[Finished] Male Zil Impregnation

[HugsAlright]

No, that does not mean you can impregnate male zil, weirdos.

Anyway, this was a commissioned piece, and the first piece of pregnancy writing I've ever done, and quite a complicated one at that. It allows generic male zil to impregnate you.

Basically, I've been working with someone else (who is writing the female half of zil pregnancy) to handle bunch of new lore they created for zil with this. The big thing here is pheromones, as in if you get knocked up by one, you're going to start producing pheromones that are specially attuned to the zil you mated with, making you very, very attracted to one another. Because of this, you can me the zil that impregnated you in the jungle for some sexy times.

Along with this special, repeatable sex scene (taur compatible), there's the usual pregnancy stuff like timed blurbs and birthing, as well as child interaction for when your bee-babies are in the nursery.

Here's the doc: Male Zil Impregnation

Like I said, this was the first piece of pregnancy content I've ever written, so any feedback is appreciated. Additionally, I hope to be able to recycle some of the blurbs and birthing for say... Liamme preg and stuff like that.

 

[Xeivous]

Oh yeah, preggo content.

 

[Lancer]

I've always found it a little weird that the player can check if a pregnancy took immediately in the codex, but the Steele never seems to notice for weeks/and or months. Not to bash you Hugs, just a general detail of TiTS' preg content.

EDIT: The pregnancy makes all your fluids into honey My perfect snowflake character will no longer be perfect!

 

[Zavos]

Just... wow... great job as always, Hugs!

 

[Evil]

The pregnancy makes all your fluids into honey My perfect snowflake character will no longer be perfect!

No, now they'll just be extra sweet!

 

[EmperorG]

I've always found it a little weird that the player can check if a pregnancy took immediately in the codex, but the Steele never seems to notice for weeks/and or months. Not to bash you Hugs, just a general detail of TiTS' preg content.

EDIT: The pregnancy makes all your fluids into honey My perfect snowflake character will no longer be perfect!

Yeah you would think they'd get a pop-up or something once pregnancy was confirmed by their codex, they shouldn't have to figure it out the old fashioned way, but hey we get little enough preg content as is, I'll take it with a smile if it gets me more of the stuff.

Also darn that means my vanae milk will turn into honey... luckily that's easy to fix and my dick/pussy already produce honey so not much changes.

 

[Krynh]

Is the fluids to honey permanent?

 

[HugsAlright]

Is the fluids to honey permanent?

Nope. Luckily your kids are just half zil, so they don't really require honey. So, @EmperorG, you can get your vanae milk back.

 

[Xeivous]

It's still a bit of an irritation to get fluid types back just because you got knocked up.

Especially when some fluid types are one time only obtainables like milk cum (at least as far as I'm aware) or are a massive pain to obtain whilst retaining your physical looks or without losing it to regain your physical looks after whatever you changed to get your fluid type back. To say nothing of the fluid types that are of a grab bag for a TF.

 

[HugsAlright]

It's still a bit of an irritation to get fluid types back just because you got knocked up.

Especially when some fluid types are one time only obtainables like milk cum (at least as far as I'm aware) or are a massive pain to obtain whilst retaining your physical looks or without losing it to regain your physical looks after whatever you changed to get your fluid type back. To say nothing of the fluid types that are of a grab bag for a TF.

Alright, yeah, great, I understand that the content is not going to be perfect for every single player. There's a save editor if it's really that much of a hassle.

Now, I'm looking for actual feedback on the writing aspect of this pregnancy rather than just flat out stating features about the content you don't like, or at least give some constructive criticism.

 

[Nik_van_Rijn]

It's still a bit of an irritation to get fluid types back just because you got knocked up.

Especially when some fluid types are one time only obtainables like milk cum (at least as far as I'm aware) or are a massive pain to obtain whilst retaining your physical looks or without losing it to regain your physical looks after whatever you changed to get your fluid type back. To say nothing of the fluid types that are of a grab bag for a TF.

On top of what Hugs said, I will add this: as a relatively mild fun of pregshit, a lot of the different changes to mother's body that are aimed at making it a better suit for rearing the babies are hot AF. So I wholeheartedly agree with Hugs' ideas here.

On the other hand, feeding babies fucking milk-*cum* is something worth of million RREEEES.

