I’m posting this to get criticism, feedback, and advice about an idea I want to work on for T.i.t.s.
I’ve never written something like this before so if I’m making any obvious mistakes or if you have any good advice please let me know.
Basically I want the player to be able to take out a loan by putting themselves and their assets (anything they own like their ship, weapons and armor, contents of your cargo hold, and slaves) up as collateral. You then have a limited amount of time to pay back the loan or else you get a Bad End where you’re sold into debt slavery.
In game mechanics terms you set the terms of your potential indentured servant contract, which is stuff like
Consent to performing sexual services: Yes or No
Consent to being genetically modified: Yes or No
Consent to being mentally altered: Yes or No
Which determines how big of a loan you get (more yeses means more money) along with how much your ship is worth and whether or not you’ve modded yourself. The bigger your loan is the bigger your monthly (or possibly weekly) payments on it are and if you miss too many then you trigger the Bad End when you land on any planet with a peacekeeper presence.
*Edit: I forgot to mention that I wanted to use Attica & Teron as the NPCs you make your contract with if I can get permission to use them. Maybe change the name of their business to Sentient Acquisitions & Loans.
If you land on Mhen’ga while Penny’s not on your crew you get a special scene where she comes to arrest you. If she loves you enough and you have a mischievous personality you could convince her to look the other way just once, but if you come back a second time a squad of other peacekeepers ambushes you and takes you in.
If you can’t convince her you have to fight her, if you lose and you’ve Throbb’ed her up enough she fucks you up the butt before she takes you in, if silly mode is on she’ll say something about seeing you again for “conjugal visits”.
If she’s a bimbo she still comes to arrest you, but you seduce her, fuck her into submission, and escape. Unless you are also a bimbo in which case you still fuck, but she successfully arrests you at the end, probably because you let her handcuff you for the sake of kinky fun during the act.
If you’re thinking “Then I just won’t go to any of those planets” don’t worry, if you stay away from them long enough a high level bounty hunter will show up to take you in. (If silly mode is on he’ll be a mandalorian who freezes you in carbonite)
In terms of bad ends I have a LOT of ideas for them.
In the game your contract would get auctioned off and people you’ve met will show up to bid on you giving you different bad ends depending on who you’ve met and also what you agreed to in your contract.
The default bad end is that your cousin buys your contract and makes you his/her servant.
If you said no to everything in the contract you’re just forced to do menial labor at your cousin’s summer home on a planet near the rush while wearing either a sexy butler or a french maid outfit (depending on your femininity/masculinity) with your cousin stopping by in between finding the probes to relax and force you to wait on him/her hand and foot.
If you said yes to mental alteration you also get hypnotized into thinking you’re a loyal British butler or a flirtatious(but also loyal) french maid who has dedicated their life to serving Jack/Jill Steele. You eventually work off your debt, but because you cousin has no legal obligation to un-hypnotize you, you gladly keep working for them for the rest of your life.
If you said yes to being modded you get transformed to look like a buff, hunky butler or a busty, blonde maid.
If you said yes to sexual use then you get an entirely different ending where your cousin employs you as a “Stress Relief Officer” on board their giant ship forcing you to pleasure all of his/her crew-members. At first this is just Dane or Feruze (depending on whether or not you completed Myrellion) but over time you cousin gathers a variety of crew-members, who you must often please two or three at a time, until your “relief sessions” eventually become “crew-wide team and morale building exercises” A.K.A ship-wide orgies.
Although you cousin never makes use of you he/she whores you out on every planet the ship visits and secretly masturbates to footage of your escapades on the ship’s security cameras, literally getting off on your humiliation and degradation.
If you only said yes to sexual use on the contract your cousin eventually takes over Steele Tech and forces you to work off the last of your debt as an “Office Relaxer” at Steele Tech Headquarters. After you’re finally free of your debt you use the wealth of sexual experience you’ve gained to become an extremely proficient and sought after prostitute.
If you also said yes to being modded your body becomes something of a community project for the crew-members, with their collective goal being to make you as sexy as possible.
Of course with each crew-member having their own opinions and preferences and new crew-members joining regularly you quickly experience a staggering number of transformations as the crew debates the merits of different forms, features, and races, often testing them out on you before deciding whether or not to keep them.
Ultimately your body is their plaything, in every sense of the word, and the Taint from the drugs and random mutagenic compounds they test on you first turns you into an unapologetic slut, and eventually into a nympho-maniacal sex toy.
