Feedback wanted on Quest Idea I want to write

NoobNoob

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I like writing. A lot. So of course I have been going through a porn rpg game screenshot saving any mention of things to be used for plot ideas. Of course that means I know about the half-gnoll from missing Meows that has no content, the Maidenbridge stuff with Lusmine or that whole Drider Queen thing. So of course my first proposal is of course none of that.
Instead I wanted to propose a quest chain with Kazuo and Darius.

(Which is the first reason I am posting this - I don't know all of Observers plans (if any) with these characters and since they were last active in 2024 on this forum, I am relying on the deep lore known by some you to let me know if this is dead in the water or not)

First quest - "Touching Grass" Triggers after completing all of Nakano's quests. When talking with Rindo you get a new option, in which she worries about Kazuo never leaving his lab, even for big social events. Based on Kohaku's stories and your actions, she wonders if there are outsiders that he might have easier time connecting with compared to normal kitsune society. Champion wonders if this is her own original idea or Komari putting the idea in her head because she knows you would have trouble saying no to your cute but damaged Rindo - especially if she is your concubine. If you agree, you drag (how literal this is probably depends on silly mode or not). Time to introduce to other crafting weirdos. I imagine the requirements would only need to be two others and the temple crew but you could complete the list if you want to see all the interactions.
Zuzaan, Wynne/Berwyn & Matilda (will need to have several variants to account for Matilda's revenge outcomes), and Vivinne. All try to flirt with Kazuo but he does not notice at all. All take the champion to the side after the conversation to let you know that Kazuo seems like a lovely chap such a shame THAT HE'S COMPLETELY INSANE. Still both characters walkaway with some new ideas on their current projects and enable a brief scene of letters being delivered from any of them at the Kitsune Den.
Nieves - don't have a good enough feel of the character and will take suggestions on how that scene will play out. I am debating on something like the above for those who don't have Matilda but that would get tiresome who do have Matilda. Maybe only have her trigger if Matilda is gone from the game?
Lyric - Lyric enjoys expanding their knowledge of science. Kazuo enjoys having such an enthusiastic assistant. Explosions happen and nobody else is happy. The Champion reflects that this was not their best idea while ducking and covering underneath furniture.
Sven - Turns out grease monkeys and plant boys don't get along. Enables a scene showing they have an acrimonious and competitive penpal relationship after their meeting.
Barney and Darius - This turns out great. They really getting along. So much that after the champion goes through several waiting screens, they decide to drag Kazuoo back home before Kass finishes taking over the world, Ryn dies of old age, and Arona grows some wrinkles on her brain. (Ideally the last two lines will change depending on who your companions are)
With that quest finished.

Next Quest
That's One Big Lizard - Barney, Darius, and Kazuo get the grand idea of using some of the energy the temple is helping to vent into additional defenses from the town. Which is why a cute lizard from the foothills is now stomping around and breathing totally not radioactive fire breath. The Champion engages in battle to drive it off into the foothills but can't defeat the totally not Godzilla on their own. Regrouping at Garth's place, the champion is talking through plans when Ninian pops out of the mug of beer that he was drinking. (I am debating if this quest needs to have Ninian in Hawkthorne to trigger or if Garth will make talk about knowing something about this but he would need to ask a pixie for more dialogue, sending you to hunt through the Old Froest to find Ninian). Either way, Ninian recounts knowing how to contact two pixies who are connected to a powerful Moth spirit how could help.
Go to the designated spot Old Forest and you will meet two twin fairies who can help you summon not-Mothra. However they need some help. Either you help them remember the song to summon Mothra (thinking of a word association or rhyming based puzzle here) or you go and collect some items they need for the ceremony. (Another way to complete the step for those who don't like puzzles) Either way, you summon Not-Mothra who is of course a sexy moth lady. Optional sex scene here with some druggy spores and light bondage with string shot. Either way, you go down to the foothills to fight Not-Godzilla, weakening them enough to wrap up in a cocoon by not-Mothra and taken off to live the rest of their lizard life on Kaiju island. The champion and companions watch while discussing if they were want to visit Kaiju island. Return to the temple to report job well done and be worried about the fact that Kazuo is trying to sell the idea that the champion needs a giant mech.

Possible relationship: Post - That's One big Lizard. Because this is (though nominally at times) a porn game and well, the quests above is a bit lacking in the porn department. The idea would be the add on scenes of the Champion spying on Darius and Kazuo when Darius finally just decides to screw subtlety and actually see if Kazuo would be up for a relationship. This would require a few things. 1. That people besides me would want this. 2. That Kazuo at least be a gray-ace 3. That Daris be sapiosexual enough to ignore his femininity requirements. (At least he fulfills the body tone requirements) Probably can be explained that no matter how high the Champion's cunning is, they are still a horny idiot at the end of the day compared to other smart characters in the setting. (I might be thinking too seriously about this part for a game with a silly mode). If all three of those are fine, then a variety of scenes could be written. How much is smut and how much is relationship fluff probably depends on how many of you are normal people and how many of you are disgusting perverts who like wholesomeness.

ETA: Any feedback is appreciated, because I want this to be as completely thought out as possible before pestering Savin with it.