Imp Victory Scene [Editors Appreciated!]

Rise

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Jan 31, 2021
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Heyo! Rise here with my super cool, needlessly long experiment of a ~First submission~! Just going to go ahead with preamble about my intentions that can be coupled with the intro in the doc. But pretty much, did this (pretty simple) scene up to get a baseline for what is expected of submissions in the future and to start brushing up on my weaknesses as a creator at large, and as one who wants to do stuff for here in particular! As such, ANY feedback is appreciated!

Without further ado; here's some Imp Snu snu; hope it isn't TOO boring:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1NdISKe3yWNjMjfVTI2oPiN9ozzqGb9O-L-7dTazLsdc/edit?usp=sharing

Edit; As of Monday my laptop has decided it’s too good for this world and I’m down when it comes to actively editing this doc since I’ve hardly got the willpower to do it on phone. I’ll be back soon, hopefully!
 
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Alypia

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I left some thoughts! Hope they're useful to you. :)

I know that I said this in the doc, but this fills a need and is a good first effort. Thanks for putting in the time to contribute!