After your cousin becomes C.E.O of Steele Tech and takes you off the crew you discover that you’ve become addicted to being modded and beg your cousin for more mods. He/She agrees to give you all the mods you could want(at the cost of them coming out of your pay) if you agree to star in Steele Tech’s new line of ultra-porn films.
You do, and you mod yourself between each film to the point that you look like a new character in each one. The films are a hit, and you spend the rest of your life as an ultra-porn star famous for their constantly changing gender and appearance while your cousin gets even richer as your talent agent/owner.
If you said yes to all three questions your mind ends up just as much a plaything as your body. At first the crew makes do with simple hypnosis to make you act out their fantasies for them, but that all changes when they get their hands on a slave collar that gives them complete control of your mind.
With the collar each crew-member programs a unique personality into you, that of their perfect, ideal lover, which you automatically assume whenever you’re alone with them or whenever you hear them call that personalities’ name. With so many crew-members competing for your time you barely get to spend any time as yourself, and that time grows shorter and shorter with each new crew-member. Eventually there are enough crew-members that every minute of your day is divided up among them and your original personality fades into your subconscious.
When your cousin finds the last probe the crew pool their money to buy the ship and your contract and your many different personalities spend the rest of your life happily serving the ship’s crew.
If you said yes to mental alterations but not modding then you get a version of the first ending with the addition that the crew often hypnotizes you for fun.
With those who are interested in you sexually doing so for their own sexual fantasies and those who aren't attracted to your particular gender or body simply amusing themselves by making you play fetch like a dog, wait on them like a servant, or be a footstool for them to rest their feet or other appendages on.
You still earn your freedom eventually, but this time but you’ve become hopelessly addicted to being hypnotized, so you become a prostitute who specializes in serving races like the Daynar, the Tarratch, and the Slyveren.
And that’s just the default ending!
If you’ve gotten over 190 points on the Disco 3000 quest Sera will buy your contract, making you work as an indentured employee of The Dark Chrysalis to pay off your debt.
If you said no to sexual use then Sera, pissed that as your employer she can’t bone you until you’ve paid off your debts, will force you (as your Mistress) to wear a full body BDSM chastity set 24/7 and to dress up in an “Angel Slave” costume when you’re at work.
If you agreed to be modded she’ll mod you into an angel (feminize your body and face, de-muscle you, long blonde hair, glowing white eyes, white feathered wings, a mod that lets you blush on command, and a tiny implant in your scalp that projects a holographic halo over your head at all times).
She’ll force you to act the part when at work too, pretending to be an innocent, virginal, angel enslaved to an evil succubus, blushing like an embarrassed virgin at every lewd product you sell to customers, and trembling in fear whenever Sera teases you in front of them about how much she’ll enjoy defiling you once she brakes the locks on your “Holy Armor”.
Of course Sera isn’t kidding and once you finally pay off your debt she takes the two of you on a week long vacation so she can “defile” you properly, at the end of which (if you agreed to be modded) she gives you some mods to change your appearance to look like a fallen angel, which you gladly take.
Freed from your debt, but too late to stop your cousin from taking over Steele Tech, you decide to become business partners with Sera and help her successfully franchise The Dark Chrysalis into one of the premiere mod boutiques in the galaxy, with her as a very dominant C.E.O and you as her submissive V.P. lover.
If you said yes to being used sexually then Sera delights in using you as a sex slave while you’re employed at The Dark Chrysalis (In other words, it's business as usual between you two) and you get the same “franchise” ending as above.
If you also agreed to be modded then Sera also uses your body as a living advertisement for the shop by testing all the new mods she sells on you first.(If exhibitionism is high then she often leaves you naked and tied up in a compromising position in the store’s window)
She even offers your body to customers as a “Free* Demo” of the new mods.
*Free Demo Slut is only for use by paying customers.
(If silly mode is on have Sera wearing a purple pimp suit in this scene)
If you also agreed to mental alteration then Sera periodically sends you to Vava Groom on Uveto to attend their “Obedience School” as a reward for working hard at the shop.
If silly mode is on and the PC is a furry, then Sera will force you to recreate the “Pet Shaming” meme for her amusement at some point.
Other less developed ideas for Bad Ends are:
Getting bought by Big T if you’re Treated
Getting bought by Bethany Carver if you’re a certified whore at Beth’s Busty Broads
Getting bought by Kally and Kiro if you’ve become their mutual lover
Getting bought by Riya if you’ve had a kid with her
Getting bought by Stella (or more specifically her parents) if you’ve gotten her pregnant
Getting bought by Iced Teats for their special celebrity ice cream parlor if you have high lactation.
Somehow ending up as Bizzy’s co-star and property of your own porn studio (Don’t even ask me how that happens yet I just think the idea is hot.)
