[Implemented!] Rat Thieves - 'Rat's Raiders' on Zheng Shi

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Hi, I'm posting yet another project :p

In all seriousness, I promise this will be the last big project I formally begin until my backlog is either refused or accepted, but I swear this is another task that just gripped me, I've had so much fun getting this going. If I didn't start this I wouldn't have been happy with any other overall interpretation of representing this gang. When I saw they were all mouse-morphs I knew I had to be there, dammit! Well it took some time but I did get there.

Without further ado, I am writing representatives for one of Zheng Shi's Top 5 gangs, 'Rat's Raiders': the Rat Thieves.

They're a gang of Rodenians and Mouse-morph characters that are described as Robin Hood types. I haven't gotten shot down so it's time for the thread now that there's something presentable. I think I've stuck well to the vision for them. More importantly, I feel like I've hit their personalities just right. Now that I have their encounter down and the combat ironed out, here's the brief bullet point summary.

Rat Thieves - Roden Hoods of Zheng Shi
They're greedy! They're fun! They're cute!

They're the rats!

  • Rat Thieves are a 3 vs. PC fight. There are only males and females, and they have different skills and items they will use in combat. They're meant to be weaker overall than the other Zheng Shi enemies and have no specialties except safety in numbers.
  • Their main schtick in a fight is to stun and tackle the player, then try to steal money or gems them in combat. If they get something, the looter can flee with your $$! Meaning, they can win even if they lose.
  • They are always encountered attempting to shake down the player. The PC can pay them in credits, gems, offer oral, or breastfeed them to get out of it. Small chances for sex offers to fail, though!
  • Sex scenes are all threesome oriented. That's what drove me to make them a multi-foe fight in addition to all of the above stuff. Robin Hood gang? Merry rats? Yes please!
  • Since a Rodenian Female is present, includes Ear Sex. Rodenians were added over a year ago weren't they? Time to see a fleshed out one in regular space.

Update - August 9th
-Added Intro and Identification scenes.
- Finished ironing out combat.
-Added pcKnown tag to denote text for Rats knowing Steele's Identity
-Edited all that was worked on, meaning only sex scenes have to be written now.




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That's the gist of it. All the gangs in Zheng Shi are based on the player's own templates: Jumpers = Smugglers, Corona Lords = Mercenaries, Cyber Punks = Tech Specialists, and Star Vipers = Lust/Teasers. What is more appropriate than mixing a couple of those into three mice?

There is one thing that I direly need help with, however. The gang description from Fen/Savin is that Rat's Raiders delight in robbing megacorporations. Steele is the sire of a massively successful CEO. There is so much potential in the interaction if I can just figure out how to make it an organic point of continuity!! For all my ideas I just don't know how to make it jive with what I've created so far!

Nobody on Zheng Shi knows Steele and when you pretend to be a slave, there's even a line saying "better not use the Steele" part here when talking to Ardia the first time.

I'm loathe to tying a decent bit of content into losing to them because some people just might not lose, ya know. But please: Give me your thoughts & ideas on how to get these klepto pirates to learn about Steele! That's my last obstruction into feeling perfect about all I've got planned.

And besides, if they learned about the PC's heritage, they'd keep it to themselves.

Well, that's that. Don't hesitate to let me know about anything you think might be off tone or just plain wrong, I'll engage with that pronto. I feel like I've made some very strong progress on this despite some laziness, and all I really have to do are the sex scenes. If I can get a good way to introduce them and even make them learn about Steele, that'll be very quick and easy to slot in as well.
 
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Your codex chimes about the rodenian species at the exact wrong time and the gang is able to id you from the extremely specific and specialized codex you have. Alternatively Urbolg sell them the information about you being on the station. Third, your quest is public knowledge and they found out that the probe you need is on the station and put out feelers on who is asking about said probe. Fourth, your cousin being a giant massive douche feeds them the info.
 

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Fuuuuuck! I cant get that silly mode "we're the rats!" song out of my head whenever I think of these guys!
 

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>Ear sex

Y tho

For win scenes, would it be possible to make it a choice to do the earsex thing? (So that people who are squicked out by it, but otherwise likes ratpeople, can get it on with them)
 
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Can we choose who we have sex with a some people might not want to be forced in sucking or fucking a rat boy and just focus on the girls or vice versa.
 
