[HTML] City of Desire v0.1 (Released 19/09/17)

[Viron]

Hi,

This is my first game in Twine, so please don't go hard on me. Also, I'm very open to constructive criticism, so feel free to point out the mistakes I've made, and things I could've/should've done better.

The game will feature 3 main storylines:

• Working in the City Centre

• Babysitting in the Suburban Area

• Going to university

Please note that it is still in early ages, so I'm sure there are many misspellings and grammatical mistakes. This thread is a great opportunity for you to post feedback and bugs.

Patreon page with download link:

https://www.patreon.com/virondev

Current version: v0.1.5

Let me know what you think!

 

[Nephilim_Anunnaki]

Not bad but is a bit soon to say something