Infrith > Quickie
1. Sounds strange to say her top gets pulled over her bottom. I get that her bustier is probably all her clothing, but this should probably just be 'dress' or 'skirt' or 'bustier's hem' or one of the other words used to describe her fur bustier when talking about the lower part of it.
2. 'insensate' instead of 'insenstate'
1. Sounds strange to say her top gets pulled over her bottom. I get that her bustier is probably all her clothing, but this should probably just be 'dress' or 'skirt' or 'bustier's hem' or one of the other words used to describe her fur bustier when talking about the lower part of it.
2. 'insensate' instead of 'insenstate'