 

[Xeivous]

Okay I'll admit I could have put that forward better, but it's still the only big thing I have to comment about. Everything else was excellent bar a few small things that I'll get into later. My point is that, as far as pregnancies go, this is one that is something of an irregularity. As aside from the water queen pregnancy, none of the others actually change Steele much or at all outside of inducing lactation. I get why it's a thing from a writing perspective and agree with the logic involved, I just don't think that it makes for much fun as a gameplay thing unless it only changes the pc's fluids if they were normal to begin with or if the coders won't bite your head off for having them make some sort of mechanic that would reset your fluids after the zil pregnancy was over or a short time after it's conclusion to their state before the pregnancy.

As for the small things, the other thing I think that you could improve your document with is maybe some changes to dialogue if the PC happens to be a morph that is native to the planet.

quick edit: oh and maybe a reference to the plantation quest if the PC has done it as your village doesn't seem to be the same one, unless i'm misunderstanding something.

 

[TFMaster]

My point is that, as far as pregnancies go, this is one that is something of an irregularity. As aside from the water queen pregnancy, none of the others actually change Steele much or at all outside of inducing lactation.

Actually the Bothrioc Eggnancy slowly change Steele's body, but for all I know you aren't counting that as it is not a normal pregnancy.

 

[Xeivous]

Actually the Bothrioc Eggnancy slowly change Steele's body, but for all I know you aren't counting that as it is not a normal pregnancy.

I hadn't actually done their content yet, so I didn't know what it did and kinda forgot they had a thing in yet. Going over the doc though, I'm rather hesitant to call it a normal pregnancy since it's a rather big thing that you can get out of. Plus the effects that it does incur outside of the unique perk are all much more easily fixed changes to the sizes of various bodyparts

 

[Ethereal Dragon]

oh yay now Steele can have cute beebabies.

 

[Lancer]

Steele could already have cute bee babies, now Steele can have more cute bee babies faster

 

[Pichi]

Lovely! This only makes me want a zil husbando even more now

 

[Kesil]

Able fits that role for my Steele

 

[SatanicAble666]

Able fits that role for my Steele

Hello ma'am/sir! You called for Able?

 

[Captain Kiera]

Hello ma'am/sir! You called for Able?

HermSteele: Yes, i could use a bath. Though for once, maybe you`d like to join me. I think i might need some help washing certain...places. Think you could help me with that sweety?

 

[Darkpheonix]

Hello ma'am/sir! You called for Able?

Able! my favorite beeboy toy!

 

[SatanicAble666]

HermSteele: Yes, i could use a bath. Though for once, maybe you`d like to join me. I think i might need some help washing certain...places. Think you could help me with that sweety?

Yes, yes. Of course.

 

[SatanicAble666]

Able! my favorite beeboy toy!

Hello master/mistress.

 

[Darkpheonix]

Hello master/mistress.

Show me your dark side

 

[SatanicAble666]

A-alright... *I begin to take off my clothes and disappear into a nearby closet, coming out 5 minutes later wearing black shiny leather clothes and holding a riding crop) This good?

 

[Woider]

C'mon guys we have an entire subforum for RP's. Project threads are for authors to post progress updates and people to give feedback on projects. They're important threads that are usually watched closely by authors and fans alike, please don't RP in them.

You are absolutely welcome to go start up an RP session in the RP subforum, though. It's what it's there for.

Yes, please! Guys, we need more people down there!

 

[HugsAlright]

Oh hey! Let's take a look at these new responses in my thre-

Oh, oh no...

 

[BubbleLord]

The shitpost meme almost made me forget.

This event line isn't level-locked like the new addition of Mhen'ga or anything, is it? Started playing again recently and saw that and then this was finished. Might give an incentive to make a FILTHY BREEDER one of these days, since I'm a fan of the buttbuzzers.

 

[Captain Kiera]

C'mon guys we have an entire subforum for RP's. Project threads are for authors to post progress updates and people to give feedback on projects. They're important threads that are usually watched closely by authors and fans alike, please don't RP in them.

You are absolutely welcome to go start up an RP session in the RP subforum, though. It's what it's there for.

Sorry, it won`t happen again Mom(sorry if this is taking it to far.)

On a side note, good job as usual Hugs.

 

[Darkpheonix]

possible Able prego scene though? or that one zil from the zil village. He needs more scenes too.