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I'll add a +1 to @PalletTown's suggestion of the Rival selling them the info. Sets them up as a bit more of an antagonist with the "actively trying to stop the PC reaching the probe" angle.
This looks good from the skim read I've given it, but I've not gone into detail to avoid spoilers.
 

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If they're always shaking down the player, maybe have them mention that they're robin hood types that give to the needy or whatever. Then maybe have two options to pay them off, one where your reasoning is avoiding combat and the other being you want to be charitable. There could be multiple paths to them finding out who you are, but that could be one where they eventually take a liking to you and just ask if you have creds for a donation instead of threatening you.
 

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Since you're on a storyline "planet" one mode of making them aware of the PC's small but growing fame/infamy is by the incident at the Stellar Tether. Any way you look at it, Steele made some kinda mess there for someone be it the pirates, the UGC or the citizens of Novahome.

...and how would they extract money from my Steele? Seduction would be a welcome path.
 
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>Ear sex

Y tho

For win scenes, would it be possible to make it a choice to do the earsex thing? (So that people who are squicked out by it, but otherwise likes ratpeople, can get it on with them)

On the document, you can see I've laid out everything exactly how it would look in game. You already have a choice of doing it or not, it's a unique scene involving the female Rodenian who is always present in the interactions. The four win scenes are [TripleFellatio], [Fuck Them], [Ride Him], and [Ear Sex], the latter of which is putting the Rodenian's biology to work.

Can we choose who we have sex with a some people might not want to be forced in sucking or fucking a rat boy and just focus on the girls or vice versa.

Offer Oral will not be changing, that is neither a win nor a loss scene. It's an attempt to get out of a lousy situation by the PC and was designed with the whole 'pretend slavery' route in mind too. As for the others, maybe yes, maybe no, we'll see where the writing goes.

If they're always shaking down the player, maybe have them mention that they're robin hood types that give to the needy or whatever.

That's what I hope already comes across in the writing that's there on the doc. If you read the Shakedown texts, and the fight scene texts, they repeatedly say things along the line of 'doing what they're doing to help others', 'we're not trying to hurt you!', 'there are others who need this!', 'you're carrying so much there's no reason you can't share!'. If that needs to be expounded, do let me know.

Since you're on a storyline "planet" one mode of making them aware of the PC's small but growing fame/infamy is by the incident at the Stellar Tether. Any way you look at it, Steele made some kinda mess there for someone be it the pirates, the UGC or the citizens of Novahome.

...and how would they extract money from my Steele? Seduction would be a welcome path.

It seems to be strong towards the rival passing information. That does seem fair. I'll ask Fenoxo about that part, then. I think there's an alright path with one of the encounters after a while going something like, "Now we know who you are, Mr./Ms. CEO. Just our luck that an adventurous corporate stooge would be wandering around frontier space all alone."

Then go from there.
 

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I've reached another milestone. I edited all that I wrote and checked for consistency etc, added some stuff to combat, and most importantly, fleshed out the rats further. I have added an intro event with Urbolg that procs 3 days after beating him and will allow the rats to spawn when you see it. I also added a check to most of the dialogue (and will be adding it as I go), called pcKnown. This is to denote text that plays randomly or otherwise after the rodents learn about Steele's identity.

And I also added the event itself, where they put two and two together :D


The familiar chittering of klepto-rodents fills the air. Sighing, you grip your [pc.weapon] and raise your guard. Although nothing is there, you still hear a snicker just ahead. Before the next corner, you find three rats all squatting near a wall, looking at something on an old gadget of some sort. When they spot you, they don't scurry your way this time. Instead, they stand slowly, looking at you with <i>extremely</i> smug faces. You quirk one eyebrow and level your [pc.weapon].

"Hey {pcTall: big} [pc.boyGirl!]" the [rat0.furColor] rodenian waves. "You thought you could keep that secret forever, huh?"

They approach you slowly, hands on their batons, tails waving and bodies shaking with some barely contained emotion. "Ha! You were right under our noses this whole time, and to think we hadn't even scratched the surface of what you've squirreled away!" the mouse boy announces.

