[Finished, Implemented. Thanks Savin!] Shotgun wedding dream.

[Night Trap]

So I've decided to take the plunge into writing smut. With a go-ahead from Savin, I have written a dream involving Anno and Syri. It's weird and a bit silly, but it's supposed to kind of fun. The PC dreams of being forced by Syri to make an honest woman out of Anno in a ridiculous fusion of human and ausar weddings, with a lot of anachronistic and canine elements to the whole thing.

Here's the link. Let me know if I've got access for the document set up wrong or something.
Hopefully I haven't put THIS thread in the wrong place too...

Special thanks to @shadefalcon , @Nik_van_Rijn , and @HugsAlright for their help with editing and parser-wrangling.

At this point I think it might be finished other than the parser calls. If anybody could give me a heads up on if I've done them properly or fixed those that I screwed up initially, I might could go ahead and call this complete. Thanks once again to @Nik_van_Rijn.
Edit:Woo, final approval from Savin has been received. This submission is ready to go.

 

[argenten]

I really like it, it's silly, it's over the top but it still manages to have a nice moment with Anno at the end there...we need more of those.

 

[Night Trap]

a nice moment with Anno at the end there...we need more of those.

Thank you! Yes, I agree we need more intimacy. Not just sexual stuff either. Just nice little conversations or things like that with the NPCs can be refreshing.

 

[shadefalcon]

Damn. DAMN!!!
That was some good stuff. I was this close from mirroring your avatar (Minus the shagging a cow part)
You write very well
It was also pretty funny. Determination! XD
The wake up scene was very nice too

I took notice though that it could be easier for you to put in the //Else thingy.
It´s when you f. ex. if exhibitionist: X happen //Else: Y happens.

 

[Night Trap]

Damn. DAMN!!!
That was some good stuff. I was this close from mirroring your avatar (Minus the shagging a cow part)
You write very well
It was also pretty funny. Determination! XD
The wake up scene was very nice too

Thank you very much! I'm incredibly self-critical, and I'm a big-time perfectionist when it comes to my writing. Believe it or not, this is the first time I've ever gone through with writing a piece of smut. I've always stopped partway through the other three attempts and thrown them away, so it means a lot to hear any praise at all for this! My precious ego needs all the help it can get.
Thanks for your help with the editing as well!

 

[shadefalcon]

Thank you very much! I'm incredibly self-critical, and I'm a big-time perfectionist when it comes to my writing. Believe it or not, this is the first time I've ever gone through with writing a piece of smut. I've always stopped partway through the other three attempts and thrown them away, so it means a lot to hear any praise at all for this! My precious ego needs all the help it can get.

I know that feel all too well, being self critical that is. Surprisingly (if you don´t count that kinda smutty TF scene I wrote) a dream was my first piece of smut too

Thanks for your help with the editing as well!

No problem. I´m happy to help with what knowledge I can offer

Also thanks for the knotting scene
Getting it as more than just a short blurb is such a treat

 

[Night Trap]

Also thanks for the knotting scene
Getting it as more than just a short blurb is such a treat

Oh, any scenes I write that can have knotting will feature it extensively. It's one of my top fetishes. Intimacy is my #1 fetish, and all my others spring from that. Knotted cuddling is top-shelf smut.

 

[shadefalcon]

Congratz Night Trap
It's in

 

[Night Trap]

Congratz Night Trap
It's in

Thanks a lot! Sadly I have to wait for a public patch to actually see it for myself...

 

[Lancer]

Thanks a lot! Sadly I have to wait for a public patch to actually see it for myself...

That should be less than a week away, not long at all.

 

[NotYouNorI]

Again, congratulations, NightTrap!

 

[HugsAlright]

Congratulatory Doot:

Doot.

 

[Tacit]

Congratulations!

 

[Night Trap]

Wow, th

Again, congratulations, NightTrap!

Congratulatory Doot:

Doot.

Congratulations!

In all seriousness, thanks a lot guys! It means a lot to me. Now onwards to the next project: The BFucking Bronco Saloon. I welcome anybody who wants to collaborate and/or contribute some characters to the project!

 

[HugsAlright]

I welcome anybody who wants to collaborate and/or contribute some characters to the project!

I wanna write those living kegs, man.

 

[Night Trap]

I wanna write those living kegs, man.

I'd be right happy.

Spoiler

Here's the link to the Gdoc if you need it.

 

[Zavos]

Why am i suddenly envisioning a line of about twenty Brandys on display for public use?

 

[Night Trap]

Why am i suddenly envisioning a line of about twenty Brandys on display for public use?

Because that's probably an accurate mental image. It's up to @HugsAlright though.