[CONTEST] Merry Jizzmas Writing Contest Entries Thread

[William.]

MERRY RATSMAS FOLKS

https://docs.google.com/document/d/13re5yLo48S9zixeNnqutea-XeNUemrnRMG20hCiZmPU/edit?usp=sharing

Fen Notes: I THOUGHT that I was simply out of the loop because I haven't properly played the raider's content yet, but it turns out this event is actually what introduces their names. This is a bad idea for a number of reasons:

• Six named NPCs thrown at you at once.
• They're basically two sets of similar NPCs, which is just begging for more confusion.
• It also complicates learning their names later if you ever expand it.

All that said, it's fun, holiday-themed, and has some solid sex in it, even if I woulda gone harder on the sex personally. (When don't I?)

 

[TheGreatAlbert]

Well, here are my two entries.

First story is... well, what the title says.

The Great Annual Chrismas Workshop Orgy

Second one will probably be exclusive to Silly Mode, but I'll let Fenoxo decides. Again, it's exactly what the title says it is. Because if those hacks at Illumination can do it, so can I!

How Captain Steele Stole Fuckmas

Fen Notes: First off the Grinch one - amusing and funny, but didn't rhyme quite enough to perfectly parody the original. As for the other one - it's fun. Struggles a bit here and there with tensing. It also is a bit presumptuous about the PC's tastes regarding big, floppy pussies and getting buttfucked. I'm kind of waffling on the whole thing. It might work better as a VR program.

 

[HERALD MASTEMA]

merry christmas, this is my entry, and it's technically still the 15th on the west coast

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IrJgbsM7Sx3seVCud7wCukP2LkPNLBwNPaIwKWluN6M/edit?usp=sharing

Fenoxo Notes: Good, seasonally appropriate stuff as always. Not as boner-meltingly hot as your Alexandria series of dreams, but no slacker either. The whole thing feels more playful than anything else - and I wager that's intentional (and seasonally appropriate). Definitely gonna look at giving this one a coding.

One thing to note: If possible, when doing emphasis, I'd really prefer you swap to using html markup for it instead of *s. So for example: Suck my <i>juicy</i> cock.

Definitely in the running :3

 

[Gardeford]

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VeAgIVFTTp3i0HAA0Uv9NpG8HO7fHVUJmZfW037AXWY/edit?usp=sharing

woooooogahhhhh

Fen Note: You've really grown as a writer since you first started writing for us. This one is a solid contender, and you went out of your way to support a ton of body types. I'm assuming this hooks into previous Christmas content, otherwise the intro is a bit iffy. Good work!

 

[Frogapus]

Right at the buzzer!

Here's some Holiday Cheer with my favorite adorable monkey girl, Embry!

The poor thing's been so neglected since her writer left, that I wanted to give her a happy holiday with the PC.

Be prepared for a ridiculous level of sweetness! (Plus blowjobs, snowballing, cuddles, and cookies)

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1s8avM8ydRDtYcFzrAXu7UmLcfpGfTHH26yMba8l9JTg/edit?usp=sharing

Fen Notes: You fucking nailed Embry (to my perceptions at least). Decent variety of scenes with a heartwarming cherry on top.

 

[Doujinshi]

First time doing something like this, hope people enjoy it.


Amber, won't you pull my sleigh tonight?
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rHdkD3kzoi1CfMoL8EI8_UvcRbZ4D2y__8U-pb854J0/edit?usp=sharing

Fen Notes: Okay, I seriously chuckled at Santa's elves being replaced by an army of cock-thirsty Mitzis. I don't think I can make use of it though. The text could use some editing to clean up a few trouble spots and smooth a few wrinkles, and the ending is a bit abrupt? Though of all the things I've turned away for such reasons, this would be the one I'd be most likely to try to salvage myself. Thanks!

 

[ScrungeyBungey]

Throwing this in at the last minute. My rushed rendition of "A Christmas Carol"
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1psWDGRQDaRL0fZMmKRYANxHObDAVdxDthh5hwKDvq9o/edit?usp=sharing
(The only requirement is that the PC must have a hard personality.)
(Note that there are two custom flags based off two choices that can be made during the event. They are simple 0 to 1 flags that decide a sex scene.)

Fen Notes: This was an amusing read, though I must admit to being fairly put off by the main figure being an it/they through the entire encounter.

 

[ArtisanOrlesian1994]

So many updates and stories, each one wonderful and sensual.