"Oh yeah! We're working on sharing your secret to our friends! You're gonna regret stepping foot here!" the half-rodenian [rat2.boyGirl] muses.

Wait, what secret? You lower your [pc.weapon]. {pcBimbo: "Ooh, and what secret is that? I thought I showed you all of mine! /pcBro: "There're no secrets between fuck buddies. Did we not go over that?" /pcKind: "And what secret are you so sure is mine?" /pcMisch: "Oh yeah? I've got a lot of secrets, and you know but a few." /pcHard: "Really? Do tell."}

Chuckling softly, the rodenian brings the weird gadget - a tablet of some old design - to her face and and reads like she's presenting on a stage. "Oh, you know, just a little tip we got from a concerned party," she begins, clears her throat, and begins narrating. "There will be a bothersome little adventurer coming your way. You'll know them by their smug sense of superiority, and their complete lack of honesty and virtue. However this troublesome child may look compared to what they were born as, the fact remains: they are the {son/daughter} of Victor Steele, late CEO to Steele Tech, direct descendant and inheritor. What you do with this information is up to you, but they are <i>not</i> to be left alone."

A thread snaps in your mind hearing the name of your father. The words you were hearing all spilled away at that moment, and now you know… now <i>they</i> know… <i>thanks to your {bitch/bastard} cousin.</i> Who else could have sent that kind of message?

"[pc.name] Steele!" the rodenian points at you, "inheritor of the Steele Tech megacorporation! Just our luck that a corporate stooge was walking around Zheng Shi! Haha! And would you believe it? It took us a while to figure it out, but who else fits the bill besides you?"

"A CEO!"

"All to ourselves!"

They all level their batons at you and surround you as usual. "Now, {Mr./Ms.} CEO, you're our primary mark. Don't worry though, we're keeping you all to ourselves. And don't mistake us, we're not going to hurt you, but you're going to start owing us a lot more! You can start atoning for your crimes one payment at a time!"}

You feel a cold rush of fear, and even some hesitation. A bead of sweat drips down your head looking at these rats. The only small comfort is that they won't give out your name to the other pirates here, but that doesn't make future encounters any easier...



Also here's the Urbolg event. This is going to be the absolute first thing you see before any other rat content so might as well. I like how this came out, too.

Inside the hangar, you cast a wary eye over your ship, satisfied that it remains unmolested. Whatever the pirates hanging out here are doing, at least they're not big on trying to crack your airlock. Before you take your next step, a loud <b>bang</b> breaks your concentration. Instinctively, you hunch down, looking in the direction of Urbolg's workshop, nothing that he isn't there.

A loud crash follows several more thick gunshots and a metallic clamor precedes two small figures darting out from around a pile of junk, running and panting past you on all fours - mostly, they stagger like drunken animals - as they flee from the source. They move too fast for you to appraise aside from their all-black getup and mouse-like appendages.

"Get out, you fekken' pests!" you hear Urbolg bellow, and another two rats scream as they dive out of the way of turret fire. "Ye thought you could steal from Urbolg?" he snarls, firing off another shot. Squealing like wounded animals the last two rush past you with the speed of lightning bolts, stopping for nothing as the stocky korgonne shuffles out from behind the piles of discarded metal.

"Oi, new [pc.boyGirl], move over," he raises his furry, oil-soaked hand and walks past you insistently, squeezing off another shot from his handcannon close to your [pc.ears]. He shoots into the dark, and before you mentally quip about his blind shot, you hear a shrill scream and the tell-tale boom of a collapsing shield in the distance. That act of vengeance quells the anger in the fluffy mechanic, and he holsters his gun before turning to you.

"Bloody rats, rootin' around for what they haven't earned, can't keep their paws to 'emselves!" he grouses. You inquire as to what all that was about.

With a sly grin, he ushers you back to the workshop, talking while he walks. "One of the five gangs here on the station. You'll get to know 'em all eventually, but those ones?" he stops and grips a piece of metal, "the fekken' worst! Paste-fingered morons think I'm so old and stupid that I won't see 'em tryin' to steal!"