Getting bought by Black Iron if you’ve met Shizuya and are a max level mercenary
Getting bought by Nova Securities if you saved Ushamee Neykkar, her squad, and the crew of The Kashima during The Kashima Incident
Getting bought by Tamani Corp if you participated in The Breedwell Incubation Center enough
Getting bought by Xenogen Biotech if you worked with Dr. Haswell, worked with Dr. McAllister, and worked with Kimber
Getting bought by Xotchi if you’re her painslut
Getting bought by Amara Faell if you completed Kara Quest 2 and Ballad of the Ice Queen and still have a positive relationship with Shade. Amara forces you to join The Black Void and work for her so she can “keep you out of trouble for the sake of Shade’s happiness” The two of you eventually form a mutual respect, especially after you save her life from an assassination plot by one of her lieutenants.
If you know Kaede you eventually find out she is Amara’s daughter and convince Amara to reconnect with her.
In the end you, Amara, Shade, Astra, and possibly Kaede, Zeke, Cass, Kayla and even Anno all form an unusual but ultimately loving family together.
Rat’s Raiders rescuing you before you can be auctioned off if you befriended them on Zheng Shi. You become a Robin Hood style pirate with their help and dedicate the rest of your life to robbing you cousin and your uncle blind as karmic retribution for their lives of scheming and thievery.
Now if you’ve read all of this (First off Thank You for making it this far, and Secondly I’m so sorry) I’m sure you must be thinking “Hey this sounds like a lot of really complicated content to write for your first submission ever! Didn’t you read Magic Ted’s How to submit (and write!) content thread where he says specifically not to do the exact specific thing you’re doing right here?”
Yes, yes I did read that.
That’s why I’m posting this in “Ideas” first, and I never said this was going to be my first submission. If I’m smart I’ll write something else small first, I just wanted to get feedback and criticism on this first and maybe if I’m lucky someone who works on the game will tell me if this kind of mechanic is even possible in T.i.T.S or if it’s something Fenoxo even wants in game.
So please tell me what you think of what I’ve got down here.
Is it Hot? Is it Not?
Are my ideas God’s gift to porno games or have I somehow managed to kill a boner you didn’t even have?
Do you just want to point out all my spelling and grammar mistakes?
Frankly at this point I’ll take anything.
I just want to know what you think!
I’ve never written something like this before so if I’m making any obvious mistakes or if you have any good advice please let me know.
Basically I want the player to be able to take out a loan by putting themselves and their assets (anything they own like their ship, weapons and armor, contents of your cargo hold, and slaves) up as collateral. You then have a limited amount of time to pay back the loan or else you get a Bad End where you’re sold into debt slavery.
In game mechanics terms you set the terms of your potential indentured servant contract, which is stuff like
Consent to performing sexual services: Yes or No
Consent to being genetically modified: Yes or No
Consent to being mentally altered: Yes or No
Which determines how big of a loan you get (more yeses means more money) along with how much your ship is worth and whether or not you’ve modded yourself. The bigger your loan is the bigger your monthly (or possibly weekly) payments on it are and if you miss too many then you trigger the Bad End when you land on any planet with a peacekeeper presence.
*Edit: I forgot to mention that I wanted to use Attica & Teron as the NPCs you make your contract with if I can get permission to use them. Maybe change the name of their business to Sentient Acquisitions & Loans.
If you land on Mhen’ga while Penny’s not on your crew you get a special scene where she comes to arrest you. If she loves you enough and you have a mischievous personality you could convince her to look the other way just once, but if you come back a second time a squad of other peacekeepers ambushes you and takes you in.
If you can’t convince her you have to fight her, if you lose and you’ve Throbb’ed her up enough she fucks you up the butt before she takes you in, if silly mode is on she’ll say something about seeing you again for “conjugal visits”.
If she’s a bimbo she still comes to arrest you, but you seduce her, fuck her into submission, and escape. Unless you are also a bimbo in which case you still fuck, but she successfully arrests you at the end, probably because you let her handcuff you for the sake of kinky fun during the act.
If you’re thinking “Then I just won’t go to any of those planets” don’t worry, if you stay away from them long enough a high level bounty hunter will show up to take you in. (If silly mode is on he’ll be a mandalorian who freezes you in carbonite)
In terms of bad ends I have a LOT of ideas for them.
In the game your contract would get auctioned off and people you’ve met will show up to bid on you giving you different bad ends depending on who you’ve met and also what you agreed to in your contract.
The default bad end is that your cousin buys your contract and makes you his/her servant.