 

[Kalebthecat]

Hi! I imagined this dream as being playable by any character, so long as they have met Big-T; Steele starts the dream with a speciifc body to get around the issue of how the scene would work for players that have used lots of transformatives. Sorry if there a too many mistakes and grammar issues, I didn't have time to edit it unfortunately.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/13yOLNOvJfdkSsd5xKT41rmEKa0I8uTw4BTy4VcqBu0k/edit?usp=sharing

Fen Note: I feel like this had a really good setup, but there are just too many grammatical flaws to ignore. I won't be able to make use of it - which sucks because I really like the actual content as far as smut goes: transformation, slutification, going herm, breast growth... it's all 100% my jam.

Thanks for giving it a read! I'll keep all that in mind and keep my eye out for the next contest

 

[ArtisanOrlesian1994]

Kalebthecat your work is amazing, you fit the profile of a seasoned Tits Player

 

[ArtisanOrlesian1994]

I meant writer Kalebthecat

 

[Flourish]

Here we go. I'm nervous, but this is what I got. It's called A Naughty Night's Dream. As the name suggests; this is a dream sequence peace that focuses on gay sex. I hope you all enjoy it, and thanks for hosting this contest.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1T1g8ajEQiY_CI5Y9aTEmdvI7c9Q_CyuHxkbY8RCB0Vc/edit

Fen Notes: Hi Nervous, I'm Fen. This is more of a short story than proper content for the game - especially since it's written in past tense rather than present.

I understand. I hope it was still a good read at least, and thank you.

 

[ScrungeyBungey]

Throwing this in at the last minute. My rushed rendition of "A Christmas Carol"
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1psWDGRQDaRL0fZMmKRYANxHObDAVdxDthh5hwKDvq9o/edit?usp=sharing
(The only requirement is that the PC must have a hard personality.)
(Note that there are two custom flags based off two choices that can be made during the event. They are simple 0 to 1 flags that decide a sex scene.)

Fen Notes: This was an amusing read, though I must admit to being fairly put off by the main figure being an it/they through the entire encounter.

Yeah, to be honest, I was just trying to stay true to the book. I also found the use of "they" a bit disconcerting at some parts and if that's one of the glaring problems(other than syntax errors I'm sure) I'd happily change it. Thanks for the feedback!

 

[ArtisanOrlesian1994]

Reindeer Orgy

Title is self explanatory.
My entry for Jolly Sir Fenoxo.

Enjoy https://docs.google.com/document/d/.../edit?usp=drivesdk&ouid=116109385856818024908

Fen Note: Not quite there grammatically but still a pretty enjoyable read, even considering I'm not really into the gay stuff.

Reindeer Orgy

Title is self explanatory.
My entry for Jolly Sir Fenoxo.

Enjoy https://docs.google.com/document/d/.../edit?usp=drivesdk&ouid=116109385856818024908

Fen Note: Not quite there grammatically but still a pretty enjoyable read, even considering I'm not really into the gay stuff.

Thanks Mr Fen your work is splendidly stupendous. Thank you for liking my work. In the future I shall endeavour to improve my grammar. Have a nice dau, thank you

 

[Rosie10]

Hello there! This is Rosie, and this is my first time entering a contest like this or even writing porn tbh. Haha, anyway I tried to do a Hanukkah dream sequence with a dzaan named King. I figured Hanukkah isn't a holiday that's used very often in one of these things so I thought I'd give it a shot. Sorry if it's bad and stuff! ;-;
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1FZap-_FmPlmZsFSuFPyUaIYr1GhFoFZv-m5LbQ622Dg/edit?usp=sharing

Fen Notes: I enjoyed reading this one last night. 100% fetish bait for me. That said, I feel like it would've been better to have the PC's body shift slowly over the course of the events. It also doesn't read quite as cleanly as I'd like.

Oh ok! Thank you so much for the encouragement, I'm sorry it wasn't quite up to par! Your words have encouraged me to try harder in the future though, thank you very much!

 

[Autus]

Alright, I'll give this a shot.

• Korgonne Klaus: A fem-Steel dream sequence

Fen Note: Note my cup of tea, with all the murderous implications and whatnot.

Definitely can understand that. I actually wrote two versions of this story; one with Klaus being a misunderstood "gentle giant" type, and one that was far more brutish. In the end, I chose the latter to submit simply because I didn't like the flow of the former. Nonetheless, thank you so much for taking the time to read the story. I'll be sure to jump on the next contest with much more diverse entries.