His sigh is more like a ragged growl, and you quickly put two and two together as he wipes his arm off with a dirty cloth. "Those rodents work in groups, so ye best be wary, new [pc.boyGirl]. You may have proved yourself to 'ol Urbolg, but they don't give up, and they're fekken everywhere. Watch yourself now, y'hear? Lest you <i>want</i> to lose everything you've got!"

{pcSexedUrbolg: Nodding, you smile and thank Urbolg, watching his tail thump against a table behind him. /else: You nod lightly, thanking him for the information as you move on.}

Looks like you'll have to watch out for a bunch of thieving vermin now...
 

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On the document, you can see I've laid out everything exactly how it would look in game. You already have a choice of doing it or not, it's a unique scene involving the female Rodenian who is always present in the interactions. The four win scenes are [TripleFellatio], [Fuck Them], [Ride Him], and [Ear Sex], the latter of which is putting the Rodenian's biology to work.

Ah, I'm a dum-dum, I didn't read the fucking doc before posting

Welp, Imma fuck me some rats once this gets going... Looking forward to seeing it in the game!
 
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Hello hello, sorry for the silence. I've been working all night and made some more progress. I don't know how much I wrote exactly but I think about 5000 words so far today. I didn't get anything done the last 4 days or so because my bad sleeping habits finally caught up and ruined me. And after I said I wanted to get near done by today. Big mistake on my part. No worries, I'm back on task.

Now, from a suggestion I have made the rats far more precious. I have added a 'Rat Reputation' scale, and a variety of options. This feature will basically complete the mini story of them being sicced on the PC by the Rival. Let me just line it up, then!

1) The 'Rat Reputation' (Rat Rep) will scale from 0-29, 30-69, and 70-100, LowMedHigh. The Rat Reputation will kick in when they discover the PC's Identity (6 wins or losses cumulatively). The numbers will go up when you successfully seduce the rats, OR, upon beating them in combat, you have the option to [Be Nice], forgoing after-battle Loot and Sex. The idea is you work to get them to respect you and like you enough that you can switch their focus from you to your Cousin, a little table turning. The Rat Rep scale also leaves an open door for post-Zheng Shi content for me, and of course, thinking about the rats fucking with Jack/Jill at the end like they fuck with Urbolg at the beginning is funny to me. All in all, I was worried as hell about adding it late, but I think it works and I can smooth out the wrinkles later.

If you'd like to see all the bits added so far, the new flag is GoodCEO. This denotes text where the rats have a friendly rivalry with the PC. Now you might be asking "Why not just make them stop attacking?" well, that's up to the end of Zheng Shi to decide I think. In the meantime, this bit of text exists at the end of [NotEnemies], the scene at 100 Rep where you tell them to knock off their crappy treatment of you.

The [rat0.furColor] mouse-girl analyzes you up and down, frowning. She takes one step forward, "I was thinking for a little bit," she smiles {pcTall: up to /else: at} you, "you're alright, {mister/miss} <i>not-</i>CEO. Almost everyone in the gang has something nice to say about you… even we do. I guess we can forget about that whole 'mark' thing. Just give us a few days and we'll spread the word. Boss won't be happy though, and, uhh, no offense…" she pauses.

"If we see you, you're still fair game, being unaffiliated 'n all!" She points a fearless finger at you, blushing madly even through her fur. "Anyway, if you're feelin' combative we could use the practice, you're no pushover! And you're… kinda cool I guess…"

I see them as being scrappy, honorable little rascals and this matches their personality as I've made it so far. No other enemy treats the player like this. Indomitable spirits are my #1 thing too :D

Lastly, this does have some effects gameplay wise! This will disable [Harvest Cum] loss scene, it will stop the rats from attacking you if you have too many gems when paying the toll with shiny stones, and generally, they just react nicer to you. Also, when you pay their toll, they will ask for a certain amount of wealth, and if you fight them and lose, they take more. Being respected means they always take the amount they would if you paid the toll, not extra.

I'm quite happy with that result because I, at first, envisioned them being nice to smol PCs but that never panned out and I made their dislike of Tall PCs more of a "we're going to overcome this challenge fuck yes let's do it!" and they get so fired up.