If you said no to everything in the contract you’re just forced to do menial labor at your cousin’s summer home on a planet near the rush while wearing either a sexy butler or a french maid outfit (depending on your femininity/masculinity) with your cousin stopping by in between finding the probes to relax and force you to wait on him/her hand and foot.
If you said yes to mental alteration you also get hypnotized into thinking you’re a loyal British butler or a flirtatious(but also loyal) french maid who has dedicated their life to serving Jack/Jill Steele. You eventually work off your debt, but because you cousin has no legal obligation to un-hypnotize you, you gladly keep working for them for the rest of your life.
If you said yes to being modded you get transformed to look like a buff, hunky butler or a busty, blonde maid.
If you said yes to sexual use then you get an entirely different ending where your cousin employs you as a “Stress Relief Officer” on board their giant ship forcing you to pleasure all of his/her crew-members. At first this is just Dane or Feruze (depending on whether or not you completed Myrellion) but over time you cousin gathers a variety of crew-members, who you must often please two or three at a time, until your “relief sessions” eventually become “crew-wide team and morale building exercises” A.K.A ship-wide orgies.
Although you cousin never makes use of you he/she whores you out on every planet the ship visits and secretly masturbates to footage of your escapades on the ship’s security cameras, literally getting off on your humiliation and degradation.
If you only said yes to sexual use on the contract your cousin eventually takes over Steele Tech and forces you to work off the last of your debt as an “Office Relaxer” at Steele Tech Headquarters. After you’re finally free of your debt you use the wealth of sexual experience you’ve gained to become an extremely proficient and sought after prostitute.
If you also said yes to being modded your body becomes something of a community project for the crew-members, with their collective goal being to make you as sexy as possible.
Of course with each crew-member having their own opinions and preferences and new crew-members joining regularly you quickly experience a staggering number of transformations as the crew debates the merits of different forms, features, and races, often testing them out on you before deciding whether or not to keep them.
Ultimately your body is their plaything, in every sense of the word, and the Taint from the drugs and random mutagenic compounds they test on you first turns you into an unapologetic slut, and eventually into a nympho-maniacal sex toy.
After your cousin becomes C.E.O of Steele Tech and takes you off the crew you discover that you’ve become addicted to being modded and beg your cousin for more mods. He/She agrees to give you all the mods you could want(at the cost of them coming out of your pay) if you agree to star in Steele Tech’s new line of ultra-porn films.
You do, and you mod yourself between each film to the point that you look like a new character in each one. The films are a hit, and you spend the rest of your life as an ultra-porn star famous for their constantly changing gender and appearance while your cousin gets even richer as your talent agent/owner.
If you said yes to all three questions your mind ends up just as much a plaything as your body. At first the crew makes do with simple hypnosis to make you act out their fantasies for them, but that all changes when they get their hands on a slave collar that gives them complete control of your mind.
With the collar each crew-member programs a unique personality into you, that of their perfect, ideal lover, which you automatically assume whenever you’re alone with them or whenever you hear them call that personalities’ name. With so many crew-members competing for your time you barely get to spend any time as yourself, and that time grows shorter and shorter with each new crew-member. Eventually there are enough crew-members that every minute of your day is divided up among them and your original personality fades into your subconscious.
When your cousin finds the last probe the crew pool their money to buy the ship and your contract and your many different personalities spend the rest of your life happily serving the ship’s crew.
If you said yes to mental alterations but not modding then you get a version of the first ending with the addition that the crew often hypnotizes you for fun.
With those who are interested in you sexually doing so for their own sexual fantasies and those who aren't attracted to your particular gender or body simply amusing themselves by making you play fetch like a dog, wait on them like a servant, or be a footstool for them to rest their feet or other appendages on.
You still earn your freedom eventually, but this time but you’ve become hopelessly addicted to being hypnotized, so you become a prostitute who specializes in serving races like the Daynar, the Tarratch, and the Slyveren.
And that’s just the default ending!
If you’ve gotten over 190 points on the Disco 3000 quest Sera will buy your contract, making you work as an indentured employee of The Dark Chrysalis to pay off your debt.
If you said no to sexual use then Sera, pissed that as your employer she can’t bone you until you’ve paid off your debts, will force you (as your Mistress) to wear a full body BDSM chastity set 24/7 and to dress up in an “Angel Slave” costume when you’re at work.
If you agreed to be modded she’ll mod you into an angel (feminize your body and face, de-muscle you, long blonde hair, glowing white eyes, white feathered wings, a mod that lets you blush on command, and a tiny implant in your scalp that projects a holographic halo over your head at all times).
