Nun Characters Project

[Niteshade]

Been working on it for a while now.

Please check it out and tell me your opinion.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1I864Y3mt3Gjkk4T6sgvQR_GFfr0acewm3pHP92jd8YI/edit?usp=drive_web

Note:This project is only 70% complete

(edit: Okay, i may have exaggerated a bit. SOMEONE told me that it actually is a really
rough draft and it can only be described as 5-10% completed. My bad)

Update 0.3:
-Edited Erbeth's "Talk About Religion" scene
-Some minor fix in spelling

(Note: I might need some help to convert the doc to the right format. If you know someone with a lot of free time and good with formatting, please tell me.)

Remember to Watch Thread to be informed about the latest update!

 

[shadefalcon]

70 % seems like a bit of a stretch tbh. Especially if you're gonna have the quests done with the first release.

In the sex scenes, or in general really, you can add parsers for the player characters stuff to spicen things up a bit.
F ex. Instead of just cum you can put in [pc.cum] and [pc.cumColor] if you want descriptions of it too.
Another example would be to add pc.lowerGarnments instead of "pants". Since not every character may wear pants. Some may only wear armor, but by using the correct parser the PC will be able to dress up/down with the correct lower clothing.
Some may also be completely naked. You might want to add a short blurb for the naked characters.
The gist of what I'm telling you is that parsers are cool. Use them to spice things up, but don't abuse them.

Of course you may already know this, but just in case you didn't know:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OI_BuyWxkAHno4yA7sGj1gCmLU62s9z6O1Gh40cfPt4/edit#

You should also read this probably:
https://forum.fenoxo.com/threads/how-to-submit-and-write-content.94/

Now on some feedback on the content:
Boobjob in the confession box? Brilliant dude. Simply brilliant
Looking forward to see the completed scenes.
There's not much content to judge by yet, but the nun characters seems alright. I like the trust meter. Making a cold person open up to you is always lovely.
Good luck

 

[Niteshade]

70 % seems like a bit of a stretch tbh. Especially if you're gonna have the quests done with the first release.

In the sex scenes, or in general really, you can add parsers for the player characters stuff to spicen things up a bit.
F ex. Instead of just cum you can put in [pc.cum] and [pc.cumColor] if you want descriptions of it too.
Another example would be to add pc.lowerGarnments instead of "pants". Since not every character may wear pants. Some may only wear armor, but by using the correct parser the PC will be able to dress up/down with the correct lower clothing.
Some may also be completely naked. You might want to add a short blurb for the naked characters.
The gist of what I'm telling you is that parsers are cool. Use them to spice things up, but don't abuse them.

Of course you may already know this, but just in case you didn't know:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OI_BuyWxkAHno4yA7sGj1gCmLU62s9z6O1Gh40cfPt4/edit#

You should also read this probably:
https://forum.fenoxo.com/threads/how-to-submit-and-write-content.94/

Now on some feedback on the content:
Boobjob in the confession box? Brilliant dude. Simply brilliant
Looking forward to see the completed scenes.
There's not much content to judge by yet, but the nun characters seems alright. I like the trust meter. Making a cold person open up to you is always lovely.
Good luck

Thanks for your feedback! Glad you like it!

It still need a lot to fix though. I plan to add more into the project, so stay tuned.

 

[Ormael]

Interesting writing so I hope after been "shaken out" by "certain person" that was still I think quite nice to tell you it in easy way now I expect you will sail toward port called accepted submission ^^

 

[Thayr]

Are we allowed to join these sexy nuns?

 

[Niteshade]

Are we allowed to join these sexy nuns?

I plan to add the "Become a Follower" option, but idk if Fen will allow me to. Let's just hope I can get a reply from him..

Religion section is rarely discussed as it is quite a touchy subject, even in TiTs.

 

[Xeivous]

I was under the impression that one could do something with the Stormguard or whatever the dudes on Uveto were called whenever they got into the game. So I'm doubtful that having other options for faith would be discouraged.

 

[Niteshade]

I was under the impression that one could do something with the Stormguard or whatever the dudes on Uveto were called whenever they got into the game. So I'm doubtful that having other options for faith would be discouraged.

I see. Well, I'll toast to that!

In the meantime, I am thinking of adding more nuns for the shrine. Can anyone suggest what species I should use? Currently planning for a Galotian, Gryvain and Demoness(forgot what Sera morphed into) species.