2) I wrote out the rest of the PC Defeated (Robbery) stuff, so there's that. So, I'm definitely ready to get started with sex. And the first will, of course, be making the rats worship your dongs and balls. Or vaginas.

But let's be honest, cock worship > all. Also, my Gangbang with the Jumpers made it into the game recently. May the rats be worthy too!
 

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Took a look at the doc, looks very good so far. One suggestion: consider a 40% threshold for the 'Offer Milk' scenario. 80% full seems like a lot combined with the 20% chance to fail. I know it's not hard to run with a full tank but it seems silly that folks with the MegaMilk perk would fail to meet this requirement most of the time.
 

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Took a look at the doc, looks very good so far. One suggestion: consider a 40% threshold for the 'Offer Milk' scenario. 80% full seems like a lot combined with the 20% chance to fail. I know it's not hard to run with a full tank but it seems silly that folks with the MegaMilk perk would fail to meet this requirement most of the time.

I actually set Offer Milk to 20% chance because in my mind I feel they'd be more inclined to want to drink than be offered a simple blowjob. But that will probably change since Lighterfluid suggested they both be 40% and the Pheromone Aura cloud effects can reduce it by 10%, each. And there's more than a few of those in-game.

edit: you know I only just now realized that I must have misread your post.

At the moment without me changing anything, Offer Oral has a 40% chance to fail, 60% chance to succeed, but if you have a pheromone cloud effect that becomes 20-80.

Offer Milk by default has 20-80 because of what I said in my above post.

Just thought I'd clear that up because :oops:
 
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You guys deserve an update. I don't really like adding on to the update logs in my OPs unless it's a fairly big milestone like adding extra functionality and so forth. The smut grind isn't worth regaling all that much.

But now that I'm back in the habit and have broken another bit of writer's block (especially after getting outside TiTS work done again!) I want to share what's been done. Rats are of course full steam ahead. And Fen has also been setting up the Cyber Punks, some Kaithrit enemies. Cats and Rats are reigning in TiTS right now :p

Regardless, I finished [TripleService], the scene where rats worship your dicks or pussies. The scene has Taur support as well. 14000 words have gone into making this entire scene properly. Now you should understand that a lot of those words are just copy pastes for refs and such because of the amount of genital support in play, cum flavors, so forth. It's more like 10k. And don't worry, I've checked some scenes in MSWord by setting it up the way my characters would see them. About 2100 words for having 2 cocks, and 2000~ in general for everything else. Cunnilingus is a bit long!

Next I'll write up the [Fuck Them] scene and I was able to mentally cobble that together today.

I write on, I write on. These precious rats will grace Zheng Shi someday!
 

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Breaking news: I am still sort of slow. That's okay, because I just hit another milestone. I'm serious this time I swear, the rest of the doc doesn't rely on massive amounts of variation!

I finished [Ride Him / Ride Them], clocking 11000~ words, accounting for taking mouse-boy's dong vaginally or anally, and accounting for the presence of the half-rat boy and half-rat girl. If both bois are present, get DP'd automatically. So far there has been a lot about this darned doc that has gone beyond my expectations into inordinate excess, but I know it now! I swear, I say, as I curl up into a corn cob!!

[Triple Service] is 16000 words of accounting for taur and non-taur, and just... like, this is the most ludicrous doc. [Fuck Them] still needs to be expanded a tad, but that's been done for a while. Now the only win scene left is the fabled [Ear Sex] with our rascally Rodenian girl.

BUT before I do that, I want to do some loss sex scenes, and tie up the [Revenge] scene, which has been lingering there for a while. Those are not going to be so crazy, surely! All you have to do is get tortured by tails and facefucked how bad can it be :catte:

Oh and I also edited everything that's been written so far. I'll still read through at the end but I consider I've made a definitive pass over all 145 pages thus far.

The groaning girl on your back slumps off into a midden heap to your right, yelping and <i>thudding</i> onto the floor. By the time your wide-eared lover's orgasm diminishes to a tensing and relaxing dribble, you fall in much the same way, keeping him close to your pounding heart. The rodenian… wherever she went during that, crawls weakly up to the three of you and plops herself next to your heads.

