idea Minir Empress future apprentice

[asidsaoi]

Hi, I'm a little bit new in all this and this is my first document
basically it is the idea of the template of a character that would be a good excuse to fill in the Khor'Minos area or anything else
Warning is a temporary character, not a waifu you can carry on your party!

Document
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1P_dD1ifmuyDHPtu1bO_XR2pjgyJVswKa3BAxN5jjnpU/edit?usp=sharing

 

[The Observer]

I would encourage you to set this aside for now and work on your basic literacy and literary skills. Be genuine in your desire to learn, write some things for your own practice, read a lot.

Having English not be your first language is no excuse for poor diction.

Maybe try again in a year or so, if you work really hard at it.