Alright, I should probably list the version (0.4n2: Halloween pt.3-1) and my character build.
Male human, 188cm tall, 80kg, black skin, simple bronze breastplate, simple bronze leggings, Gol claw, reptilian tail, basic arms, legs, feet, human face, two human blue eyes, pointed, scaled ears, short black hair, "Hips", huge rear, flat manly pecs, genital slit, 16cm x 4 cm lizard penis, well-proportioned heated balls.
Bugs I found:
Lacertium does not fully transform you into a lizan.
If you have flat, manly breasts, Estros does not increase your breast size.
Vaginally lubing up Terry does not make you lose your vagina's virginity.
And now the errors, I have bolded them for ease of reading/finding.
Upon reporting back to Lei after finishing the first escort mission:
Sounds of the royals having fun come from a room further along, but Lei instead takes a left from the entrance, leading you into a small but well-lit room. It seems like this was intended to be a small guest room - there’s a bed, a narrow desk with a single chair, and a wardrobe opposite it, but no other furniture. With you and Lei in, there’s not really any space for Kai, and he decide to wait in the lounge deeper in the suite. ('Decide' should be 'decides')
Buying and having sex with Roa:
You moan in desire, even as you do your best to fuck the lagomorph the way he’s begging you to. It’s not easy, even with how badly you want to; the little bunny-slut’s asshole is like a vice lined in hot velvet, almost audibly sucking your big reptile dick in. Pleasure races up your spine, tingling underneath your skin, shivering through your body as Roa’s tailhole milks you greedily, determined to make you come so badly it’s almost impossible to pull yourself free. (I only say this because the word 'cum' has been used so many times, using 'come' seems really off for the setting)
Sitting sex with Fera:
You squeeze her pert mounds firmly and begin to fondle her, your fingers occasionally pausing to circle and twist her perky nipples, as she kisses you again. You try to hold your voices back to avoid discovery, but the sensation is too much, and loud moans escape both of you as Fera bounces desperately in your lap. (The comma is not needed)
Pumpkin pie quest: male werewolf fucking Terry after garlic:
You can feel him tugging as he tries to pull free of your swollen ['knot' couldn't be parsed]. His face contorts as he pulls with all his might, forcing you to pull away in turn lest he simply drag you along the ground, but finally the two of you manage to pull free. (No knot value identified despite being available in your temporary character description)
Choosing to suck Terry off during anal catch:
Terry’s dainty little piece is so cute, really. He’s really going to need to work it hard, but you just know he can pull it off. Your lips close around the tip in a mock-nip, then you noisily slurp it insides, burying your nose up against Terry’s belly. You lavish loving licks upon the pre-dripping piece of meat between your lips, tasting salty-sweet washing over your tastebuds and crooning with pleasure as you do. ('insides' does not need the extra 's' and and taste buds is two words)
Running into the patrolling guards and replying with “adventurers” when given the prompt :
He (Also works with She) sigh, lowering his hand. “So, I guess you can go. Try to be a decent human being, though? Please?” ('sigh' should be 'sighs')
Upon inquiring about the Vixen to Orvin while Terry is in the party:
“It’s hard to trust you again, but it's a tough world out there. Take care of yourself, Terry,” Orvin give a gruff nod to the fox. (The comma should be a period and 'give' should be 'gives')
Okay, that's all I found so far! If I find more, I'll be sure to add onto this!
Male human, 188cm tall, 80kg, black skin, simple bronze breastplate, simple bronze leggings, Gol claw, reptilian tail, basic arms, legs, feet, human face, two human blue eyes, pointed, scaled ears, short black hair, "Hips", huge rear, flat manly pecs, genital slit, 16cm x 4 cm lizard penis, well-proportioned heated balls.
Bugs I found:
Lacertium does not fully transform you into a lizan.
If you have flat, manly breasts, Estros does not increase your breast size.
Vaginally lubing up Terry does not make you lose your vagina's virginity.
And now the errors, I have bolded them for ease of reading/finding.
Upon reporting back to Lei after finishing the first escort mission:
Sounds of the royals having fun come from a room further along, but Lei instead takes a left from the entrance, leading you into a small but well-lit room. It seems like this was intended to be a small guest room - there’s a bed, a narrow desk with a single chair, and a wardrobe opposite it, but no other furniture. With you and Lei in, there’s not really any space for Kai, and he decide to wait in the lounge deeper in the suite. ('Decide' should be 'decides')
Buying and having sex with Roa:
You moan in desire, even as you do your best to fuck the lagomorph the way he’s begging you to. It’s not easy, even with how badly you want to; the little bunny-slut’s asshole is like a vice lined in hot velvet, almost audibly sucking your big reptile dick in. Pleasure races up your spine, tingling underneath your skin, shivering through your body as Roa’s tailhole milks you greedily, determined to make you come so badly it’s almost impossible to pull yourself free. (I only say this because the word 'cum' has been used so many times, using 'come' seems really off for the setting)
Sitting sex with Fera:
You squeeze her pert mounds firmly and begin to fondle her, your fingers occasionally pausing to circle and twist her perky nipples, as she kisses you again. You try to hold your voices back to avoid discovery, but the sensation is too much, and loud moans escape both of you as Fera bounces desperately in your lap. (The comma is not needed)
Pumpkin pie quest: male werewolf fucking Terry after garlic:
You can feel him tugging as he tries to pull free of your swollen ['knot' couldn't be parsed]. His face contorts as he pulls with all his might, forcing you to pull away in turn lest he simply drag you along the ground, but finally the two of you manage to pull free. (No knot value identified despite being available in your temporary character description)
Choosing to suck Terry off during anal catch:
Terry’s dainty little piece is so cute, really. He’s really going to need to work it hard, but you just know he can pull it off. Your lips close around the tip in a mock-nip, then you noisily slurp it insides, burying your nose up against Terry’s belly. You lavish loving licks upon the pre-dripping piece of meat between your lips, tasting salty-sweet washing over your tastebuds and crooning with pleasure as you do. ('insides' does not need the extra 's' and and taste buds is two words)
Running into the patrolling guards and replying with “adventurers” when given the prompt :
He (Also works with She) sigh, lowering his hand. “So, I guess you can go. Try to be a decent human being, though? Please?” ('sigh' should be 'sighs')
Upon inquiring about the Vixen to Orvin while Terry is in the party:
“It’s hard to trust you again, but it's a tough world out there. Take care of yourself, Terry,” Orvin give a gruff nod to the fox. (The comma should be a period and 'give' should be 'gives')
Okay, that's all I found so far! If I find more, I'll be sure to add onto this!
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