"You felt really good {stranger / [pc.mister] CEO}..." he whispers, snuggling even closer. The three of you bound together, broken down together, buzzing together… you just let your eyes shut. Who cares who or what finds you, because you need a bit of a rest after that. Besides, if anyone tries to take these rats out of your hands, <i>there will be hell to pay</i>.
 

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Then you will probably be sad!! To be fair there are a few mean things you can do, some incidental. Orally knotting them during your blowjob (up to 3 dicks!) is automatic, little spunk bandits. If you get robbed in the fight and the looter gets away, leaving two rats, you can tie the last two up by their tails and spank them, while also getting off. They get off too. That's just where the scene went I swear. Also you can just beat them up and take their stuff, that's pretty mean, especially when they need it.

Also I was away the past few days because a game came out on Steam and I binged nearly 60 hours on it, I started writing again last night, and am going through Loss Sex Scenes now. Getting a haircut later, but I'll be on this all day!

I would like to share something, however, and if anybody has any input on this let me know. In case a bust is made for the rats, then having colors and such will be helpful. More than that, there is the recent addition of a 'closer look' option so you can see all the finer points of your enemies (though I really don't think it will work with multi-foe fights...) so it's handy.

I'm not great with contrasting colors, I'm not an artist by any stretch and even though I should have an understanding it's tiny details I quibble over the most. This is what I decided for Rat Appearances and since there is some concern from me I'll pass the buck and see if anyone else has something to say. Just post here or leave a comment on the doc itself.

// GROUP 1 COLORS
// Female Rodenian - (Reference: she is v. cute. NSFW)
Fur: Light Pink (very near white/pale color)
Eyes: Green (very bright)
Hair: Golden-blonde with purple highlights, decently long hair, past her shoulders.
Nipples: Light pink
Lips: xxx

// Male Human-mouse
Skin: Tan
Eyes: Hazel
Hair: Black, just above shoulders.
Cock: Human dick, matching skin tone, two baseball-sized testicles
Lips: xx

// Female half-Rodenian
Skin: Fair
Fur: Gray
Eyes: Blue
Hair: White with green highlights, shoulder length
Pussy: Bright pink
Nipples: Bright Red

// GROUP 2 COLORS
// Female Rodenian
Fur: White
Eyes: Red
Hair: Dim/dirty blonde
Nipples: Red (Dark?)
Lips: Black

// Male Human-mouse
Skin: Fair
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Light Brown
Cock: Human dick, matching skin tone, two baseball-sized testicles
Lips: Peach

// Male half-Rodenian
Skin: Chocolate
Fur: Black
Eyes: Violet
Hair: Blonde
Cock: Human dick, matching skin tone, two baseball-sized testicles
Lips: Dark peach-ish
 

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The Rat Thieves Document is COMPLETE.:toot:
This was the secret to my success: their theme music

I have finished, after much too long, the Rat Thieves of Zheng Shi. The total page count will fluctuate during the editing, but it is 203 pages. It's done. I have nothing much to say, other than that I will not take on something of this scale again, not for TiTS anyway, without some kind of serious convincing. This project spiraled out of control, and every time I told myself something'd be straight, be easy, that I wouldn't hit 200 pages... it all happened. It's taught me not to give out deadlines, that's for sure.

At least, not with this kind of thing. But it's done.

Now, I have more to talk about than just that. Lighterfluid is coding it, but you probably saw that from the blog post. Once the combat is ready, I'll be testing that in depth. It's that and the editing to do while waiting for review.

Well, that's all for now. I just feel drained. But I also feel the Ear Sex scene, the last of what was written, to be worth the wait. Have some teasers in the mean time.

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This content is for nerds such as Will.
 

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Question: if all money is on credit chits how do they steal exactly half your money? And if it's spread across multiple chits how do you carry all those chits? If they robbed my Steele they'd have to carry 250+ million worth of credit chits.
 

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They won't steal all your money. It's set up so that, unless you totally befriend them, then you will lose at most 11%. If you have ridiculous levels of cash I have no idea what will happen, we looked at values up to 2 million and I smashed in losing under 200k for losing a fight. At 250 million you might lose actual millions :p