated to version 0.2

 

[karunama]

Honestly, everything @Jash criticized is warranted and can be converted into useful advice.

1) If your game seems super generic (and it absolutely does) then that would by necessity mean 'find something unique that you can use to differentiate your game from the millions of otherwise identical games out there'.

2) 'You haven't told us what it's about/what sexual content it will contain'. This is self-explanatory. Frankly, I don't *ever* click a link without knowing exactly what sorts of fetishes/pairings I can expect to find on the other side and many others here have the exact same policy. *Especially* Patreon pages. If you want us to give you money, you need to sell your game as hard as you can. That means a detailed list of fetishes and a summary of the story in the original post *at the absolute minimum*.

Frankly, you are fighting an uphill battle to begin with; your game engine and graphics are identical to hundreds of other very similar games and despite advertising on an English forum, your English isn't very good and a translator/editor isn't a top priority based on what you said before. For many people, those things alone are enough to write your game off forever. If you want to catch their interest (or anyone else's), you need to do more than just link a few generic screenies without telling us anything about the game itself.

 

[Berskas]

Honestly, everything @Jash criticized is warranted and can be converted into useful advice.

1) If your game seems super generic (and it absolutely does) then that would by necessity mean 'find something unique that you can use to differentiate your game from the millions of otherwise identical games out there'.

2) 'You haven't told us what it's about/what sexual content it will contain'. This is self-explanatory. Frankly, I don't *ever* click a link without knowing exactly what sorts of fetishes/pairings I can expect to find on the other side and many others here have the exact same policy. *Especially* Patreon pages. If you want us to give you money, you need to sell your game as hard as you can. That means a detailed list of fetishes and a summary of the story in the original post *at the absolute minimum*.

Frankly, you are fighting an uphill battle to begin with; your game engine and graphics are identical to hundreds of other very similar games and despite advertising on an English forum, your English isn't very good and a translator/editor isn't a top priority based on what you said before. For many people, those things alone are enough to write your game off forever. If you want to catch their interest (or anyone else's), you need to do more than just link a few generic screenies without telling us anything about the game itself.

Please note, you are right about the amount of information. But the plot of the game is different for everyone, yes, they are similar in that they are a family, etc., But my job is to offer my idea.

 

[Berskas]

Updated to version 0.3!

 

[Berskas]

New version!

 

[Berskas]

Update!