 

[Lancer]

I see. Well, I'll toast to that!

In the meantime, I am thinking of adding more nuns for the shrine. Can anyone suggest what species I should use? Currently planning for a Galotian, Gryvain and Demoness(forgot what Sera morphed into) species.

Sera is demon morph who was previously human. There isn't a race of demons currently.

 

[Niteshade]

Sera is demon morph who was previously human. There isn't a race of demons currently.

Ah okay. Thanks!

 

[Lancer]

No problem. I'm going back to join the rest of the lurkers in the shadows. I will not post for another four months, unless I see another new guy with a trivial question. Good byeeeeee

 

[Niteshade]

No problem. I'm going back to join the rest of the lurkers in the shadows. I will not post for another four months, unless I see another new guy with a trivial question. Good byeeeeee

*tears forming and going down my cheeks* So long, mi capitan...and mi freund...

 

[NotYouNorI]

Ah okay. Thanks!

Well, the closest thing to a in-game demon-like species would be the Vulkrim, actually.

 

[Niteshade]

Well, the closest thing to a in-game demon-like species would be the Vulkrim, actually.

ah yes, that is correct indeed.

 

[shadefalcon]

Btw. When are the nuns getting lipples and a cum addiction?

 

[HugsAlright]

What if one of the nuns was a nun Kiro fucked on her nun fucking adventure or whatever that was?

 

[shadefalcon]

What if one of the nuns was a nun Kiro fucked on her nun fucking adventure or whatever that was?

I'd dig a small easter egg of some sort referring to that.
I guess it couldn't have been the two of them though. Since they're both virgins...unless... Blowjobs.
And anal doesn' count either

 

[Noob Salad]

What if the nuns were virgins wearing chastity belts?

No but for real though, I'd be up for a Scylla reference.

 

[Niteshade]

What if one of the nuns was a nun Kiro fucked on her nun fucking adventure or whatever that was?

There are still some characters in progress. There MIGHT be one with some history with Kiro, just saiyan'

 

[Niteshade]

What if the nuns were virgins wearing chastity belts?

No but for real though, I'd be up for a Scylla reference.

Hm...One of the nuns-in-progress might be wearing a chastity, but I can't say the same for all of them. They chastise (is that the right word? idk.) themselves by their own free will, and if they wear chastity, I'm afraid it will make them look like they're 'forced' to preserve their virginity

 

[Niteshade]

Btw. When are the nuns getting lipples and a cum addiction?

SPOILER ALERT:

Spoiler

One of them mught be an ex-cum addict, with the option to "re-enter" them into addiction

 

[Niteshade]

UPDATE!

Added a few new names in the doc.
Edited some scenes.

Note: Make sure you follow the Thread for more update announcement.

 

[Noob Salad]

@Niteshade: By "re-enter" them, surely you mean indul-I mean manage their lifestyle choice in a controlled and safe manner.

 

[Niteshade]

@Niteshade: By "re-enter" them, surely you mean indul-I mean manage their lifestyle choice in a controlled and safe manner.

 

[Ormael]

Heh manage their lifestyle choice in a controlled and safe manner in TiTS? Blasphemy ^^

@Niteshade Well you mya go with conroled one or controled that gonna get possibility to get out of control at some point.

 

[Niteshade]

New Update! I've written what I changed in the Thread's Post (the one at the top)

I might need some help with Formatting

I don't really understand how they work. If you know anyone who have a lot of free time, please tell me.

@Ormael @noobsaleh @shadefalcon @HugsAlright @NotYouNorI
@Xeivous @Thayr @Lancer

 

[HugsAlright]

If you have any questions I'd be happy to help, or I can just explain some stuff in a PM. Might be asleep when you ask though.

 

[Niteshade]

If you have any questions I'd be happy to help, or I can just explain some stuff in a PM. Might be asleep when you ask though.

Thanks.

 

[Ormael]

For me you can tip me on discord when you see me around on it and not in red dot mode. Normaly may be more busy with Xianxia but if you tip me I would find time to look on your writng too. For now...I would say I will try look over it in next 2-3 days and leave some constructive comments.

 

[Niteshade]

For me you can tip me on discord when you see me around on it and not in red dot mode. Normaly may be more busy with Xianxia but if you tip me I would find time to look on your writng too. For now...I would say I will try look over it in next 2-3 days and leave some constructive comments.

Awesome! Thanks bud!