Dulcie the Zil Cow

badbreadpuns

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Meowdy! I know I haven't finished my last NPC yet, but I thought a fresh project would cure my writer's block, and I was right! I had an idea for a Zil baker, and chat wanted to see more of the Cows, so I decided to combine the two ideas and make a new OC: Meet Dulcie! She's a humble gal who loves baking (and sex, obviously).

Her doc's already beefier (pun unintended) compared to Giallo's, at over 30 pages! Ngl, my word counts are often underwhelming, so I'm quite proud of the 8k I was able to cook up! (Even if a chunk of it is just lore lol.)

Currently taking ideas, concrit and other comments, especially on the sex scenes. Thanks again to the server for all the neat suggestions!

Update #1: Added an e-mail advertisement. Thanks goes to nameiuse for the suggestion!
 
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nameiuse

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Maybe an email advertisement for the grand opening like the one Burt sends, he probably would teach her to advertise, maybe a coupon for the store specialty or first 100 customers eat free.

A threesome with Burt would be cool.

Big pitch here but as the future CEO of Steele Tech maybe investing in a small local bakery could be a lucrative business venture. Maybe telling Big T her story could be persuaded to help her out, or alternatively going to Beth Carver and convincing her to invest turning the bakery into another front for her slave dealings. Ideally Big T would be the good route where a long term financial gain for the player is the reward and Beth is the evil route for a good short term payout.
 

badbreadpuns

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Maybe an email advertisement for the grand opening like the one Burt sends, he probably would teach her to advertise, maybe a coupon for the store specialty or first 100 customers eat free.
Love this idea! I can definitely add an ad with a coupon.

A threesome with Burt would be cool.
I’d love to see that too! However, I think that job should go to whoever’s in charge of Burt’s scenes atm, or someone who is otherwise confident in writing him. I always feel awkward writing other people’s characters. ^^;; I’d definitely consider it for an expac tho!

Big pitch here but as the future CEO of Steele Tech maybe investing in a small local bakery could be a lucrative business venture. Maybe telling Big T her story could be persuaded to help her out, or alternatively going to Beth Carver and convincing her to invest turning the bakery into another front for her slave dealings. Ideally Big T would be the good route where a long term financial gain for the player is the reward and Beth is the evil route for a good short term payout.
Excellent idea but I’m still a submission newbie and this sounds waaay out of my scope. ^^;; But that does tie in nicely with the best ending of plantation quest, which says the Zil of that village trade with Esbeth now. (iirc?) It’s the natural step up from that idea.

Thanks a lot for the suggestions!
 

frostnova

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wouldent it be intreasting to have it by eatling like 50 of the baked goods raw belly size would increase just saying that it wil be a missed oppurnituriey to use the raw belly size stat as swineapple being the only thing to increase that state
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this could be items like giant cakes and sweets e.g
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or just a tonne of them because the only thing that icrease raw bely size doesent increase it by a lot
having more things to increase that state will increase the neach swineapple has
serisously we only have swineapple to change raw belly size and this not doing anything to the raw size will just ba a waste thought if you maxed out tickness increaseing raw size with repeat visits could be intrreasting
 
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