[Editors needed] Heidrun the clothing merchant

[Doots]

Full disclaimer: I'm Fen is paying me furgold for this.

Heidrun is the female korgonne in charge of WarmCrusts. She's friendly, energetic korgonne selling clothing and accessories that will protect you from the freezing cold outside the hold.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hkHjn_l9XeIc0L8ES_Kv-A_A1OlS-Jz3Vx7ybHroBnE/edit?usp=sharing

As always editors are welcome and highly appreciated.

 

[Fr0sty]

Read through the whole thing. Caught a lot of little errors and suggested fixes. Also found a ton of instances of repeating the same word very close together. I opted not to suggest word replacements myself, since I didn't want to effect the tone of your sentences. Pretty much every one I pointed out should be at least looked at.

 

[Freed85]

Just finished looking the doc over, really liking her, caught a few things in her sex scenes but nothing too big or bad I left notes about them and can't wait to see her in game!