[Finished] Treated/Tainted Male Zil Combat Encounter

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As is common courtesy, the link to the document is here.

I've been considering the idea of taking a crack at writing a combat encounter for a while, and I recently I figured. "I literally have nothing else better to do. Fuck it, I'll write a bee daddy."

And Daddy he will be, be it him pumping you full of kids or being someone you can cuddle into the large muscles of and be happy. Right now his dialogue and personality is extremely placeholder, so pay it no mind if he seems too eloquent/bland.

As to why I'm posting it here, I'm looking for suggestions for sex scenes. I don't want to fall into the usual "[Vaginal], [Anal Catch], [Anal Pitch], [Blowjob], [Wrap it up we're done here]" trap.

So if any o' y'all have any particular victory/loss sex scene ideas feel free to toss suggestions. I might write em.
 
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Asking for suggestions? Well... I'd imagine a bull-bee would have pheromones thicker than a treated Ausar, the smell of normal bees have a pretty good grip on Steele's brain as they are, personally I'd like a win scene where if Steele chooses to blow him, they wind up getting so high off his pheromones they milk him completely dry, he'd struggle and try to pry them off but Steele doesn't let him go until he's unconscious and Steele has sucked the taste and smell out of his dick.
 
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Perhaps something exhibitionist? A sex scene, somehow, and this is a very light thought so you may not pay me much mind, with all his village watching. Lose or win, something to rub in the faces of everyone else. A lot of back and forth too, lots of good details for the Treated and Bimbo/Bro PCs. Or in light of that, a little more agency on how you'll react to the sequences. Perhaps have the sex escalate into an orgy involving other rushers? Those oft mentioned invisible ambient people :p

Since the dialogue is placeholder I don't want to comment too much, since the personality is the most important grounding factor for following scenes.
 
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Seems like a hell of a good idea tbh!
Given how ridiculously strong his pheromones would be - perhaps a scene where the PC ends up getting super suggestible, almost like a mild mind control thing =p
Probably a loss scene for PCs with particularly low Willpower.
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This. Also because I'm the resident bad end whore I'm obligated to suggest that you put a bad end in there somewhere. There's always a way and it might fit the character.
 
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Damiekinz said:
This. Also because I'm the resident bad end whore I'm obligated to suggest that you put a bad end in there somewhere. There's always a way and it might fit the character.
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Any ideas for a bad end? I'm haven't really thought of one that I feel like writing, but who knows, maybe your idea will tickle my fancy enough for me to write it out.
 
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Altair Hayes said:
Any ideas for a bad end? I'm haven't really thought of one that I feel like writing, but who knows, maybe your idea will tickle my fancy enough for me to write it out.
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There are many possibilities, probably just the typical "he takes you because you lost several times" deal. Becoming his boybitch/breeder/whatever.
 
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Damiekinz said:
There are many possibilities, probably just the typical "he takes you because you lost several times" deal. Becoming his boybitch/breeder/whatever.
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I don't want to sound like a hipster, but that's par for the course. You fight, you lose, you fuck, you (become a) slave, you (fuck some) more. If I do end up writing a bad end, I don't think it'll be that, although I do thank you for the suggestion.

And besides, who's to say there's only one Treated zil?
 
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Altair Hayes said:
I don't want to sound like a hipster, but that's par for the course. You fight, you lose, you fuck, you (become a) slave, you (fuck some) more. If I do end up writing a bad end, I don't think it'll be that, although I do thank you for the suggestion.

And besides, who's to say there's only one Treated zil?
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The doc implies there are many of them I believe. Anyway, I do understand that's usually how it's done, but it makes sense. Unless for some reason you die or something, that's how bad ends work in porn. If you could think of something else that would definitely be appreciated though, it does get just a little bit stale unless you really make it stand out.
 
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If not a bad end because you can't make it unique to your standards, perhaps just progressive scenes to a cap? Or some sort of repeatable content. I know how personally taxing that kind of writing can be, and I very much like the NPC regardless, but it seems at risk for being mildly one-dimensional
 
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After reading Kane's wrasslin' loss scene I had a thought: would a treated male zil be strong enough to take someone and sex them midair? A literal flying fuck if you will.
 
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Aight, this is worthy of a bump/necro.

Almost finished. The only thing I need to do left is have a couple of editors look it over, and for me to finish up with all of those boring parsers/variables. But unless a scene turns out to be extremely lacking, the writing part is D-O-N-E.

(I totally didn't ignore this project for like four months, why do you ask? :negativeman:)
 
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One idea I have for a sex scene, perhaps one that could be a Bad End scene, would be for him to take the player on a little aerial tour of the jungle to the settlements.

The way I'm sort of envisioning the scene is that he uses rope or something to sort of tie you two together, and then dicks you in the ass for a more "secure" connection, then starts flying around whilst fucking you in full view of the planet's inhabitants since you're in the middle of open air. After a while of having his fun he then either drops you off back at the settlement full of his honey and barely standing, or if it is a Bad End takes you back home to be his new partner.
 
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This is great. Not only does the encounter spawn in a place where no one can complain that it's in the way, but the encounter is actually difficult for those of us that stacked lust penalty perks on our Steeles. Also, losing seems more fun than winning. All in all, a great bit of content here.
 
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This is great. Not only does the encounter spawn in a place where no one can complain that it's in the way, but the encounter is actually difficult for those of us that stacked lust penalty perks on our Steeles. Also, losing seems more fun than winning. All in all, a great bit of content here.
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Did you really have to necro this thread?
 
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Eh, considering it finally got into the game and this is the discussion thread for the project, I think it's fair.
 
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Idea Tag Team Space Battles. For example : Steeles ship and the Great Majin (Pretty sure I missed spelled it, sorry 'bout that.) To help out with there targets on a side quest especially if you Beat Shizuya mono e mono.
 
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Arod15st said:
Idea Tag Team Space Battles. For example : Steeles ship and the Great Majin (Pretty sure I missed spelled it, sorry 'bout that.) To help out with there targets on a side quest especially if you Beat Shizuya mono e mono.
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You didn’t read Magic Ted’s or Savin’s pinned posts, did you? Also, you are posting your idea in someone else’s idea thread.

https://forum.fenoxo.com/threads/i-have-an-idea-stop-read-this-first.91/

https://forum.fenoxo.com/threads/what-the-idea-subforum-is-for.4983/
 
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Well, I know the Zil male bull product is finished...but an idea keeps nagging me about a possible Bad end idea for males and futas. What about having a scene that has the zil unload his stock of honey into the Steele manhood (male or futa), increasing his gnoad size by two size categories?

If its not a good idea, then I understand. Its a great product as is then.
 
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I know this is a really old thread, but can I make a bust for the Treated Zil Male if there are no plans for it? I'd love to make some artwork
 
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