She’ll force you to act the part when at work too, pretending to be an innocent, virginal, angel enslaved to an evil succubus, blushing like an embarrassed virgin at every lewd product you sell to customers, and trembling in fear whenever Sera teases you in front of them about how much she’ll enjoy defiling you once she brakes the locks on your “Holy Armor”.
Of course Sera isn’t kidding and once you finally pay off your debt she takes the two of you on a week long vacation so she can “defile” you properly, at the end of which (if you agreed to be modded) she gives you some mods to change your appearance to look like a fallen angel, which you gladly take.
Freed from your debt, but too late to stop your cousin from taking over Steele Tech, you decide to become business partners with Sera and help her successfully franchise The Dark Chrysalis into one of the premiere mod boutiques in the galaxy, with her as a very dominant C.E.O and you as her submissive V.P. lover.
If you said yes to being used sexually then Sera delights in using you as a sex slave while you’re employed at The Dark Chrysalis (In other words, it's business as usual between you two) and you get the same “franchise” ending as above.
If you also agreed to be modded then Sera also uses your body as a living advertisement for the shop by testing all the new mods she sells on you first.(If exhibitionism is high then she often leaves you naked and tied up in a compromising position in the store’s window)
She even offers your body to customers as a “Free* Demo” of the new mods.
*Free Demo Slut is only for use by paying customers.
(If silly mode is on have Sera wearing a purple pimp suit in this scene)
If you also agreed to mental alteration then Sera periodically sends you to Vava Groom on Uveto to attend their “Obedience School” as a reward for working hard at the shop.
If silly mode is on and the PC is a furry, then Sera will force you to recreate the “Pet Shaming” meme for her amusement at some point.
Other less developed ideas for Bad Ends are:
Getting bought by Big T if you’re Treated
Getting bought by Bethany Carver if you’re a certified whore at Beth’s Busty Broads
Getting bought by Kally and Kiro if you’ve become their mutual lover
Getting bought by Riya if you’ve had a kid with her
Getting bought by Stella (or more specifically her parents) if you’ve gotten her pregnant
Getting bought by Iced Teats for their special celebrity ice cream parlor if you have high lactation.
Somehow ending up as Bizzy’s co-star and property of your own porn studio (Don’t even ask me how that happens yet I just think the idea is hot.)
Getting bought by Black Iron if you’ve met Shizuya and are a max level mercenary
Getting bought by Nova Securities if you saved Ushamee Neykkar, her squad, and the crew of The Kashima during The Kashima Incident
Getting bought by Tamani Corp if you participated in The Breedwell Incubation Center enough
Getting bought by Xenogen Biotech if you worked with Dr. Haswell, worked with Dr. McAllister, and worked with Kimber
Getting bought by Xotchi if you’re her painslut
Getting bought by Amara Faell if you completed Kara Quest 2 and Ballad of the Ice Queen and still have a positive relationship with Shade. Amara forces you to join The Black Void and work for her so she can “keep you out of trouble for the sake of Shade’s happiness” The two of you eventually form a mutual respect, especially after you save her life from an assassination plot by one of her lieutenants.
If you know Kaede you eventually find out she is Amara’s daughter and convince Amara to reconnect with her.
In the end you, Amara, Shade, Astra, and possibly Kaede, Zeke, Cass, Kayla and even Anno all form an unusual but ultimately loving family together.
Rat’s Raiders rescuing you before you can be auctioned off if you befriended them on Zheng Shi. You become a Robin Hood style pirate with their help and dedicate the rest of your life to robbing you cousin and your uncle blind as karmic retribution for their lives of scheming and thievery.
Now if you’ve read all of this (First off Thank You for making it this far, and Secondly I’m so sorry) I’m sure you must be thinking “Hey this sounds like a lot of really complicated content to write for your first submission ever! Didn’t you read Magic Ted’s How to submit (and write!) content thread where he says specifically not to do the exact specific thing you’re doing right here?”
Yes, yes I did read that.
That’s why I’m posting this in “Ideas” first, and I never said this was going to be my first submission. If I’m smart I’ll write something else small first, I just wanted to get feedback and criticism on this first and maybe if I’m lucky someone who works on the game will tell me if this kind of mechanic is even possible in T.i.T.S or if it’s something Fenoxo even wants in game.
So please tell me what you think of what I’ve got down here.
Is it Hot? Is it Not?
Are my ideas God’s gift to porno games or have I somehow managed to kill a boner you didn’t even have?
Do you just want to point out all my spelling and grammar mistakes?
Frankly at this point I’ll take anything.
I just want to know what you think!
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