Ginny's Bad End

[bombino]

First. In no way does anything I say harbour malicious intent but I am going to be critical. and also bit o' Spoilers!

I don't think the author reviewed Ginny's character design. The bad end includes a lot of descriptions such ask musky, veiny, big balls... but Ginny is an XO and her(?) penis is synthetic even in the imagery provided by adjatha. So musky and veins are out of the question and looking at the design of the character they don't have balls. Now if this Jezzy I'd follow the descriptions but Ginny doesn't have these features.

(personal view - take with a grain of salt) I also think the personalities of the characters are lost in the writing (namely lithium flower) who's seemingly lost all her dominance aside from being named "mistress".

 

[Adjatha]

First. In no way does anything I say harbour malicious intent but I am going to be critical. and also bit o' Spoilers!

I don't think the author reviewed Ginny's character design. The bad end includes a lot of descriptions such ask musky, veiny, big balls... but Ginny is an XO and her(?) penis is synthetic even in the imagery provided by adjatha. So musky and veins are out of the question and looking at the design of the character they don't have balls. Now if this Jezzy I'd follow the descriptions but Ginny doesn't have these features.

(personal view - take with a grain of salt) I also think the personalities of the characters are lost in the writing (namely lithium flower) who's seemingly lost all her dominance aside from being named "mistress".

It's only mentioned briefly, but in the beginning of the bad end, the text says that her reward for bringing you in was that she'd been upgraded with a proper dong, not simply snapping on her cum cannon to her groin. The bust doesn't change to reflect that, and perhaps greater detail and emphasis could've been given to the change, but to be fair, it is there.

The text in question:
"The gabilani XO sports new pink, wing-like thrusters and a big, juicy cock. Her teal meat throbs erect at your sight, bubbling with violet pre."