[Patreon] DonutBite - The Girl Next Door

[Donut Bite]

Hello everyone, this is Donut Bite.

A few words about me:

I love computer graphics and beautiful girls, so I decided to combine these two aspects of my life and create DONUT BITE with sensual and exciting ADULT GAMES. I hope I will conquer your heart with a brilliant stories and incredible quality that you haven’t seen in any other game.


"The Girl Next Door"

My first project is an EROTIC VISUAL NOVEL about relationship and desire between main character Jessica and her sexy neigbors.

This is the story of one of unforgettable nights in their house - with a lot of gentle and passionate sex scenes.
It’s called ”THE GIRL NEXT DOOR”, where Jessica tells us all about her sensual experiences and erotic fantasies.

Some preview images:

Thank you so much for your attention!

Your opinion is very important to me, so if you have any questions or suggestions, please write to me any time.
I hope I will not disappoint you.
Wish me luck!
Donut Bite
https://www.patreon.com/donutbite

 

[Jash]

Hmm, pretty good. The models are great and a very appreciated change from the same generic set of 3D models that every man and his dog are using lately, although Kevin sometimes looks rather off-model and doll-like. The animated scenes are quite impressive. The story is a nice simple "here are some hot people doing wild passionate fucking" scenario with a minimum of needless bullshit. So it's good for what it is. Have some critical feedback, though.

Firstly, it's Unity, which is a pretty awkward engine (if there's a way to save I dunno what it is, so I'm gonna have to start over from the beginning again next time and click through to get back to where I was up to)- Ren'py has become the standard for simple visual novel stories for a reason. The endlessly looping music gets annoying in rather less time than it would take you to finish the game. The voice audio during the animated scenes (taken from some porn movie, obviously) often has some irregularities that don't match the scene (such as very obvious slapping noises) and needs better editing. The graphics also don't always match the description of the scene (such as when Jessica describes her and Kevin staring into each others eyes while they fuck, while the scene has them clearly looking in different directions). And there are a number of minor writing issues I could raise (Jessice should not say "Oh god" when she's narrating what had happened to her to a third party in the past tense, "Oh god" is something you say in the present tense in response to your immediate situation). Also, it kind of beggars belief that Jessica could be surprised when Kevin and Natasha suddenly proposition her, considering that, when she arrived at their place, Natasha's dress and Kevin's short are both transparent (and Nastasha isn't wearing a bra).

For all my nitpicking (I do it because I'm good at it) it's still quite a good game and a good start to your career. Well done.

 

[Donut Bite]

Thank you for your positive feedback and constructive criticism.
I especially thank you for the part where you are pointing out my mistakes, shortcomings and things that should be improved.

Unity - I'm not a programmer, I’m just a beginner. I built this game with Unity - Fungus - Visual Programming But you are right, Unity is not the ideal engine, especially for a person who can not program well. It is very difficult to build a menu with options (save game, load, mute music etc), but I’m working on it. Next time I will add more options and new improvements.
I heard about Ren'py engine when the TGND was half made in the unity and I decided not to change the engine in mid-work. But now I have a moment to take a closer look at it.
Music - which option would you prefer? Longer songs with less visible loop?
Or every location with different song?
SexSounds - yes, I added shortcuts from movies available somewhere on the net. It is very hard to match the sounds perfectly to the scene, unless you yourself are recording them but next time I will try to find more appropriate sounds.
Graphics - yes, sometimes it’s hard to show several situations on a single graphic. The next part (new episode) will contain more images.
I’m very happy that you enjoyed the game. It’s great motivation for me!
Now I'm working on another episode with Jessica, Natasha and Kevin, more info soon.

Thanks again for your feedback