Manticore Girl "Milky Titfuck"

[strawberry_tea]

Hello I made a victory scene giving the manticore girl in the foothills a milky titfuck.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XEu2yWOZUL7psy8EaKhqStFsNqyrRzDPOfWYiOuMOjM/edit

This is my first submission to COC II and I'm not entirely sure if I wrote the parsers correctly so criticism is much welcome.

 

[QualityCuntrol]

I won't comment on the parsers, since they're not my area of expertise (lol), but the content looks good so far! I'd added some minor comments to the doc itself, but I also wanted to add that it might be interesting to add some more stuff relating to different types of milk? We know she likes milk milk, but she may not be expecting, say, honey, for example (and tbh, honey-as-lube would be a lot...stickier. than milk). This is more of a "hey, suggestion for something additional to enhance the solid stuff you've already got" rather than, you know, "you must do this or you have Failed," so feel free to ignore!

 

[strawberry_tea]

Thanks for the advice. I couldn't find any parsers relating to different milk types so I'm not entirely sure about the formatting but I'll definitely keep the idea in mind.